2020 2021年 英语中考英语书面表达20附带答案解析经典

1、2020-2021年 英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)经典 一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析） 1 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄 化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。 状现 To: lihua china. com From: bill006 america. com Subject: Your dream job 70%学生眼睛近视大约 主要原因 1. 睡眠不足 2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等 预防方法 1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动 2. 养成正确的用眼习惯 你的观点 .（至少一条） shorts

2、ighted参考词汇：近视的 要求： 100180个。）词数：（ 2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（ 3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。（ The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_ _The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. 【答案】 At present, about 70% of the students are short

3、sighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We

4、can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them. 【解析】 【详解】这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三1.not enough2.长时间看）人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：睡眠不足（for

5、a long time1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育书、做作业、用电脑等（）防止近视的方法：eye exercises2.have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认养成正确的用眼习惯（）活动（I think ?try ；为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（ ones best to do sth.）。sb. spend some time doing sth.in order to do sth.try to do ，常用的重点句型和短语有： the importance ofsth.等。， 2书面表达“,”, ,让淄博人民万众一心小手拉大手志成城

6、同做文明人。众自创建文明城市文明乡村以来, ,写人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生给要点我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所 100 词左右的英语短文。一篇 1.种植花草树木； 2.遵守交通规则； 3.公共场合不大声喧哗； ,4.至少两点）公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥 obey make joint efforts : civilized 遵守文明的参考词汇共同努力 Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint 【答案】 . Their good be

7、havior can be seen everywhere.efforts（共同努力） As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others , we no longer talk safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light.

8、In addition（此外）or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering for a , we are accustomed to queuing up anywhere. Furthermore（排队）（而且）（习惯于）ticket or something

9、else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短run red obey the traffic rulesmake joint effortsas junior studentsfor example，语，例如，be in needand so onin publicwhats moreon a busno longerlightin addition，to

10、protect our environment, we plant flowers and queue upall in allaccustomed to等。而，trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语 的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

11、点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。 3书面表达a boarding schoola day school）两类学校的选择。你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（）和走读（“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利请你以 和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。 ;1001. 词左右（文章开

12、头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；词数注意： 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。 A hoarding school or a day school We are going to graduate from our middle school, _ 【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school

13、have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.

14、 As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school. 【解析】 【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，a boarding schoola day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙面临寄宿（）和走读（ 述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。 【详解】1.2.确定文章类型，记叙文？审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？

15、写作之前要3.4.写下关键词、短语、说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？确定时态，单一还是混合。5.6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。句型。关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自both kinds of、然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：If we choose a boarding schoolAt the same timeAs for me, I prefer a boarding schoolpay 、 attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。 【点睛】这类作文的写作方

16、法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要 清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。 4 诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友DamingLingling相约一起去电影院看电影，最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling很生但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此， Daming的道歉。气，并且不愿接受 “The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：请你就此事给校报投稿，以 Daming21一些建议。、谈谈自己的看法，并给、简述事件； 注意： 100801；、词

17、数 2、行文连贯，逻辑合理； 3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名； 4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 The Importance of Promise Dear editor,People always emphasize the importance of the promise, and they hate people who （强调） break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours, Tony The Importance of Promise【答案】 Dear

18、editor,People always emphasizethe importance of the promise, and they hate people who （强调） break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it t

19、hat day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Linglings anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming

20、 should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours, Tony 【解析】 【分析】本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲 之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。 【详解】首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经

21、过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议 是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。 【点睛】文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整butso，篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如， because of等，使文章更加通顺。 5 , Bill, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认你的美国笔友假如你是李华给你发了一封电子邮件 , 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。真阅读下面的邮件 Dear Li Hua, Our teacher told us China is developing fas

22、t. You are lucky enough to live in China. Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future? What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job? Drop a few lines if you have time.

23、 Best wishes, Bill , :1. 可适当发挥；要求参考提示语 , , 2. 书写工整；语句通顺意思连贯 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； , 70: 4.但不计入总词数）。不少于词（开头已给出词数 Dear Bill, Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _ _ Yours, Li HuaThank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my

24、 【答案】例文dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to

25、 make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream? Tell me about your ideal job! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。 【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子Bill提出问们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦

26、想，正在为此作出努力。最后向 题，结束全文。 【点睛】Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如本文首先开篇功能句becauseBesidesTo realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上， 口，不失为一篇佳作。 6书面表达,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣假如你是华 ,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。的家乡一安徴一游 : :,1安做省南部位置中国东部 ,:2.秋季凉爽气候春暖花开 : :3.山和古村落景点 :4.茶、黄梅戏文化 5.建议 Huangmei Ope

27、ra:黄梅戏提示词 80-100:1.词数注意 ,2.使行文连贯。可适当增加细节 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名 ,4.不计入总词数开头和结展己给出 Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? Dear Dave，【答案】I know you are interested in Chinese culture and Im g

28、lad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangsha

29、n, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, dont forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. Whats more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to

30、 understand and wont let you down! Welcome to Anhui! Im looking forward to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】Dave安徽一游，写信，邀请他来你的家乡这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此

31、写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些 复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。 【点睛】Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内Dave发出邀请，然后具容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确

32、，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take 句型，如some light coatsBesides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so 、on.Whats more, come and

33、watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you 、 Im looking forward to seeing you here!down!等。、 7书面表达Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按假如你是李明，你的英国笔友 e-mail。照以下提示给他回一封 内容如下： 1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气； 2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生； 3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。 haze参考词汇：雾霾 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

34、2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 803. 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。词数 Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze. _ _ Yours, Li Ming Dear Jack,【答案】Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your carin

35、g for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great numb

36、er of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell

37、the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 【解析】 【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙

38、述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以 穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。 【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的

39、时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，More and more people have to go to 长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the hazePeople all over the country are 、taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The

40、government suggests that people go to 、work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subwayIn addition, I will tell the 、 people I meet to protect the environment.等。 8 “”已成购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，网购为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网 上购物的文章。 1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累 缺点 disadvan

41、tage）（ 2.造成浪费容易购买大量不太需要的东西， 你的观点 你的做法你的烦恼 不必在意，相信自己个头不高，相貌平常优点 2.价格通常比较便宜 advantage）（ 3.可供选择的范围广，品种多 1.看不到商品本身只看到图片， causeshopping online; goods; 导致商品提示词汇：网购 1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；注意： 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称； 1003.词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。词数： With the development of the Internet, many people are used t

42、o shopping online. With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has 【答案】 become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors.

43、 You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods that

44、arent like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping ople to buy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money.online may cause pe All in all, I love shopping online. 【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时 态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表

45、达符合英语习convenientdisadvantagein ，惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如good qualityfigure outhave the chance to dobe attacked byof coursetake care of， 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此

46、选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。 9中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写 一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。 学会沟通，友善待人父母不理解，朋友少 （自主发挥

47、，至少两点）学习压力大，课外活动少 1001. 左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要求：词数 2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Hello everyone, Hello everyone, about my problems and how I deal with them.I am Li Hua. Id like to talk Thats all. Thank you! Hello everyone,【答案】 I am Li Hua. Id like to talk about my problems and

48、how I deal with them. I am not very tall and very common. But I dont care and I believe in myself.My parents dont understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I dont hav

49、e many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies. Thats all. Thank you! 【解析】试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包 含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上