最新高考英语写作专题辅导-写作基础[信息整合四招]PPT课件

信息整合四招,高考作文,特别是基础写作,提供的信息点多,但句数有限,熟练掌握以下四种整合信息的方法非常重要。,用介词短语合并句子有两种情况我们常常可以用到：(1)介词短语作定语,(2)介词短语作状语。,典型例题用介词短语将下列句子合并成一句。(1)Wastewaterismakingtheriverworseandworse.(2)Thewastewaterisfromafactory.(3)Thefactoryliesontheriver.合并：Wastewaterfromthefactoryontheriverismakingtheriverworseandworse.,课堂练习用介词短语合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.XiaxiTownisnotbigbutbeautiful.Ithasanareaofabout8squarekilometers.2.Thereisanoldtowerthere.Thetowerliesintheeastofthetown.Thereisariverbehindthetower.,3.(此题用并列结构合并)Thesunrisingfromtheriverwasverybeautiful.Yesterdaywetookabustheretovisitthetower.4.Westartedearly.Wewantedtoenjoythesunriseonthetopofthetower.5.Assoonaswegotthere,webegantotakephotos.,XiaxiTown,withanareaofabout8squarekilometers,isnotbigbutbeautiful.Intheeastofthetownliesanoldtower,behindwhichthereisariver.Thesunrisingfromtheriverwasverybeautiful,andwetookabustheretovisitthetoweryesterday.Westartedearlyforthepurposeofenjoyingthesunriseonthetopofthetower.Onarrivingthere,webegantotakephotos.,课堂练习,课外作业用介词短语合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Aprofessorgaveusatalkthismorning.HecamefromBeijingUniversity.HetalkedabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.2.HetoldusofhisowninterestingexperiencesoflearningEnglish.Welaughedalot.,3.Histalklastedanhour.Heaskedussomequestions.4.Histalkwasvividandinstructive.Ilearnedalotfromhistalk.5.Iwentbackhome.IdecidedtoworkhardatEnglish.,AprofessorfromBeijingUniversitygaveusatalkonhowtolearnEnglishwellthismorning.OnhearinghisowninterestingexperiencesoflearningEnglish,welaughedalot.Duringtheone-hourtalk,heaskedussomequestions.Ilearnedalotfromhisvividandinstructivetalk.Onmywaybackhome,IdecidedtoworkhardatEnglish.,课外作业,在写作中,正确使用非谓语动词,无疑为文章增色不少。非谓语动词包括不定式、现在分词和过去分词。使用时应注意以下几点：(1)不定式的动作发生在谓语动词之后(一般情况下,尽量用不定式的主动式)。,(2)现在分词表主动,该动作与谓语动词的动作同时发生或紧接着发生。(3)过去分词表被动,或表示该动词的动作在谓语动词的动作之前发生,或没有时间性。(4)现在分词的被动式表被动,与谓语动词的动作同时发生。,典型例题用非谓语动词将以下各组句子分别合成一句话。1.(1)Helookedup.(2)Hesawabirdinthetree.用不定式合并：Helookeduptoseeabirdinthetree.,2.(1)Idontliketheman.(2)Themaniswearingapairofdarkglasses.用现在分词合并：Idontlikethemanwearingapairofdarkglasses.,3.(1)Thetempleisvisitedbythousandsofpeopleeveryyear.(2)Itwasbuilt1,000yearsago.用过去分词合并：Thetemple,built1,000yearsago,isvisitedbythousandsofpeople.,课堂练习用非谓语动词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Imwritingtoyou.IwanttoexpressmysincerethankstoGoodMan.2.YesterdaymorningIwasknockeddownbyacar.Iwaswalkingontheroadatthattime.,3.Iwasseriouslyinjured.Icouldntstandup.4.Mr.Lisawwhathadhappenedtome.Hestoppedataxiandsentmetoahospital.5.Idontknowhisname.IcallhimGoodMan.,ImwritingtoyoutoexpressmysincerethankstoGoodMan.YesterdaymorningIwasknockeddownbyacarwhilewalkingontheroad.Seriouslyinjured,Icouldntstandup.Luckily,amanstoppedataxiandsentmetoahospitalwhenseeingwhathadhappenedtome.Notknowinghisname,IcallhimGoodMan.,课堂练习,课外作业用非谓语动词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.OnthemorningoflastSundayIwenttothepark.Iwantedtotakeawalkthere.2.Afteronehourswalk,Igottiredandsatdownonastonebytheroad.Iwantedtohavearest.,3.SuddenlyIsawanant.Shewastryinghardtomoveanotherantwhowasdead.4.Shefailedmanytimes.Shemanagedtocarryhimaway.5.Isawthatlittlecreaturesalsohavesincereloveashumanbeings.Iwasgreatlymoved.,在写作中,我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有and,but,or,nor,so，yet，for,aswellas,both.and,notonly.but(also),either.or,neither.nor,(and)then,since等。,典型例句用并列连词合并下列各组句子。1.(1)Heisafriendinword.(2)Heisafriendindeed;too.用aswellas合并：Heisafriendinwordaswellasindeed.2.(1)Iknowher.(2)Iamherbestfriend.用notonly.butalso合并：NotonlydoIknowher,but(also)Iamherbestfriend.,课堂练习用并列连词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Nowadays,alotofattentionisfocusedoneducation.Thefactthatmanychildrenfrommigrantworkersfamilieshavedroppedoutofschoolisignored.,2.Thesechildrenarewanderinginthestreetsandotherpublicplaces.Someofthemcommitcrimes,suchastheftandrobbery.3.Thegovernmentshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofprovidingeducationforallthechildren.Theaveragepeopleshouldbeawareoftheimportance,too.,4.Childrenfromnativefamiliescanenjoygoodeducation.Ihopechildrenfrompeasantworkersfamiliescanalsoenjoygoodeducation.5.Childrenfrompeasantworkersfamilyarepartofoursociety.Theywillalsoplayanimportantroleinbuildingourcountryinthefuture.,Nowadays,alotofattentionisfocusedoneducation,yetthefactthatmanychildrenfrommigrantworkersfamilieshavedroppedoutofschoolisignored.Thesechildrenarewanderinginthestreetsandotherpublicplaces,andsomeofthemevencommitcrimes,suchastheftandrobbery.,课堂练习,Thegovernment,aswellastheaveragepeopleshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofprovidingeducationforallthechildren.Ihopechildrennotonlyfromnativefamiliesbutalsofrompeasant-workersfamiliescanenjoygoodeducation.Childrenfrommigrantworkersfamiliesarepartofoursociety,andtheywillalsoplayanimportantroleinbuildingourcountryinthefuture.,课外作业用并列连词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Today,twoofmyfriendswentfishingbybike.Ialsowentfishingbybike.2.Westartedoffat6:00WegottoLongwangLakeat6:30.,3.Itwasalittlehot.Thefishdidntseemtohaveagoodappetite.Ionlygot10fishduringtheday.4.Wehadlunchinalittlerestaurantbythelake.Wereturnedhomeat5:30p.m.5.TiredthoughIwas,Ifelthappy.Ithoughtitwasoneofmymostmeaningfuldaysduringthesummerholidays.,TwoofmyfriendsandIwentfishingbybiketoday.Westartedoffat6:00andgottoLongwangLakeat6:30.Ionlygot10fishduringtheday,asitwasalittlehotandthefishdidntseemtohaveagoodappetite.Wehadlunchinalittlerestaurantbythelakeandreturnedhomeat5:30p.m.TiredthoughIwas,Ifelthappy.Ithoughtitwasoneofmymostmeaningfuldaysduringthesummerholidays.,课外作业,要使文章漂亮,在写作中不可能不使用主从复合句,最常用的从句是状语从句、主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和定语从句。,典型例句1.(1)Chinaisthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.(2)Everyoneknowsit.用定语从句合并：Aseveryoneknows,Chinaisthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.,2.(1)Itwasraininghard.(2)Wekeptonworking.用状语从句合并：Althoughitwasraininghard,wekeptonworking.,课堂练习用主从复合句合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Iliveinasmalltown.Itisabout20kilometersawayfromthecity.2.Inthepast,weplantedmanytreeshere.Now,notreescanbeseenexceptheavysmokeanddarkrivers.,3.Tenyearsago,manyfactorieshavebeenbuilt.Heavysmokeandwastewaterfromthefactoriesareletintotheskyandtheriverswithoutanythingdonetothem.4.Somemorefactoriesaregoingtobesetup.Peopletoldmethat.5.Thegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostopthetownfrombeingfurtherpolluted.Thisismyopinion.,Iliveinasmalltownwhichisabout20kilometersawayfromthecity.Althoughweplantedmanytreeshere,notreescanbeseennowexceptheavysmokeanddarkrivers.Thereasonisthatsincetenyearsago,manyfactorieshavebeenbuilt,fromwhereheavysmokeandwastewaterareletintotheskyandtheriverswithoutanythingdonetothem.Itissaidthatsomemorefactorieswillbesetuphere.Ithinkthegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostopthetownfrombeingfurtherpolluted.,课外作业用主从复合句合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.ThedroughtislikelytocontinuetillMayandnosubstantialrainfallisexpectedaheadoftherainyseason.Thedroughtstartedfromlastautumn.,2.Ithasleft18millionresidentsand11.7millionheadsoflivestockintheregionwithwatershortagesandcauseddirecteconomiclossof23.7billionyuan.Expertsestimate.3.Thegovernmentwouldorganizemorethan1,100engineersandworkersfromacrossthecountrytodigwellsinthecountryssouthwest.Itisreported.,4.Morethan1,600wellswillbedrilled.Theywillprovide200,000cubicmetersofdrinkingwaterperdayfor2millionpeopleand1millionheadsoflivestock.5.1,400ofthewellsareexpectedtofinishdiggingbyMay10.Oneoftheengineerstoldme.,Thedrought,whichstartedfromlastautumn,islikelytocontinuetillMayandnosubstantialrainfallisexpectedaheadoftherainyseason.Expertsestimatethatithasleft18millionresidentsand11.7millionheadsoflivestockintheregionwithwatershortagesandcauseddirecteconomiclossof23.7billionyuan.,课外作业,Itisreportedthatthegovernmentwouldorganizemorethan1,100engineersandworkersfromacrossthecountrytodigwellsinthecountryssouthwest.Morethan1,600wellswillbedrilled,whichwillprovide200,000cubicmetersofdrinkingwaterperdayfor2millionpeopleand1millionheadsoflivestock.Oneoftheengineerstoldmethat1,400ofthewellsareexpectedtobefinisheddiggingbyMay10.,一、合并句子用以上四种手段合并下列各组句子,然后将这5组句子组成一篇通顺自然的短文。1.AtrafficaccidenthappenedatthecrossroadofYuanlinRoad,YangguangTown.Theaccidenthappenedat9:00a.m.onFebruary.,2.Ataxicrashedintotheleftsideofatruck.Itcausedonedeathandtwoinjuries.3.Thetruckdriverwasslightlyinjured.Thetaxidriverwaskilledandthepassengerinthetaxiwasseriouslyinjured.,4.“Thetaxididntstopatthetrafficlights.Itwentonrunningatahighspeedwhentheredlightwason.”saidawitness.5.Thepolicewanttoknowtherealreason.Therealreasonisbeinginvestigated.,AtrafficaccidenthappenedatthecrossroadofYuanlinRoad,YangguangTown,at9:00a.m.onFebruary.Ataxicrashedintotheleftsideofatruck,causingonedeathandtwoinjuries.Thetruckdriverwasslightlyinjured,butthetaxidriverwaskilledandthepassengerinthetaxiwasseriouslyinjured.“Thetaxididntstopatthetrafficlightsbutwentonrunningatahighspeedwhentheredlightwason.”saidawitness.However,therealreasonisbeinginvestigated.,一、合并句子,1.昨天,我们在班里进行了一场讨论。1.Yesterdaywehadadiscus