《中考书面表达应对策略》.ppt

1、中考英语书面表达应对策略,南京市伯乐中学 朱光成,何谓书面表达,书面表达是一种指导性写作，就是要求有必要的说明, 对写作的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等情景给予简要的提示; 情景可以通过图画、图表和文字提纲等形式来提供。与此同时，命题设计还需要注意给学生留下足够的发挥余地, 以展示他们的真实语言水平,语言技能五级目标中对写的具体要求,1.能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材 2.能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改 3.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系 4.能简单描述人物或事件 5.能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。,中考书面表达题的应试策略,重点讲解,一、熟悉书面表达的

2、考试题型,2012年南京市中考英语学科考试说明书面表达采用的题型：,1.根据提示的要点，写一篇80词左右的短文 2.根据所给的图画和提示用语，写一篇80词左右的短文 3.根据所给的图画和英文开头提示，写一篇80词左右的短文 4.根据对话或短文及范例，模仿写作。80词左右 5. 文章续写。80词左右,近几年中考书面表达常见题型介绍,1.根据提示的要点，写一篇80词左右的短文,例： 假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下： 表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； 感到担忧：造成环境污染等； 希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。,2.根据所给的图画和提示用

3、语，写一篇80词左右的短文,提示：这四幅图是公共场所常见的指示牌，表达了四种意思，请用简明的语言、正确的句子，将图的意思连贯地表达出来,并谈谈我们中学生应当怎么做。,近几年中考书面表达常见题型介绍,3.根据所给的图画和英文开头提示，写一篇80词左右的短文,A traffic accident One afternoon some students were on their way home from school. _,近几年中考书面表达常见题型介绍,二、熟练掌握中考书面表达的基本技巧和解题步骤,中考书面表达的基本解题技巧和步骤,一审,即审题 二写,即列提纲 三连,即连句成文 四改,即修改润

4、色全文,例题分析,进入初中学习将近三年了。回顾初中的成长过程，你一定有很多感受，请你从生活、爱好、学习等方面做出自我小结。词数：8O词左右。,审 确定主题，并对确定的主题引发联想。,定 定主体内容(谋篇布局),思展开合理的想象，适当发挥,1. 综述(首段）,I have studied in my middle school for nearly three years and I think I have had a very meaningful school life.,2.主体,I have learned a lot over the yearsI have learned not

5、only how to make friends but also how to talk to othersI have many hobbies, such as singing and swimmingI like sports, tooI often play basketball，football and volleyball with my friends. Of all my subjects, English and Chinese are my favouriteBut my Maths and Physics are a little weakI think I will

6、try my best to learn them wellI hope I can study in a key high school next term,3. 结尾,In a word, I love all my teachers and classmates, and I will never forget my meaningful middle school life.,话题思考,近年的中考书面表达题有哪些特点? 我们可以从哪些方面早做准备呢？,热点推荐,近年中考英语书面表达题 的特点分析,近年中考英语书面表达题特点,常以中英文提示作文、看图写作、图表作文等形式出现。 大部分题材

7、贴近学生生活，关注社会热点问题，诸如人口、环保、世界和平、和谐社会、希望工程、志愿者、慈善、救灾等方面的问题，涉及到学校及家庭生活、人们生活水平的提高、社会公益事业、文化体育交流等话题。,1.突出开放性,南京市2011年中考书面表达题 假如你是李平，准备参加学校组织的英语征文比赛。请根据下面所提供的信息，介绍今天在你校操场举行的“One for One”图书义卖活动的情况并谈谈你的感受。 This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our school. _ _,中考范文欣赏,This afternoon a char

8、ity sale was held on the playground in our school. Its purpose was to donate books to children in poor areas. If you bought one book, you gave a new one to a child in need at the same time. All the teachers and students took an active part in this activity. Everyone looked happy.,中考范文欣赏,As we know,

9、books are bridges to knowledge. If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more knowledge, he will have more chances of success. In this way, his life can be greatly improved.,2.突出时代性,淮安市2011年中考书面表达题 自贯彻“规范办学行为”以来，我们学生的学校生活发生了一系列变化。请根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语写一段话，词数在80-100之间，内容必须包括表格中的提示要

10、点。,中考范文欣赏,Great changes have taken place since the government did something to control school teaching. In the past, it took us more than 8 hours to have lessons in school. We spent more than 2 hours doing our homework and we also had to have extra classes on weekends or holidays. Our after-school a

11、ctivities were few and boring. We all felt tired about it.,中考范文欣赏,However, at present, it takes less than 7 hours to be in school. We neednt have extra lessons and can only spend less than one hour doing our homework. Our after-school activities are colourful, such as playing basketball, singing, da

12、ncing and drawing. Of course I like the changes to our school life and I think theyre quite good for us.,3.突出交际性,苏州市2011年中考书面表达题 假如你是苏华，你在加拿大的笔友John在做一个关于世界各国中学生如何过暑假的调查，他给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解一下有关情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。,中考范文欣赏,Dear John, Thank you so much for your e-mail. Im very happy to

13、 answer your questions. In China, we start our vacation at the beginning of July. It lasts about two months. We can do many things to relax ourselves in summer vocation. I often go swimming, surf the Internet and watch TV. I will go to a,中考范文欣赏,summer school for a month to study English because it i

14、s important and I like it. But what I want to do most is travelling with my parents. We have been to many places. This summer, we are going to Beijing. We always have a good time. I wish to visit you in Canada one day. Yours, Su Hua,4.突出教育性,扬州市2011年中考书面表达 在家庭里、在社会中，只要我们从自身做起，我们的行为就可以为实现和谐社会起到推进作用。你们

15、学校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（从自身做起）为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。,中考范文欣赏,We have grown up and its time for us to do something for our family and society. At home, we can help our parents do housework. Then our parents wont be so tired. We should also spend time chatting with them so that

16、parents and we can understand each other better. When we are out, its more important to,中考范文欣赏,pay attention to our behavior. To make the environment beautiful, we should pick litter up instead of dropping it. Besides, its bad manners to talk loudly in public places. Others will be disturbed. Finall

17、y, we should help those people in need and theyll live a better life. Im sure if each of us does our part, our family and society will be more harmonious.,2012年的中考书面表达题命题趋势：,进一步注重试题的时代性、开放性、教育性和交际性 更加注重与学生的实际生活相联系，突出语言的交际性功能，突出用英语做事的功能 给学生更多的思维想象和灵活运用所学语言知识的空间,我们在平时的英语复习和练习中，也应当关注时事、关注热点、关注社会，关注身边所发

18、生的事情，以保证中考书面表达时能有话可说，有话可议。,怎样才能写出一篇优秀文章,从而在中考书面表达题上获取高分呢？,话题思考,如何在中考书面表达题上获取高分?,难点评析,书面表达题的解题决窍,总体把握，要点齐全； 人称时态，逻辑清楚; 关键词汇，动词第一； 组词成句，结构完整; 组句成文，连词增色； 此路不通，绕道迂回； 字迹工整，留好印象； 从句适量，高分有望。,书面表达高分技巧,1.卷面整洁，书写工整排版合理 2.看清指导语。不多写漏写 3.准确第一，再求高雅 4.注意用好开头、结尾用语和关联词,常用关联词语,1.表层次: first, firstly, second, secondly,

19、 third, thirdly, what is more, also, and then, next, at first, at last, in the end, then /next /after that in addition, finally, on one hand., on the other hand.,常用关联词语,2.表转折 but, however, though, although, after all, luckily, unluckily， at the same time,常用关联词语,3.表递进 in addition, besides, moreover, whats more,常用关联词语,4.表因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, as a result (of),常用关联词语,5.表例证 for example, such as,常用关联词语,6.表总结 in a word, as we