高三英语二轮复习公开课求助信.ppt

1、高考备考书面表达,应用文专题 求助信,之,丰顺中学 高三19班,李洪庆,Step 1 analyze the requirements(认真审题) Step 2 draw up an outline(谋篇布局) Step 3 organize the sentences(联句成篇) Step 4 get the article polished up(锦上添花) Step 5 check the mistakes(查漏补缺),Five steps to write an English essay：,求助信的文章框架：,1.直言目的,2.描述困难,3.表达希望得到的帮助,（自我介绍）,（联系方

2、式）,1. ask for help/seek for help_ 2. encounter some problems_ 3. be faced with difficulties _ 4. offer some constructive guidance_ 5. be grateful to sb. for sth _ _ _ 6. offer sb. a hand _ 7. (做)某事有困难 _ 8. 给某人留下深刻印象_ 9. 设法成功做某事 _ 10. 进一步的消息_ 11. 请某人帮忙_ 12. 一次难忘的经历_,寻求帮助,遇到一些问题,面临困难,提供一些有建设性的指导,have

3、trouble in （doing ）sth.,给某人帮助,leave sb. a deep impression,manage to do sth.,further information,ask sb. a favor,an unforgettable experience,因某事感激某人,Recitation,提出请求帮助 1. 我想知道您是否能够 2. 如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。 阐明自己的问题 3. And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects. For one thing, . For another thi

4、ng, . 4 . Therefore, its my hope that you can give us some practical tips on how to . 表达谢意 5. 谢谢您一切的好意。,Useful patterns,1.I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.,2.I am encountering three problems which troubles me a lot. To begin with,Whats worse,What troubles me most i

5、s,3.Unfortunately, I find it quite difficult to do.,4.Faced with the above problems, I am eager to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on?,5. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.,【Sentence Correction】,1. The whole thing is

6、 getting very difficult and I real need your good advice!,real改为really,2. The main reason Im writing is that I have litte favour to ask.,little前面加a,3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters.,删掉the,4. I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurr

7、ing in this block.,what改为that/which,5. The people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night, making it very difficult for me to sleep.,loudly改为loud,6. Also, there is often rubbish leaving in the stairway.,leaving改为left,7. I would appreciate you if you would help me solve thes

8、e problems.,第一个you改为it,8. Were trying to find someone to look after the cats while we away.,away前加are,9. There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses.,go改为going,10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.,hear改为hearing,Dear Mr. Brown,

9、Im now safely back to home. Thanks you very much for all the kind I got from you during my stay. Hope everything are fine with you there. Now I wonder whether I could ask you favor. When I come back, I suddenly realized that I have left my English dictionary behind at your place.,Thank,kindness,is,_

10、,_,_, a,_,came,_,had,【Passage Correction】,It is an precious gift from my American teacher. Would you please be so kindly as to send it back to me? Ill pay for the postage. The dictionary must on the bookshelf in my bedroom. It is the one with a red cover. Thanks and all the best. Yours, Li Hua,a,kin

11、d,_,_, be,【Appreciation】,【2013新课标卷：请求帮助接机】 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30,【Structure】,Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city. Do you remember the C

12、hinese painting I promised you last year? My uncle will bring it to you soon. I hope you will like it. I wonder if you could do me a favour. This is the first time that my uncle visits the US, so I hope you can meet him at the airport. He arrives at 11:30 a.m. on August 6th and his flight number is

13、CA 985. I would appreciate it if you could take him to his hotel. My uncle is tall. He will be wearing dark glasses and a blue jacket. Thank you very much in advance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,写信目的,困难；问题,具体细节,感谢及回复,【Appreciation】,Translation,【2011山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】 作文原题 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友

14、Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1. 询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2. 谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3. 告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。,亲爱的Tom， 你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。 今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。 你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所

15、以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。 你的， 李华,Its been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you?,1. 你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。,2. 今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。,I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a

16、 very good performance, I am making preparations for it.,However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly.,3.然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。,4. 如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。,I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. /I would be very

17、 grateful if you could do me a favor.,You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.,5.你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。,6. 我等不及再次和你见面了。,I cant wait to see you again!,【模仿翻译】 Dear Tom, Its been a month since you studied in Beijing. How

18、is everything going with you? I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properl

19、y. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I cant wait to see you again! Yours, Li Hua,求助信写作三步走： 介绍自己、提出请求-说明原因及其它事项-表达谢意、期盼答复 Tips: 在许多情况下，求助信是写给不太认识的人或者机构，所以在信的开头可以做一下简单的自我介绍。同时

20、，由于提出的请求往往都是需要麻烦别人的事情，所以要注意语气的礼貌程度，不要吝啬你的感谢。,1正确把握时态,保证语言准确性-目前某方面存在困难一般现在时 - 描绘得到帮助后的进步一般将来时2. 熟悉常用句型,提高文章整体美感-首先做自我介绍，简要交待自己的困难,展望获得帮助后自己的进步,Attention,3. 贴切使用过渡性词汇,提高文章逻辑性-first, besides, whats more -in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also4. 适当使用高级表达方式,提高表达档次-“很难与朋友相处” 1).Its hard to

21、 get along with my friends. 2). I find it difficult to get along .,Sample 1：,Dear_, My name is _. Im _. I have met much difficulty in_. First, _. Whats worse /Worse still, _. Whats worst, _. Faced with / Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for help. Would you like to _ so that / in orde

22、r that _? In the meanwhile / Meanwhile, _. Also, I would like you to _ to _. Im sure that I can _ with your help. / I will be much appreciated if you help me to _. Thank you for your time. Yours _, _,Dear_, I am_(介绍自己的身份).I will/am_(与请求有关的自身现状)。Id like to_(阐明自己的请求). I will appreciate your_(有关该请求的详细信息). Im going to _(对方如能帮助实现请求，自己将要做些什么)。 He