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1、How to describe a place,基础写作技巧指导,地点描写,Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists, what subjects (主题）will you introduce ?,Possible subjects：,1.介绍地理位置（Location） be located in be situated in lie in 坐落于脚下/顶部 stands at the foot of/ on the top of,常用词语,1. 日本在中国的东方。 2.新教学坐落在学校的中央。,翻译,Japan is/l

2、ies to the east of China.,The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.,3.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。,China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world.,2.介绍人口（Population）:,has a population of, （a city） with a population of,Beijing, the capital of China, is

3、a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.,北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）,3.介绍面积（Area）,has/covers an area ofsquare kilometers （a city） with an area ofsquare kilometers,城镇 面积 100多平方公里,Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers,4.介绍历史（History）:,has a long history (of years) with a

4、 long history (of years),历史悠久,中国有5000 多年的悠久历史。,China has a long history of more than 5000 years.,5.介绍交通（Transportation）,take a bus, a train or a plane to go to by bus/train/plane,坐汽车、火车、飞机到,交通便利 has convenient transportation （a city） with convenient transportation both on land and water,随着经济的发展 经济迅速

5、发展 economy has been developing rapidly,6、介绍经济（economy）,With the development of economy,7. 名胜古迹,有很多名胜古迹： places of interest/ historical spots,xxx, known as ,attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.,香港，被誉为“东方之珠”，每年都吸引大量来自世界各地的游客。,Hongkong , known as “a Pearl of the East”, attracts a lot

6、of tourists from all over the world.,be famous/well-known for its/as a ,以/作为而出名,杭州以美丽的西湖出名。,Hangzhou is famous for beautiful West Lake.,be home to ,的栖息地、家园,这个岛屿是各种鸟儿的栖息地。,This island is home to all kinds of birds.,一些其它表达方式：,自从以来，发生了很大变化 Since,great changes have taken place ,自然资源丰富 be rich in natural

7、 resources,1.请写100个词左右的短文，介绍你的祖国-中国 要点如下： 中国具有悠久的历史和文化 地理位置、面积和人口情况 美丽的山川。长江是世界上最长的河流之一，长城是 世界七大奇观之一 人民勤劳勇敢。他们的勤奋和智慧在过去的二十年里 给中国带来了巨大的变化,My motherland-China is a great country with a long history and rich culture. It lies in the east of Asia, with an area of 9,600,000 square kilometers and a populat

8、ion of 1.3 billion. Beijing is her capital. There are many beautiful mountains and rivers, as well as rich nature resources in China. The Changjiang River, as we all know, is among the longest rivers in the world, and the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders on the earth. The Chinese people are ha

9、rd-working and brave people. Their hardwork and wisdom have brought great changes in China in the past 20 years.,My motherland- China,范文2：全国卷2006（I） 假定你是李华。应英国朋友 Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。 内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。注意：1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增减细节，以使 行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。June 8Dear Bob, Thank you for your last letter ask

10、ing about our library. _Best wishes, Li Hua,内容要点：1.图书馆的位置：前有花园，后有教学楼2.内部环境：宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等3.图书馆功能：借阅、借阅数量和借期4.开放时间5.合适的结尾,Dear Bob, Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building

11、 is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time an

12、d keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.,We all like our library very much.Best wishes.Li Hua,假如你是一名导游，请根据下面的介绍国的海南岛. 面积:约35 000平方公里 (中国第二大岛) 历史:6 000多年 人口:7 110 000左右,包括十个民族. 居民谋生方式:种水稻,捕鱼等. 气候:四季温和 风景名胜众多, 是著名的旅游胜地.,Assignment,Hainan Island When you come to Hainan, the second largest island in China, you will find it mild all the year round and the places of interest there are really a feast for eyes. It covers an area of 35000 square kilometers with a history of over 6000 years. The population of it is 7.11 million, whic