统考版2021高考英语二轮复习第3板块提高写作能力专题5短文改错含解析

1、第3板块命题规律短文改错的语言材料通常取自于学生的习作，以记叙文为主，主要考查学生在语篇中准确运用英语知识的能力。1错误类型相对稳定。全国三套卷的设题中，错词均为8个，多词1个和缺词1个。(需要注意的是，有时从句引导词错误既可按错一词修改也可按缺一词修改，如果按缺一词修改，则缺词为2个，错词为7个。)2考查内容覆盖面广。动词、形容词、副词、名词、代词、冠词、介词、连词及行文逻辑是考查的重点。3三年考点稳中有变。如2020年全国卷首考了连词and的多用，2019年全国卷首考了there be结构中there与they的误用，2018年全国卷首考了名词普通格与所有格的误用。命题趋势1预计2021年

2、高考短文改错仍将以记叙文为主，题材和难易度都会保持相对稳定，话题贴近学生生活，内容积极向上，反映核心价值观。2以词法考查为重点，其次会考查句法及行文逻辑。3备考时要注意近三年高考未考到的知识点，像情态动词、虚拟语气中的谓语动词、强调句型中that的用法、倒装句中助动词的用法等。短文改错解题三步骤第一步：从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态短文改错取材于考生作文，在时态上常用一般现在时和一般过去时。有些句子中谓语动词的时态和语态本身并没有错误，只有立足于上下文才能发现其中的错误。因此，在理解短文大意之后就应该逐句排查每句的时态和语态。第二步：从句子入手，逐句分析，推敲语法解决语法类错误的关键是要熟知短

3、文改错的出题点，对实词和虚词的考查角度了如指掌。如动词类错误一般有三个左右，第一步应从时态、语态角度进行排查，这时就需要考虑非谓语动词、主谓一致和情态动词；名词的数、形容词与副词的混用、冠词的用法、介词搭配等问题几乎每年都要考到，因此我们做题时要做到心中有数。第三步：从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代通过前两步仍然有做不出来的，就应该重读短文，看看是否存在连词错误、指代是否一致、是否符合行文逻辑等。a篇 (2020全国卷)today i tried cooking a simply dish myself.i like eating frying tomatoes with eggs，and

4、i thought it must to be easy to cook.my mom told me how to preparing it.first i cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside.next i broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick.after that i poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove.i waited patiently unless the oil was hot

5、.then i put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.“not that way，”my mom tried to stop us but failed.she was right.it didnt turn out as i had wished.【答案】today i tried cooking a dish myself.i like eating tomatoes with eggs，and i thought it must be easy to cook.my mom told me how to it.fir

6、st i cut the tomatoes into pieces put them aside.next i broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with .after that i poured oil into a pan and turned the stove.i waited patiently the oil was hot.then i put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.“not that way，”my mom tried to stop

7、but failed.she was right.it didnt turn out as i had wished.b篇 (2020全国卷)thank you for your letter，what really made me happy.im glad to know that youve come china to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.im surely youll have a good time.actually，i start to learn kung fu when i was seven years old，f

8、or i have long been out of practice.luckily，i will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.then i can spare some time to learn it again，such that we can practice together on every day.best of luck with yours learning kung fu in china.see you sooner.【答案】thank you for your letter, really made me hap

9、py.im glad to know that youve come china to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.im youll have a good time.actually，i to learn kung fu when i was seven years old， i have long been out of practice.luckily，i will go home in two weeks for summer .then i can spare some time to learn it again， that w

10、e can practice together every day.best of luck with learning kung fu in china.see you .c篇 (2019全国卷)since i was a kid，ive considered different job i would like to do.first，i wanted to be a fireman，whose uniform looked so coolly.then，when i was in the five grade，i wanted to be a teacher because i like

11、d my english teacher too much.when i studied chemistry high school，i reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.they were two reasons for the decision.one was that i was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.and the other is that i wanted to hel

12、p people in need.【答案】since i was a kid，ive considered different i would like to do.first，i wanted to be a fireman，whose uniform looked so .then，when i was in the grade，i wanted to be a teacher because i liked my english teacher much.when i studied chemistry high school，i reconsidered my goal decided

13、 to be a doctor. were two reasons for the decision.one was that i was at the fact that a sick person could feel much better after seeing a doctor.and the other that i wanted to help people in need.d篇 (2019全国卷)ive had many dreams since i was a child.now my dream is to opens a cafe.though it may appea

14、r simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts.what i want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.i want my cafe have a special theme such as like “tang dynasty”in the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.if i succeed in manage

15、 one, i will open more.i wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.【答案】ive had many dreams since i was a child.now my dream is to a cafe.though it may appear simple, it a lot of ideas and efforts.what i want is not just an c

16、afe but a very special one.i want my cafe have a special theme such as “tang dynasty”in the cafe, customers will enjoy in the historical environment is created for them.if i succeed in one, i will open more.i wish to have a chain of cafes in many different .each of my cafes will have a different the

17、me and unique style.e篇 (2018全国卷)during my last winter holiday, i went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. i find a big change there. the first time i went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. last winter when i went here again, they had

18、a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. they also had a small pond which they raised fish. my grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. i felt happily that their life had improved. at the end of our trip, i told my father that i planned to return for every two years

19、, but he agreed.【答案】during my last winter holiday, i went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. i a big change there. the first time i went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. last winter when i went again, they had a big separate house to raise

20、dozens of . they also had a small pond they raised fish. my grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. i felt that their life had improved. at the end of our trip, i told my father that i planned to return every two years, he agreed.f篇 (2018全国卷)it was monday morning, and the writi

21、ng class had just begin. everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. i had done myself homework, but i was shy. i was afraid that to speak in front

22、 of a larger group of people. at that moment, i remembered that my father once said, “the classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.” immediate, i raised my hand.【答案】it was monday morning, and the writing class had just . everyone was silent, to

23、see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. i had done homework, but i was shy. i was afraid to speak in front of a group of people. at that moment, i remembered that my father onc

24、e said, “the classroom is a place for learning and that learning from textbooks, and as well.” ， i raised my hand.真题例释(2020全国卷)my mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families.in order to make surely all of us are in good health，and she makes specific plans for us.for example，

25、every morning，my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while i had to eat an apple.my dad dont like the soup and i dont enjoy apples.i tell my mom that if were forced eat things，we may become ill.but he insists on us eating healthy food.understanding her good intentions，i eat all the food what is pro

26、vided by mom with appreciation.【答案】my mom is really with the health of everyone in our .in order to make all of us are in good health， she makes specific plans for us.for example，every morning，my dad has to have bowl of egg soup while i to eat an apple.my dad like the soup and i dont enjoy apples.i

27、tell my mom that if were forced eat things，we may become ill.but insists on us eating healthy food.understanding her good intentions，i eat all the food is provided by mom with appreciation.1concerningconcerned。词法错误。此处表示主语(my mom)的状态，应使用ed形容词，表示“关心的，关切的”。2familiesfamily。词法错误。family表示整体时，多作单数看待；指多个家庭成

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31、冠词与定冠词错用：泛指用不定冠词，特指用定冠词。冠词的缺失：可数名词单数前缺少不定冠词或定冠词。冠词的多余：不可数名词或表泛指的可数名词复数前有多余的定冠词。特别提示：注意固定搭配中的冠词。1(2018全国卷) after supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.sortsorts2(2018全国卷)when i was little, fridays night was our family game night.fridaysfriday3(2017全国卷)in the summer holiday

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41、 other students choose universities far away from home so that they can be more independence.independenceindependent形容词、副词错误主要有四种情况：形容词或副词之间的错用：由于词形或词义的接近而引起的错误；v.ing形容词与v.ed形容词的错用。比较等级的错用：除了原级、比较级、最高级相互之间的错用，还要注意比较级的重复。形容词与副词错用：作定语、表语时应用形容词，作状语时一般用副词(伴随状语用形容词)。形容词与名词的错用：该用形容词时错用名词。类型二句法错误1(2017全国卷)

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47、判断用哪种非谓语动词。一般来说，不定式表示尚未发生，动词ing形式表示主动进行，过去分词表示被动完成。介词后一般用动词ing形式，需特别注意to是介词还是不定式符号。误将非谓语动词用作谓语动词或相反情况。1(2018全国卷)as a kid, i loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times i asked to watch them, my parents would not to let me.去掉let前的to2(2020广西名校模拟)one difficulty with group work is that you can

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