初中英语作文讲解

1、初中英语作文高分秘诀1. 动笔之前，认真审题中考考试说明指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2. 围绕中心，拟定提纲书面表达评分原则有四条：（1）内容要点；（2）运用词汇和结构的数量；（3）运用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己

2、的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。3. 语言通顺，表达准确(1) 避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。(2) 多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适

3、当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1) 语态、时态要准确无误。2) 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。4) 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如： 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。 . B. 省略号 C. 顿号 、 无(4) 描写人物时，要生动具

4、体，例如：1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2) 服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3) 内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4) 感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5) 动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。(5) 上下文要

5、连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：1) 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or 2) 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however 3) 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past

6、, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that 4) 表示空间关系的过渡词：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside 5) 表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as 6) 表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still,

7、 yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though 7) 表示递进关系的过渡词： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again 8) 表示因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result9) 表示解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually 10) 表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, ne

8、cessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 11) 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 12) 表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as 13) 表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all,

9、 in a word, generally speaking 4. 不会表达，另辟蹊径中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(1) 迂回而行当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。(2) 小词大用汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这

10、些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3) 借花献佛有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。5. 锦上添花，量力而行如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1) 句型多样化，不要I（We）到底，使人觉得乏味。(2) 适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。(3) 进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。(4) 适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。(5) 偶尔使

11、用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。(6) 适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7) 上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。6. 书写工整，卷面整洁字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。7. 写完之后，勿忘检查中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1) 格式是否有错。(2) 拼写有无错误。(3) 语言是否用错。(4) 时态、语态错误。(5)

12、标点错误。(6) 人称是否用错。【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动，以免顾此失彼，影响全局。总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。(一)掌握技巧：(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局开始部分(opening paragraph)说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分(Body paragraphs)围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。(2)确定主题句主题句是对全文的概

13、括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点：归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点提炼出一句具有概括性的话主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。(二)巧用连接词要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词表示罗列增加First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finallyFor one thingfor another,On (the) one handon the other hand,Besides / wh

14、ats more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,Especially / In particular,表示时间顺序now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with,later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that

15、 moment, as soon as, the momentform now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,till, notuntil, before, after, when, while, as during,表示解释说明now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreoverfurthermore, in fact, actually表示转折关系but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the c

16、ontrary, on the otherhand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, ofcourse, after all,表示并列关系or, and, also, too, not onlybut also, as well as, bothand, eitheror, neithernor表示因果关系because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to, due to, therefore, as aresult (of), ot

17、herwise, sothat, suchthat表示条件关系as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless表示让步关系though, although, as, even if, even though, whetheror, however, whoever,whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when,whom)表示举例for example, for instance, such as, takefor exampl

18、e表示比较be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)just like,just as,表示目的for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,表示强调in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,obviously, above all,表示概括归纳in a word, in short, in brief, on

19、the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as faras I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in1考生列举出解决问题的多种途径:1.问题现状 2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -(说明A的现状).Second, -(举例进一步说明现状)

20、Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, -(解决方法一). For another -(解决方法二). Finally, -(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -(带来的好处).2.观点型作文：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自

21、己的看法。1.有一些人认为。2.另一些人认为。3.我的看法。Thetopicof-(主题)isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit.SomeeoplesayAisheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof-(支持A的理由一)Whatismore,-理由二).Moreover,-(理由三).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-(支持B的理由一).Sec

22、ondly(besides),-(理由二).Thirdly(finally),-(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink-(我的观点).Thereasonisthat-原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat-(观点一).Forexample,theythink-(举例说明).Anditwillbringthem-(为他们带来的好处).Inmy

23、opinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,-(我不同意该看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,-(反对的理由之二).FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat-(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).3.作文的框架as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthetable(graph/picture/pie/chart), _作文题目的议题_ has been on rise/ decrease (goe

24、sup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from_ in _to _ in _. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasons accounting for _.Ontheonehand, _. Ontheotherhand,_ is duetothefactthat _.Inaddition,

25、 _ is responsiblefor _.Maybetherearesomeotherreasons toshow _.Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonly convincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,I hold the point of view that _.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.1：投诉信 Dear_, I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afrai

26、d that I have to make a complaint about_. The reason for my dissatisfaction is _(总体介绍). In the first place,_(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, _(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it _(感觉) to _(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果). I appreciate it very much if you could_(提出建议和请求), preferably _(进一步的要求), and I would like to

27、 have this matter settled by _(设定解决事情最后期限). Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming 2：询问信 Dear _, I am _(自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_.(要询问的内容) First of all, what are _?(第一个

28、问题) Secondly, when will_?(第二个问题) Thirdly, is _?(第三个问题) I would also like to inquire _(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. Yours sincere

29、ly Li Ming 3：请求信 Dear_, I am writing to formally request to_(请求的内容) The reason for _is that_（给出原因）.I_, so I _(给出细节) I would also like to request _(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to

30、contact me at_(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming 初中英语写作范文集锦一围绕：学校让学生打扫厕所和学校不让学生打扫厕所两种情况。写一不少于80个词的主题为“孩子的独立教育”英语作文。给出词：only child， moral educationnowadays in china， many students are the only child in their family. they are the apple of their parents eyes or even th

31、eir granparents， so they are free of any house work or menial labor. and moral education is no more than some bookish thing. studentsare largely dependent on their parents and teachers.to educate them to be independent， the most effective way is to let them experience on their own. therefore，they ar

32、e better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room，which can be regarded as part of the moral education.范文：关于国庆节的英语作文例1National Day is coming，and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.Its a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week. We

33、are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.Were visiting Tianya Haijiao，Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think well have a good time there.国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。例2National Day HolidaysI went to my cou

34、sins house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant；She said shes worrying about getting fat，but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that hell educate his child in a severe way，with a future fathers mat

35、ureness.Im happy for them.：）Yesterday，our research schools soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half，but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half，so，we lost the game.Half of the National Day holi

36、days have passed bylife still goes with good and bad times.范文：中学生该不该上网（2）最近你们学校要举行一次“中学生该不该上网”的讨论。你是赞成者之一，认为我们不应该因噎废食。请根据下表内容写一篇发言篇。要求：字数100词左右注意：不要逐句翻译。益处 1.看国内外新闻，获取信息。2.发e-mail，打电话。 3.上网络学校，阅读各种书籍，自学外语。 4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌等游戏，网上购物，丰富我们的生活。 5.提高我们操作电脑的能力 注意事项1不要沉湎于（be given to）上网以免影响生活和学习。2不要上不健康的网站

37、。 参考范文：In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks. As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We can send e - mails

38、or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends. We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English. We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet. We can even do shopping on line. Besides，we can improve our ability to opera

39、te the computer.But we should not be given to the Internet，or well get our life and study destroyed. Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites. Anyhow，this doesnt prevent the Internet becoming our friend. We cant throw away the apple because of the core，can we？范文：我的同学 My Classmate （3）请以“My Cla

40、ssmate”为标题写一篇记叙文要求：1、主题明确，语言流畅，思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。思路点拨：写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述，所叙述的内容要交代清楚，条理清晰，重点突出，主次分明，详略得当。这篇文章也是记叙文，主人公应该用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索，以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理，有真实感，叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行，同时加以点评。参考范文My ClassmateLiu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to h

41、elp others.One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived，a

42、nd he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.初中英语写作范文集锦二范文：介绍学生学习情况It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study. At present w

43、e learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses. We can study what we are interested in. In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects. And we can also study on the Internet.范文：A piano playerWhat do I want to do when Im older？ Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants

44、 to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And yo

45、u can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when Im ten years old. Now Im in grand five. I hope when Im sixteen years old ， I can become grand eight. Ill be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a

46、hard job. But I believe I can do it.范文：my dream placeThe winter vacation passed quickly. In those days， I have done some things. Playing， doing homework and so on. Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework. She thanked to me. Though， I was proud of myself. I also went over my English learnin

47、g. I think I have known more than before. In the new term， I will study hard.范文：The thing that Ill never forgetHow time flies！Im fifteen years now.During the long time，there was one thing that I will never forget.The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival，people usual

48、ly visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old，my family took the bus to my grandparents to say “Happy New Year” to them.In the bus，I had a good seat.At 7：30，the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time，there was no seat.But she must look after her baby

49、carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down，but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly，a little boy behind me，stood up and made room for

50、 the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled，too.When I told my cousin about it after that，he said “The child is the father of a man.” Im very ashamed.Why couldt I do the same thing as the little boy did？From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who nee

51、d help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others，the world will become much more beautiful！范文：怎样学习英语 How to study English？作文一：Study English，You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English. This isnt easy，since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends

52、 with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue. Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership （where English is in use at least some of the time） is，for many people，even better. If nothing like this is accessible，you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.你需要常常和英语教师以外的人士用英语交谈。这当然很不容易，因为与母语相同的人自由交谈时，彼此若用英语交谈总会觉得很不自在。亦可参加英语俱乐部或国际会员的俱乐部（至少有时使用英语沟通），这样对很多人而言更有益。如果没有合适的社团可加入，也不妨考虑任何足以提高英语能力的机会。作文二：There are four key points to study English：liste