托福写作：要避免语言单一

1、托福写作：要避免语言单一 托福写作：要避免语言单一关于多样化，举个最普遍的例子：“more and more”这个短语几乎是每个中国学生都使用过的短语。我看到过太多学生的独立写作*，三四百字的短文里出现了四五次。有学生在开头段便使用了三次。学生重复使用该短语是可以理解的，一个是熟悉，再来字数似乎上去了。其实，稍加思考便知道，如此做法反而在*开头便向阅卷人暴露了弱处。因此这种不顾语言质量的“凑字数”方法是不可取的。如何解决语言单一的问题?平日积累是必不可少的。而积累的最好方法就是阅读和仿写。阅读的材料有几大注意点：一、选择现代英语，简而言之，选择至少五十年以内的材料。读莎翁很好，但忌讳盲目模仿。

2、二、题材上尽量选择essay(散文、评论性*、短文尤佳)。不少学生喜欢看twilight之类的的幻想小说，这对培养阅读兴趣和语感很好，但对托福写作的帮助不直接。twilight之类属于创造性写作，即文学写作，其语境和托福考试需要的议论文有很大差别，即便学到很炫的词句，但恐无用武之地。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：获得成功的必备技能托福写作难点话题一览one skill needed to be successful in the world todaywhat is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be s

3、uccessful in the world today? choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.写作思路展开结构分析当今世界获得成功的必备技能。这道题目的论述重点有两个，一个是当年世界world today，要结合现实来写，另一点是one skill，只能说一个技能，不能多点展开，而是需要围绕这个技能来进行对方面论证，大家不要写跑题了。本话题高分范文赏析people succeed not merely because they have one or more certai

4、n skills. however, if i have to choose one skill which is supposed to be useful to success, i think it should be the ability to convince or persuade others. by convincing or persuading we get what we want from others. when we were children, we always managed to persuade our parents to buy us candies

5、; when we were in the high school, we had to persuade our classmates to play with us; when we applied for a job after graduation, we had better be able to successfully convince the employer that we are qualified employees. besides, some day, we will all have to convince a person whom we love that we

6、 are in deed outstanding husbands or excellent wives. by convincing or persuading we become more and more sturdy and powerful. nobody is capable of doing every thing perfect. by persuading others to cooperate with us, we can achieve much more than we could only by ourselves. mr. yu minhong, ceo of b

7、eijing new oriental education technology group, had successfully convinced his alumni including mr. wang qiang and mr. xu xiaoping to strive after an idealto build a most influential private university in china, and today, they have been so close. mr. yu, while answering a journalist, said that he o

8、nce persuaded chinese students to go abroad, his current work is to convince those students to return to their homeland with their enhanced intelligences. ironically, it is ourselves who need us to persuade and convince most. we by nature are weak, yet have to be stronger to face up to tough surroun

9、dings. all too often we need encouraging. amazingly enough, it is ourselves who can in deed encourage. when we are in trouble, we need convince ourselves not to give up, when we are in plain sailing, we need persuade ourselves no to be negligent. by convincing ourselves, we become more and more inde

10、pendent, and more and more robust, both of which are characteristics essential to success.托福写作高分句子如何写a. even though i usually know what i have to say, i cannot always express myself correctly in english.这句话是一个复合句，由even though引导的让步状语从句。b. this challenges me to practice my spoken english, with the res

11、ult that i can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中，有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。c. i think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employees job.上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子，是一个并列句

12、;because引导的原因状语从句。d. shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子，成为并列句，再一个which引导的定语从句。托福写作：工作类考试题目do you agree or disagree with the following statement：it is more enjoyable to ha

13、ve a job and work long hours for three days in a week than to work shorter hours for five days in a week.do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people should take a secure job immediately when finding one instead of waiting for the job that they find more satisfying.do you agree or disagree with the followin