How to beautify your writing如何“靓化”你的作文

1、How to beautify your writing 如何“靓化”你的作文,Composition,2010湖南高考卷,假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在你将代表英语俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下： 1 .简要描述俱乐部开展的与英语有关的一 项主要活动。 2 .谈谈你们开展该活动的一些收获 注意：1 .词数不能少于120； 2 .不能出现真实姓名和学校名称,体裁 人称 时态 要点,发言稿(注意格式,第一人称为主,3W,一般过去时为主,what/who,why,how,1、一项什么活动,2、为什么开展这个活动,3、怎样开展活动及怎

2、样的感想,写作步骤,1.审题,2.谋篇 （确定文章结构,Para1- 引出主题,Para2- 表述要点,Para3- 发表感想,3.成文 列出要点，连词成句，组句成文, 注意使用过渡词,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. . . Thats all. Thank you,Proper transitional words meanwhile , however, whats worse, thus, in other words, that is to say, firstly, last but n

3、ot least, moreover, on the contrary,Are they attractive? Why/Why not,Terrible writing Scribbles Not neat,Are they attractive,Beautiful handwriting Neat No scribbles,What makes a writing attractive,DISCUSSION,How to beautify your writing,Strategy 1 Beautify your vocabulary Strategy 2 Beautify your se

4、ntence,Strategy 1,Beautify your vocabulary,I like classical music; my friends like classical music; we all like classical music,2.In reality, there are a large number of children being overprotected by their parents. They are not independent and always depend on them,I like classical music; my frien

5、ds enjoy classical music; we all love classical music,Avoiding repeating,Avoiding Chinglish,One water add many water is sea. One tree add many tree is a forest. You add me is society,day day up people mountain people sea You ask me , me ask who ? How are you ? How old are you?You no see, I now very

6、busy. One side play go ! We two who and who？ Give him some color see see,Strategy 1,Beautify your vocabulary,Avoiding Chinglish! 1.Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2.There has a highway connected with Beijing. 3.Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete. 4.I forgot my dictionary at hom

7、e. 5.The price of the clothes is very expensive,heavy,left,is,Practice,high,Beautify your vocabulary,Using abundant vocabulary,want to do,intend to do/ desire to do/ be eager to do,clever,E.g.: good,perfect/ wonderful/ excellent/ outstanding/ magnificent,sb. has a good idea,bright/ smart/ brilliant/

8、 intelligent,sb. comes up with a good idea a good idea occurs to sb. a good idea strikes sb. a good idea comes upon sb,Strategy 1,be) of importance/ make a difference,be) important,dont know,I think,Beautify your vocabulary,Using phrases instead of words,have no idea / be not aware of,cause,lead to/

9、 result in/ bring about,in my opinion for my part from my point of view as far as I am concerned I hold the view that,Strategy 1,Strategy 2,Beautify your sentence,To alternate long and short sentences by using various sentence patterns,Make these sentences short,1. He got excited when he heard the n

10、ews. _ the news, he got excited. 2. The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. _ _ _, the girl went home,Hearing,Hungry and thirsty,Strategy 2,Beautify your sentence,Combine simple sentences to make a long one,1.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering f

11、lowers. _ _ _ _, Mr. Smith was in his garden, _ _. 2. We are most satisfied with the English speech contest. About 50 students participated in it. We are most satisfied with the English speech contest _ about 50 students participated in,Early in the morning,watering flowers,which/that,Strategy 2,Bea

12、utify your sentence,To use special sentence patterns to make your sentence impressive.（Emphatic sentence, Inversion, Ellipsis.,1. Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920. It was_ _ 1920 _ Radio broadcasts began. 2.He never speaks about his own family. Never_ _ speak about his own family. 3.A notice

13、is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall. On the wall _ a notice _ ”Please Save Water” . 4.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child _, he knows a lot,not until,does he,that,is,saying,as he is,Strategy 2,2. He was very excited and he couldnt help jumping up and down,He was so excited that he coul

14、dnt help jumping up and down,Beautify your sentence,So excited was he that he couldnt help jumping up and down,Strategy 2,Beautify your sentence,3. we have done much work, and have achieved what we have hoped. we have done much work, _ what we have hoped. 4. His fluent English and clear thoughts imp

15、ressed all of us. _ his fluent English and clear thoughts _ impressed all of us. 5. This contest not only helped us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new clubs. _ _ _ this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new clubs. 6. Our Engl

16、ish will become better and better only by taking part in more activities . _ _ taking part in more activities _ our English _ better and better,achieving,It was,that,Not only did,Only by,will,become,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of improving studen

17、ts spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the first prize.

18、It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new clubs. As

19、the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of improving stud

20、ents spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the first prize

21、. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new clubs. A

22、s the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of improving st

23、udents spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the first pri

24、ze. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new clubs.

25、 As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of improving

26、students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the first p

27、rize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new club

28、s. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of improvin

29、g students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the first

30、 prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new cl

31、ubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of improv

32、ing students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the fir

33、st prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some new

34、clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of impr

35、oving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the f

36、irst prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some ne

37、w clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of im

38、proving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got the

39、 first prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce some

40、new clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of

41、improving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got t

42、he first prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce som

43、e new clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose o

44、f improving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 got

45、 the first prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce s

46、ome new clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose

47、 of improving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3 g

48、ot the first prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produce

49、 some new clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpo

50、se of improving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class 3

51、 got the first prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to produ

52、ce some new clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the pur

53、pose of improving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Class

54、 3 got the first prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to pro

55、duce some new clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the p

56、urpose of improving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have hoped. However, among all the activities, we are most satisfied with the English speech contest that about 50 students participated in . Li Ming from Cla

57、ss 3 got the first prize. It was his fluent English and clear thoughts that impressed all of us. Under the influence of the contest, now most classes in our school have formed their own English clubs. In my opinion, not only did this contest help us improve our spoken English but also it helped to p

58、roduce some new clubs. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by taking part in more activities will our English become better and better. Therefore, we are really happy about it and proud of it. Thats all. Thank you,Boys and girls, Im glad to talk about our English club with you. With the purpose of improving students spoken English, we established an English club. During the two months, we have done much work, achieving what we have ho