高考英语书面表达写作技巧训练公开课课件(共27张)

1、This way, follow me,写作技巧指导与训练,Five Skills Jingle 五字口诀,一 二 三 四 五,Keep A Neat Answer Sheet,Remember,个被动句/形式主语It句型；,个非谓语；,个从句句子；,个连词；,个高级短语+句型,Welcome to my class.,First of all, lets have fun together.,1.heart flower angry open 2. One car come one car go, two cars pengpeng, people died. 3.If you want m

2、oney, I have no; if you want life, I have one!,Guess?,那些中式英文表达,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center) 的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1本人简介； 2求助内容： 3约定时间； 4你的联系方式 (Email：；Phone：12345678)。 注意：1词数100左右： 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3结束语已为你写好。,Sample Article,Read the compositions, and then tell me

3、 which one do you think writes much better. Give at least two reasons. Underline the well-written sentences and circle some good transitional words. (3 minutes),Dear Sir, How are you getting along? Im Li Hua, a student from China who is taking summer courses in your university. Now, I have met so mu

4、ch trouble that I have to turn to the Learning Center for help. Your precious advice will be highly appreciated. As you know, people who is far away from home often feel homesick, so do I. I think the reason why I miss home is that I am so lonely and lack friends here. Besides, its difficult for me

5、to adapt to the foreign culture and food here. Even I cant take care of myself in daily life. I dont know what I should do the following days. Whats more, no matter how great efforts I make, I find it not easy to understand the lessons given in English, because my English is so poor. Could you pleas

6、e tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my learning easier. If its convenient for you, can I make an appointment on next Friday afternoon in the Center? Reply can call at 12345678 or send Email to . Looking forwards to you reply. Yours,Marking Standard (评分标准): 第五档(21-25分)：完全

7、完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,连接词,语言地道，规范,Writing Skills,Five Skills Jingle 五字口诀,一 二 三 四 五,Keep A Neat Answer Sheet,Remember,个被动句/形式主语It句型；,个非谓语；,个从句句子；,个连词；,个高级短语+句型,Skill The V

8、ariety of the Subject 主语多样性,How to improve our English? First, we should read more magazines and newspapers every day. Secondly, we can watch some English-speaking TV programs and movies. Thirdly, we can make more foreign friends., More English magazines and newspapers should be read to help us form

9、 the habit of thinking in English.,主动不如被动妙,more view,2. 句型：It is necessary/ important/ useless/ a must/ a good way for us to do, It is a good way for us to watch some English-speaking TV programs and movies, which can broaden our horizons.,Secondly, we can watch some English-speaking TV programs and

10、 movies.,3. 非谓语 v-ing Thirdly, we can make more foreign friends., Making more foreign friends is also helpful, who can assist us to practise our spoken English and let us know what we can not learn in our class.,Skill Nonfinite Verbs 非谓语,Opening blogs can help us release our study stress. To solve t

11、he problem, some measures should be taken.,Skill Three Clauses 三大从句,Noun Clause 名词性从句 I dont know how I can improve my English.,2. Attributive Clause 定语从句 Blogs provide us a good stage where we can show our talents and feelings.,3. Adverbial Clause 状语从句,If winter comes, will spring be far behind?,If

12、 chances come, will success be far away?,No matter how difficult it is, I will try my best to overcome it.,Skill Transitional Words and Phrases 连词,Whats more/Besides/ Whats worse,1. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat. 2._can reading enrich our mind, _ broaden our horizons.,Not

13、 only,but also,Skill Outstanding Phrases and Sentence Patterns 高级短语及句型,1.It is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. 2. The importance of reading can never be too stressed. 3.Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy. 4.The harder you study, the more progress you will make. 5.

14、Reading is to our mind what exercise is to our body.,Practice,近几年，SARS、禽流感等疫情大肆流行，威胁着人类的健康。请你根据以下图片，以“How can we keep healthy?”为题，为校英语报写一篇120字左右的短文，阐述青少年应该如何提高自身的免疫力，从而远离疾病保持健康。注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词： 增强免疫力 strengthen immunity,P1.,P2.,P3.,Brain Storming,It is high time that /for us to do; (keep) a bala

15、nced/ healthy diet; provide/supply enough nutrients to;,enough sleep/ sleeping enough; be beneficial to; its necessary/a must to; Sleeping is to our body what gas is to an engine.,take exercise; keep fit and energetic the more the more only 倒装句 protect from,How can we keep healthy? In recent years,

16、some diseases, like SARS and bird flu, are threatening our human beings life. It is high time that teenagers should strengthen their immune system. To have a healthy lifestyle is of great importance. First of all, a balanced healthy diet is a must for teenagers, which provides the body with differen

17、t nutrients to be stronger enough to fight many diseases. Besides, sleep is necessary for our health. As we know, sleeping is to our body what gas is to an engine. It can guarantee us sufficient energy to study hard next day. Finally, to keep fit, it is very necessary to take more exercise. You know, the importance of exercise can never be too stressed. We need to do more like jogging and running, which can keep us live and energetic.