写好建议信课件

1、how to write a letter for advice,chris 2011.9.21,写作要点,1.建议信 作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2.对象 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。,3.基本框架： 开头（beginning）- 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea) 主体(body)- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。(reasons and evidence) 结尾(ending)- 呼应开头，重申观点。(restate yo

2、ur opinion.),4.注意事项： 1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。 3）符合英文信件的基本格式,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何 才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点： 参加中文学习班； 看中文书刊、电视； 学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友。 注意：可适当增加细节，开头语已给出。 dear peter, im glad to receive your l

3、etter asking for my advice on how to learn chinese well. best wishes, yours， li hua,第一步：审题 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,第一人称,一封信,说理逻辑性,一般现在时,如何学好中文,第二步：搜索相关词组或句型,咨询如何学好中文,1. 参加中文学习班,2. 看中文书刊、电视,3. 学唱中文歌,4. 交中国朋友,take chinese courses,read books, magazines, newspapers in chinese, w

4、atch tv, see movies,sing chinese songs,make chinese friends,润色,1. take chinese courses,learn from the teachers practice with your fellow students learn more about chinese history and culture make more friends,2. read books, magazines, newspapers in chinese, watch tv, see movies,broaden our horizons

5、practice our chinese learn more about chinese history and culture,3. sing chinese songs,learn and remember chinese words more easily give much fun to us,4. make chinese friends,tell you a lot about china and help you learn chinese,常用套语,表先后次序： first, second, third.finally firstly, secondly，eventually

6、 to begin with/ to start with, at last 递进关系： furthermore; moreover; besides; meanwhile; in other words; at the same time；,注意衔接词使用:,dear peter, im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn chinese well. i will try to make some suggestions here. as far as im concerned, it would

7、be wise to take the following actions: first, it is important to take a chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. in addition, it also helps to watch tv and read books, newspapers, and magazines in chinese whenever possible.,besides, it shoul

8、d be a good idea to learn and sing chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember chinese words more easily. whats more, you can also make more chinese friends, who will tell you a lot about china and help you learn chinese. try writing to me in chinese next time. i hope youll find thes

9、e proposals useful, and i would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details. good luck with you! yours sincerely, li hua,适当运用模板,dear _, you have asked me for my tips concerning_(问题), and i will try to make some suggestions here. as far as im concerned, it would be wise to take the

10、 following actions: first, _(建议一); in addition_(建议二); whats more _(建议三). i hope youll find these proposals useful, and i would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details. good luck with you! yours sincerely, li ming,dear bob, im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on

11、 how to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions. first, it is important to . then, it also helps to . besides, it should be a good idea to . you can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) as to , i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). in addition, (其他建议). im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心). im looking forward to (表达愿望). sincerely yours, li hua,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. ending 小结；呼应主题,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,不推荐字体,优秀作文范例1,优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。,优秀作文范例2,优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语