广东高考基础写作--人物

1、基 础 写 作-人物篇,基础写作提示： 基础写作首先定位文篇时态 人物传记(生平) 的时态应为过去时,人物描写技巧: 1. 概况 （尽量用同位语或分词结构，使文章简洁，通顺) 如； 1) XXX was born into a family(家庭）in (地点）on （时间）. 2）Born in on Nov. 7 ，1867, XXX is a great . (过去分词作状语/定语) 3) XXX, the son of a poor family, was born in . on . (同位语）,Eg:1.Abraham Lincon, the son of a poor famil

2、y, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. 2.Born in Maryland, USA in 1985,Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.,一月：January 简写Jan. 二月：February 简写Feb. 三月：March 简写Mar. 四月：April 简写Apr. 五月：May 简写May. 六月：June 简写Jun.,七月：July 简写Jul. 八月：August 简写Aug. 九月：September 简写Sep. / Sept. 十月：October 简写Oct. 十一月：Novembe

3、r 简写Nov. 十二月：December 简写Dec.,钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一个富裕之家, 他是我国航天事业（ Astronomy industry ）的先驱.,Quan Xuesen was born in a wealthy family in Hangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911 and he was the pioneer of Chinas Astronomy industry. (并列句) Quan Xuesen , the pioneer of Chinas Astronomy industry, was bor

4、n in a wealthy family in Hangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911. (同位语),Quan Xuesen, who was born in a wealthy family in Hangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, was the pioneer of Chinas Astronomy industry. (定语从句) Quan Xuesen , born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, w

5、as the pioneer of Chinas Astronomy industry. (非谓语作定语),2.【介绍年龄:】 1. 17岁的女孩: a 17-year-old girl, a girl of seventeen, 2. 在17岁时: at the age of 17, aged 17,B.外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语) 如: XXX is 18 years old. He is about 1.74 metres tall and weighs 65 kilograms. XXX is a person with a height of 1.64 metres and a

6、 weight of 48 kilograms. XXX is a good-looking woman with long hair and big eyes. In addition to being confident, she is also attractive and sensitive.,4. Education background. be admitted to.university (考取大学) graduate fromdepartment ofuniversity (从某大学某系毕业) gain scholarship 获得奖学金 get good grades获得好成

7、绩 get/receive a bachelor/ master/ doctors degree 获取学士/硕士/博士学位 主修. major in,教育经历 (注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼) 如； 1）Majoring in Science, he graduated from Oxford University, and then he went abroad for further studies. 2）Having graduated from Oxford University, he went to America for further education and rece

8、ived a doctors degree. 3) After graduating,5.Big events in ones life (in order of time) work as . 从事工作 choose sth as his/her career 选择作为职业 break the world record of 打破的世界纪录 be elected to. 当选 be given the title of. 获得称号 gain/win the first prize/ place / champion 获得一等奖/第一名/ 冠军 win the Nobel (Peace) Pr

9、ize = be awarded a Nobel (Peace) Prize 获得诺贝尔(和平)奖,E.g. 1. In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2008 CCTV Moving China Award . 2.In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal, LiuXiang became the idol of the youth.,定语从句,分词短语,生平事迹:尽量用复合句或非谓语动词短语.,生平 (尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等

10、，润色文章)如； 1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music. (not onlybut also倒装句) 2）He set a new Asian record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team. (定语从句) 3）So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to our human cause. ( sothat .倒装句) 4）With gre

11、at determination and perseverance, he took 37 years to finish the book, which made a great contribution to China. (with 结构),6.Evaluation (评价) think highly of set a good example to famouswell known at home and abroad make great contributions to. 评价:尽量运用短语.,褒奖评价 （注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组）如； 1）Leifeng set us

12、 a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him . 2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man. 3）Li Shizhen made great contributions to Medical literature.,Allan Stewart, an Australian old man, born on March 7, 1915,

13、 is already the holder of the world record for being the oldest graduate. He thinks it is never too late to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. He got his first degree in 1936, later along with a doctors degree of medicine. He decided to study law in his eighties, and he got the maste

14、rs degree in 2006, which was his third degree. In 2012, he received his fourth degree by network learning, who was praised for his proper arrangement on his study schedule.,Jeremy Lin was born in California, US on August 23rd, 1988 with 191 cm in height. When he was in high school, Jeremy Lin led his school team to win the state championship. After graduating from Harvard University, he began to play in the NBA in 2010 and he signed a contract with the New York Knicks in 2011. In February 2012, Jeremy Lin