高中英语作文公开课ppt课件

1、Beautify your sentences(闪亮你的句子,步骤,1.好句赏析 2.技巧指导 3.巩固提高,Enjoy a song,When I was young I_ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they _ Id sing along. It _me smile. Those _ such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _. But theyre back again just like a long lost friend,W

2、hen I was young I_ (listen) to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they _(play) Id sing along. It _(make) me smile. Those _(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _(go). But theyre back again just like a long lost friend,listened,played,were,had gone,made,思考： W

3、hat is a beautiful sentence,Translation 郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（THD Group）总裁黄药师的女儿。 Guo Jing is a man. He is not very clever. He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ. Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHuaDao Group,Guo Jing, a not very intelligent man, married a gi

4、rl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ, who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group,Read the followings and make your wise choice,Group 1 A. We have much homework to do . B. We have endless homework to do . C We are burdened with endless homework. Tip 1 高分词汇是首要 高分词汇原则 1.后、高、

5、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇） good very 2.词组优先 try to do,3.避免重复 A. I like reading while my brother likes watching television. B. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television,Group 2 A. This village built a school in 2008. B. Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school. Tip 2 陈述不如倒装妙

6、 Eg. 我从来不买日货 A.I will never buy any products made in Japan. B. Never will I buy any products made in Japan,天空中繁星点点 . In the sky hang little stars. 河岸上有很多花 . On the bank grow lots of flowers,Group 3 A. We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days. B. At most five books can be b

7、orrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days. Tip 3 主动不如被动巧 Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一次调查。（07广东） Recently a survey has been done on “ Who is you idol?” in our school,Group 4 A. If I am given the chance , I will try my best . B. Given the chance, I will try my best . Tip 4分词结构不能少 口诀：一去，二看，三改。 一去：去连词

8、； 二看：看主语； 三改：改分词。 1.童年的纸飞机 现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回忆 Back flies the paper-airplane and it brings me the fragrant memory of my childhood,bringing,Tips to beautify your sentence 1.高分词汇是首要 2. 陈述不如倒装妙 3. 主动不如被动巧 4.分词结构不能少,Task I Rewrite the sentences,1. In order to reach this goal, we will put up no-smoking sig

9、ns in all indoor public places.（用被动结构）（10广东） 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which is number 1 in the world. （09广东） 3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boy

10、s choose sports stars. （06广东） 4Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.( 用分词结构) （08广东,1. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. 2. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half

11、 of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world. 3. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars. 4. Shooting, originated as a means of survival ,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century,Task 2 Translation 1.他建议学生不要过度用眼（09广东） He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes 2. 近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。 （09广东） So complicated are the causes of short-sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness,3. 1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛（08广东） Women were fir