非谓语动词在写作中的应用

Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用,非谓语,不定式（todo),V-ing,V-ed,asanoun,asadj.oradv.,现在分词,动名词,过去分词,非谓语动词的分类,使用条件,一个句子当中，已经存在一个主句（谓语动词）,又没有连词的情况下,还有别的动词出现时,这些动词就充当了非谓语动词.,非谓语动词的,1Whileshewasgettingme34(settle)intoatinybutcleanroom,theheadofthevillagewastyinguphishorseto2Forexample,theproverb,“pluckingupacrop32(help)itgrow”,isbasedonthefollowingstory.3Hespatitout,37(say)itwasawful.4Igotonthebusandfoundaseatneartheback,andthenInoticedaman18(sit)atthefront.,高考链接,settled,宾补,tohelp,目的,saying,伴随状语,sitting,宾补,5therewasonlyaverysmallamountofunfairnessintheworld,buteveryoneaddedalittle,always25(think)thatitwasonlysmallandnotveryimportant。6Footballisplayedinmorethan80countries,(make)itthemostpopularsportaroundtheworld.,thinking,伴随状语,making,Ving结果状语,找出非谓语动词，并判断成分,1.Smokingisnotallowedinthemeetingroom.2.Toplayfootballisveryinterestingforthosekids.3.ThecoverofabookentitledWizardcaughtmyattention.4.Whoisthemanshakinghandswithourteacher?,v-ing作主语,不定式作主语,V-ed作后置定语,V-ing作后置定语,5.Scoldedbyhermother,thelittlegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead.6.Moreandmorepeopledrivecarstowork,placingmuchpressureonthetraffic.7.LiNahaswontheFrenchOpen，becomingthefirstAsiantowinaGrandSlam.8.Tohelpmydisabledaunt，Ispendanhourworkinginherhouseeveryday.,过去分词作状语,V-ing作结果状语,V-ing作伴随状语,不定式作目的状语,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致,1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.,Seenfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.,Correction,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,2、用V.ing短语充当主语、表语和宾语,2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.,Inmyopinion,climbingmountainisanenjoyablething.,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,3、主动、被动含义混淆,3.Whichteamisgoodatcooking?Ateamcallingthesuppercook.,Ateamcalledthesuppercook.,1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,iseasytounderstand,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,3.Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters.Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,真题例证,非谓语动词在基础写作中的实际运用,(2014)人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（RichardAvis）出生日期：1974年12月1日目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人,Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文),Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句,1RichardAviswasbornonDecember1,1974.,2Heaimsatunderstandingwhatasuccessfullifemeansindifferentcultures.,3Hehasbeenlookingfortimetwinsaroundtheworldsince2011.,1RichardAviswasbornonDecember1,1974.2Heaimsatunderstandingwhatasuccessfullifemeansindifferentcultures.3Hehasbeenlookingfortimetwinsaroundtheworldsince2011.,Step3：合并句子,Sentence1:,BornonDecember1,1974,RichardAvishasbeenlookingfortimetwinsaroundtheworldsince2011,aimingatunderstandingwhatasuccessfullifemeansindifferentcultures.,.2009广东高考基础写作：你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:时间:上周末对象:眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授主题:我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题,基本信息:（1）发生率:略高于50（2）人数:世界第一,1.Slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted.2.Itranksthefirstintheworld.,Step1：拆分成两个简单句(中文),Step2：分别翻译这两个简单句,1.略高于50的中国学生患有近视2.这在世界排名第一,合并句子,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sightedanditranksthefirstintheworld.,2非限制性定语从句,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,Whichranksthefirstintheworld.,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.,3非谓语,1并列句,2.2010广东高考基础写作：受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿因二手烟死忙人数：超过10万/年,1.Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke2.itcauses100,000deathsayear.,Step1：拆分成两个简单句(中文),Step2：分别翻译这两个简单句,1.并列句Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmokeanditcauses100,000deathsayear.,合并句子(并列句,非限制性定语从句,非谓语,2.非限制性定语从句Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke，whichcauses100,000deathsayear.,3.非谓语Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,causing100,000deathsayear.,(2013)志愿者观点厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活1)because原因状语从句Becausethevolunteersgettiredoflivingontheearth，theyhavebeenlookingforwardtoexperiencingthelifeontheMars2)非谓语Gettingtiredoflivingontheearth,thevolunteershavebeenlookingforwardtoexperiencingthelifeontheMars.,Conclusion:,基础写作中，常用分词短语作定语或者结果、伴随状语。,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Homework,Thankyouforlistening!,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theych