中考高分范文

1、English Writing,A visit to a farm Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the owner of the farm showed us around. We were so pleased to see the fruit and vegetables growing well! At noon we had a p

2、icnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. we had to say good-bye to the workers at 5:00. We really enjoyed ourselves there,中考高分范文,假设你叫Sally,刚刚度完暑假。你的英国朋友Annie给你 发来了一

3、封电子邮件想了解你是如何度过假期的。 你准备给她回信，信的要点如下，词数约80左右，开头 已给出。 1.表示你度过了一个很开心的暑假。 2. 在暑假期间，开始学习弹吉他。 3. 经常与同学一起去游泳。 4. 还与父母一起去了一个小岛上度假。 5.希望跟Annie 一起分享照片。 Dear Annie : I am so happy to receive your email. Yours Sally,准备工作 .仔细审题，明确要求。 确定时态，审清题意，列出要点,紧扣要点，寻求思路。 草拟提纲，确定开头，根据内容写下一些短语或句子，拟好结尾（可适当发表自己的观点,写作之中,开门见山，紧扣主题,

4、语言正确, 规范地道,参观农场的日记： 关于度假,句型、结构，避免中国式英语。 I spent 10 yuan buy the book. He by bike to school. 标点符号,Last Sunday we visited West Hill Farm,We had a wonderful holiday in Jiaxin last weekend,重短轻长, 就易避难, 巧用绕障法,过渡自然, 表达流畅,以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。 You should keep quiet in the library,正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。 She is seven years

5、 old, she can speak three languages. 不重复使用可置换的词,适当评论, 发表己见,How friendly they are! We can learn from them. They enjoyed themselves very much. What a happy family,3.成文之后,一般语法项目的检查,人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 时态: One day, they are going to the island. 主谓一致: Everyon

6、e in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English,符合习惯 My work is very busy,I very much like it,Im very busy with my work,I like it very much,书写规范, 卷面整洁,假设你叫Sally,刚刚度完暑假。你的英国朋友Annie给你 发来了一封电子邮件想了解你是如何度过假期的。 你准备给她回信，信的要点如下，词数约80左右，开头 已给出。 1.表示你度过了一个很开心的暑假。 2. 在暑假期间，开始学习弹吉他。 3. 经常与同学一起去游泳。 4.

7、还与父母一起去了一个小岛上度假。 5.希望跟Annie 一起分享照片。 Dear Annie : I am so happy to receive your email. Yours Sally,Dear Annie: Im so happy to receive your mail. To tell you the truth, I really had a wonderful time in the summer holiday. During the holiday, I began to learn to play the guitar and I can play it well n

8、ow. Since it was very hot, I often went swimming with my classmates. I also went to a small island with my parents during the holiday and it was fantastic. It is the most island that I have ever seen. I took a lot of photos there and I hope I can share them with you. I really enjoyed myself in this holiday,仔细检查，认真抄写,抓住主题，描写细节,开门见山,发表己见，画龙点睛,收集信息，列出提纲,结尾有力,假如你叫Dick，两个月前去英国的一所高中读书，前天收到了Michael的一封信。请你写一封回信，信中要涉及以下内容,1.