初三英语书面表达常见题型及答题技巧及练习题(含答案)及解析

1、（英语）初三英语书面表达常见题型及答题技巧及练习题 ( 含答案 ) 及解析一、英语书面表达1 面表达假 你是某英文 “teenagers栏”目的 betty ，日前收到了lucy 的来信。她在信中 了她的 ， 你根据lucy 的来信，用英 写一封90 左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。dear lucy,i m sorry to know that you aren t allowed to read ebooks._all the best!betty【答案】 dear lucy,i m sorry to know that you aren t allowed t

2、o read ebooks.in recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. it is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. for one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. for another, their appearance will mak

3、e paper-waste less.however, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. for example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. and there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body.in my opinion, e-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but

4、its an useful product. i think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over. all the best!betty【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如in recent years ，as a productof， live in ， more and more ， so that， for example ， do harm to ， be harmful to ，in my opinion ， tak

5、e the place of ， instead of 等。同 for one thing, / for another,/ however, 等使短文的叙述很有条理，而 it is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / and there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body./ i think that e-books are be

6、neficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复 从句 构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多 化，是本文的最大亮点。在学 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，写作 就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有 性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。2 最近一份学生体 健康 果 示，学生近 率仍 持在高位

7、水平，且越来越低 化。 根据下表所提示的内容，用英 写一篇短文，并 表自己的 点。现 状大 70%学生眼睛近 1. 睡眠不足主要原因2. 看 、做作 、用 等1. 做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 防方法2. 养成正确的用眼 你的 点 （.至少一条）参考 ：近 的shortsighted要求：（ 1） 数： 80 100 个。（ 2）开 已 出，不 入 数。（ 3）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。the survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. at present,_【答案】 the su

8、rvey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.at present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. here are some main causes.some students may not have enough sleep. some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. some students even l

9、ike to watch tv or use computers for a long time.in order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. we can also try to do more sports in our spare time. we should have the good habit of using our eyes.i think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try ou

10、r best to protect them.【解析】【 解】 是一篇 表作文。根据 干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般 在 写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近 原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough） 2. 看 、做作 、用 等（for a long time）防止近 的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 （eye exercises） 2.养成正确的用眼 （have the good habit of）个人 点：如：我 ，我 了解保 眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保 我 的眼睛。（i think ?； tryones best to do sth. ）。常用的重点句型和短 有

11、：sb. spend some time doing sth.， in order to do sth. ， try to dosth.， the importance of等。3 面表达“小手拉大手 ,同做文明人。 ”自 建文明城市文明 村以来 ,淄博人民万众一心人点 的行 随 可 。作 中学生 ,我 也做出了自己的努力。 根据以下所,众 志成城 要点,让,写一篇 100 左右的英 短文。1.种植花草 木；2.遵守交通 ；3.公共 合不大声喧 ；4.公交 上主 有需要的人 座；（自主 ,至少两点）参考 : civilized 文明的make joint efforts 共同努力obey 遵守

12、【答案】 since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in zibo have made joint efforts （共同努力） . their good behavior can be seen everywhere.as junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized zibo. forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and tree

13、s. also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. in addition （此外） , we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbi

14、n, never litteringanywhere. furthermore （而且） , we are accustomed to （ 于） queuing up （排 ） for a ticket or something else. all in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如 make joint efforts ， as junior student

15、s ， for example ， obey the traffic rules ， run red light， in addition ， no longer ，in public ， and so on ，whats more ，on a bus， in need， be accustomed to ， queue up ， all in all 等。而 to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the

16、people in need./ all in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and zibo city more civilized. 等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示

17、，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。提示：1. 体育锻炼2. 上下楼梯3. 交朋结友4. 食品卫生要求：1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；2短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。3词数： 80100 词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。safety has become the focus to us all. how to be safe at school is especially important to usstudents._ _【答案】 safety has become the focus to us all. how to be safe at school is especia

18、lly importantto us students. first, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.second, there are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. so donwith each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. or there may be an accident.besides, we

19、should be friendly and get on well with others, don t quarrel or even fight. last butnot least , we should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which isharmful to our health.in a word, its important to remember these for us all. t【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材

20、料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。5近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角 ”投稿 ,内容包括：1. 雾霾的危害2. 雾霾产生的原因（2 个）3. 应对雾霾的措施（3 个）提示：雾霾smog poisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 词数 110 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。in recent years, many cities in china have been hit

21、by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people._【答案】 in recent years, many cities in china have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.smog has a bad effect on peoples health. many people, children and the old in particular,suffer from illnesses c

22、aused by smog. consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.how does it come about? scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this.the poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of peoplengcars,burning coal, driviindustry production and so on.

23、what should we do to stop the situation from worsening? first, cleaner fuels for cars andstricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. second, for us individuals, living agreen life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice.also plantingmore trees to incr

24、ease green areas is necessary. i believe every contribution counts. only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个

25、写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。6书面表达为了配合 “足球进校园 ”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。历史悠久，深受喜爱常 识世界杯 4 年举行一次男生女生皆可参加好 处利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1 点）偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟（至少1 点）注意： 1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计

26、入总词数；1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西messidear classmates,i m very excited to hear that china will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.thank you for your attention.【答案】 dear classmates，i m very excited to hear that china will build 20， 000 football-themed schoo

27、ls by 2020 football has a very long history it is liked by people all over the world the world cup takes place every four years playing football has lots of advantages first ，both boys and girls can take part in it second， it helps develop team spirit what s more， playing football is good for our he

28、alth i m a football fanmessi is my hero he has a gift for playing football my dream is to become a famous football player like messi i hope china will hold the world cup some day thank you for your attention 【解析】【详解】试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的

29、偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的 football has a very long history. it is liked by people all over the world. the world cup takes place every four years. it helps develop teamspirit. what s more, playing football is good for our health等等.句子，简洁，但是句意表达

30、清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second 等使得短文层次清楚。7假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80 岁。目前数量在减少，因为：1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。要求： 1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80 词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙 ivorydear classmates_i believe everyones contribution（贡

31、献）can make a big difference.yours,lihua【答案】 dear classmates,elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. but now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing

32、 their homes. secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.as a result, we need to do something to help them. first, we should plant more trees to build thehomes for elephants. second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against thelaw to kill elephants. or we can also

33、 hold some activities in some public places to spread the ideaof protecting the elephants.i believe everyones contribution（ 献）can make a big difference.yours,lihua【解析】【 解】本文是一封倡 ,倡 大家保 大象。文章共分 三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所 的 状，然后 明出 种状况的原因，最后 了保 的大象我 如何去做。 主要 一般 在 。提出倡 可以使用we can/ we should/ let s/wed better的表示

34、建 的句子。写作 注意不要使用太复 的句型，以免出 法 ， 使句子具有 性，可以适当使用 。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，elephants are the largestmammals ,及 first, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比 和最高 ； firstly, .secondly, 等 的使用使文章具有 次性，条理清晰。并且一些 的使用，比如so, or,but 等也使文章具有 性，是一篇不 的文章。8 面表达。 76.某英 教育网站正在开展主 “ how can a teenager have a successful life? 的” ， 此你

35、采 了一些同学（ 果 下表）。 据上 用英 写一篇短文参与 ，并 述你的 点。同学主要 点你的 点努力学 尊重父母（至少两条）服 社会 划未来注意：（ 1）短文必 包括表中所有内容，可适当增加 ；（ 2）你的 点至少两条；（ 3） 数： 80100；（ 4）短文首句 供 使用，不 入 数。参考 ：尊重 respect短文首句： i have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】 i have recently done a survey about how a teenager c

36、an have a successful life.most students believe it s necessary tordstudy.afterhall, study plays a key role in their life.they also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. besides,they re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it s really meaningful. what sthi

37、nk each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.from my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it s important to a successfulife.【解析】试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“how can a teenager have a

38、 successful life?的讨论，”采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do a survey about sth 关于某事做调查；respecttheir parents, 尊敬他们的父母； look after 照顾； make a good plan for sth 为某事做一个好的计划； make some good friend

39、s 交一些好朋友； keep healthy 保持健康。用了宾语从句，如： most students believe its necessary to study hard. whats more, they think each teenager issupposed to make a good plan for future. 用了 because 引导的原因状语从句，如：also, wemust be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it s important增to加a successful life.了文章的亮点，

40、也是提分的经典句子。考点：材料作文。9上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提示： electric adj. 电讨论结果25 人表示同意35 人不同意理由1.这样很方便； 2.能节约上学1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥途中的时间。挤，骑电动车也快不起来。【答案】 last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students coul

41、d ride electric bicycles to go toschool.25 students of our class agreed with it ， because they said it was convenient for them andit could takethem less time to go to school. but the other 35 students didn t agree with them. they said it wasnot safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. they also saidin the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇 80-100 词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。