让你的作文语言靓丽起来（Let your composition language beautiful up）

1、让你的作文语言靓丽起来（Let your composition language beautiful up）Let your composition language beautiful up,.Txt there is no pain in the wound, only the blood flowing smile, sometimes the simplest advice to others is the most difficult to do. Let your composition language beautiful open lesson lesson planTeac

2、hing objective: appreciate the charm of beautiful language, master the method of shaping the beauty of language.Teaching ideas: to abstract, to concrete, to direct, implicit, intangible, tangible.Teaching methods: combined training (Coaching oriented training as the main line)Teaching steps:Import:O

3、nce I saw a sentence in a Chinese magazine: high school students are now learning Chinese three (a fear of classical Chinese, two afraid of Zhou Shuren, afraid of writing), (questions.) It can be said that no matter how clever your composition is, no matter how profound your conception is, leaving t

4、he vivid and beautiful language to rely on, it is difficult for the teacher to fall in love with each other at the first sight.Two, college entrance examination full marks composition show:Mount Huangshan pine, I read you!Can you read that pine pine on the cliffs of Mount Huangshan?It is wrapped aro

5、und the cloud, fog, rain smoke it, destroy it, frost bully snow, lightning boom top, it may not exist in nature like Buddha let must get rid of. However, it is not down, do not compromise, not afraid of snow air knife axe picking out and in countless counter and howl, trained in a combination of a f

6、irm and unyielding character, Lang Lang from cavity.Again, it is struggling in the rain cry; and, the clouds torn in pieces; its majesty forced it to escape the frost obediently; expel lightning from hardened it.All the students desire, struggle, the struggle in the pines by out of the show in the s

7、ymphony of destiny.Read Mount Huangshan pine, dont you think we Anhui is a tall stalwart of the Jinsong?Anhui, Huaihe, thousands of years of agitation, experienced ups and downs this vast land has staged a thrilling story, how many feudal lords vying for the throne!It used to be one of the birthplac

8、es of Chinese civilization. Chapter three, Taoism, Xinan literature, prose in Tongcheng. These are an integral part of Chinese culture.A misfortune, the blessing of the hill; Fu Xi, the curse of the Volt has revealed how much vicissitudes of life; a ChuHeRiDangWu, sweat Wo soil out of the Anhui peop

9、les diligence and hard.With two tire, unique Jingtingshan , Tianmen interrupts Chu River, clear water flowing so far back , Wu Yue guilaibukan mountain, Mount Huangshan guilaibukan. This is not proof of their longing for the beautiful scenery of the men of literature and writing it?The well-known Yu

10、 three home without, but few people know that looking ahead, stand leaning by the door renmiantaohuaxiangyang red is we Anhui Qianshan girl! Joe Public women show clock, autumn Bingdi open Lotus that the poet is full of infinite yearning, and the hands of the situation with two long weary, Yiyi Liu

11、Jiao love also moved across time today?The scholars four jewels, Huizhou architecture, Wuhu Tiehua, Huangmei Opera, Fengyang flower drum. These are all the crystallization of the wisdom of the sons and daughters of jianghuai!Thousands of years ago to overthrow the tyrannical rule of the Qin Dynasty

12、with vigour and vitality Chen Sheng, Wu Guang uprising, many brave deeds in the Anti Japanese War and the war of liberation capable of evoking praises and tears in the bloody millennium, all testify against oppression, defying the Jianghuai children bullying firm and unyielding character.Mount Huang

13、shan pine, I read you! Mount Huangshan pine, you are emblem soul!Comment: the deep meaning, the author takes the Mount Huangshan song as the symbol of Mount Huangshan pine, through description, expression of the Anhui culture, the spirit of the people of Anhui, singing praise. From the start of Moun

14、t Huangshan pine, cut small mouth, but can small, real and virtual, and the construction of the Mount Huangshan pine emblem of the soul similarities. This article is much appreciated by the teacher, not only in its conception, but also in the language. What do you think is good for the language? (st

15、udents) literarily is one of the major characteristics of the whole scattered sentence interlaced, reference + parallelism lyrical rhetoric, hearty, imposing, expand the connotation, strengthen the spirit of Hui song, admiration for the Mount Huangshan.Three, the interpretation of syllabus: entrance

16、 examination that about literary talent is such a vivid description: word, sentence and flexible; good use of rhetorical sentences; implication. To make the article literary talent, we must abandon the boring, dull and dry information language, and learn to use vivid language.For example: she is ver

17、y sad -She was a lonely tree, sad as mist enveloped her. (borrowing metaphor)Her sorrow shear continuously, chaotic, as the continual spring.(borrowing ancient poems)Interlanguage: in this class, we construct the composition language from the angle of rhetoric and quotation.Four, skills guidance(1)

18、skillful use of figures of speech1 responsibility, is a piece of sponge dipped with noble feelings, if you are willing to squeeze, the total radiance of the sandwich thought into your life; responsibility is a disgraceful long crystal, if you wish to wipe, it will light up your heart lightened; resp

19、onsibility is a have lost if you wish to take the beautiful style of writing, and it will bring you a short life portrayed ambilight.1, students read aloud again, initial perception of language charm of literary talent.2, ask: do you think this paragraph of language has what characteristic? (student

20、 exchange)(1) metaphor? What is compared to what? Whats in it for you? It makes the language vivid and beautiful.(2) parallelism? Whats in it for you? Read, easy to pronounce, full of momentum, read very appealing, with a sense of beauty. The two are practical and have an open image. From the above

21、analysis, we can conclude that the characteristics of Metaphor: parallelism (+ image shows the beauty of momentum)2 to read life, we must learn to read failure and pain. Edison read one thousand failures, finally succeeded in inventing the light bulb; Goujian read failure and his bitter hardships, e

22、ventually killing Wu Xueru Lance Armstrong in one fell swoop; read cancer pain, eventually overcome the disease, to love the cycling stadium. Failure and pain is a kind of sharpening, a kind of test, let real gold shine in the fire,Let Phoenix in bath fire Nirvana rebirth.1, students read aloud, ini

23、tial perception of language charm of literary talent. (student exchange)(1) to illustrate a truth, the author did not empty talk, but cited three typical events. And they are not simply piled together, instead of using rhetoric alignment arrangement of materials. In this way, not only creates a cult

24、ural artistic conception, but also the language is moving.(2) with duality, preciseness and order, the language has symmetrical beauty. From the above analysis we may safely arrive at the conclusion that.:Features: + + Dual parallelism reference (the style which contains profound philosophy)Teacher:

25、 rhetoric is like a wonderful flower in the garden of flowers. If we can insert a few sticks in the article, it will add a little bright color to our article. Blackboard writing: clever use of Rhetoric)students Lianbi1, expand Lenovo, skillfully use more than two rhetorical devices, mother as the to

26、pic, write a set of sentences. (exchange comments)Example: a mother is tired of a cup of Longjing, when you are weak, just a few mouthfuls will refresh you;Mother is a piece of Zheng in the worry. When you are depressed, the graceful melody floats, and immediately there is a green;The mother was in

27、the winter of a quilt, when you shivering, intimate care and warmth to your dream;My mother is a star in the night, when you disoriented, a bunch of light guide you to take firm steps.Teacher summary: Rhetoric with and without, really have a world of difference! But note: more than the more is not t

28、he better, we must not catch on the use,Apply mechanically。 Rhetoric must be natural, appropriate, subtle, can play a vivid role, otherwise it will only make people feel artificial.(two) citing poetry and prose;The teacher stated: the ancient poetry is a great treasure house of art, many famous poem

29、s like a pearl, a charming light radiation. Therefore, the appropriate reference to some famous poems, will make your essay Ambilight, give people the joy of beauty, will reflect the candidates more solid writing skills and profound cultural accomplishment. (writing on the blackboard: Poetry and pro

30、se)3 poetic life, perhaps as Tao Qian mining Ju Dong Li, the leisurely to see the mountain like a carefree and content. Poetic life, perhaps it should be like Li Bai out laughing, we have elegant basil like. Poetic life, or as yianjushi do you know? Do you know? Is like a gentle and simple flourishi

31、ng leaves and withering flowers. (read by name)4 waves are truly great men ages The mighty river flows eastward. From the ancient Chinese population pours out; the language is in front of Zhang Fei Dangyang bridge with a roar; Chinese people Fan Zhongyan outflow from the pen at the head of the river

32、; Xunyang Pipa female Chinese strings echoed; Chinese took us to the Tianmu Mountain fairy cave in to experience the magic, the stone feel the thrilling Jingyanggang it makes us deep flavor; It passes like this. feeling, only under the brow, but the heart of sorrow, sing while drinking, the geometry

33、 of life helpless, overcast autumn frost lingers fly late, left Holland to listen to the rain bleak.Teacher tips: when writing, appropriate reference, imitation and use of ancient poetry,Let the composition language icing on the cake. But, the use of famous poems, can be divided into bright and dark

34、 two lead lead. The term citation refers to the reference to the source of the quoted text, which we have just used as an explicit reference. Sometimes, the quotation can be directly woven into its own language.5 is optimistic that with straight up the sky in a row of white egrets, 10000 white optim

35、istic is the junks sunk boat, optimism is the head wind blows the yingwuzhou luxuriant, is optimistic that more into little flower fall red.students Lianbi2, life all the way, everywhere Guan love. Family, friendship, love, all make life full of moving and gorgeous. is the affection of the family; i

36、s the concern of friendship; is the love of missing. .Material: 1. family: mother line, wandering clothing. Leaving thick seam, Italy has to fear. Who grass inch heart, reported in the apartments. (Meng Jiao wanderer) 2. pods burned to cook beans, peas weep in the pot. This is the same root, fratric

37、idal. (Cao Zhi: seven steps poem) 3. countries break mountains and rivers in, the city spring vegetation is deep. Sense of flowers with tears, hate the other birds startling. War in March, received a letter. The scratch shorter, muddy to be dan. (Du Fu: spring hope) 4. Luoyang city to see the autumn

38、, to re author the book means million. The haste of fear was endless, and pedestrians came in kaifeng. (Zhang Ji: Autumn Thoughts) 5. all alone in a foreign land, during the festive season. Far know brother climb place, all over the dogwood less one person.(Wang Wei: September 9th Shandong Yi brothe

39、rs) 6, danyuanrenchangjiu, partings. (Su Shi Prelude To Water Melody friendship: a bosom friend, Tianya zorpia. Wang Bo - farewell to prefect Du come more into a glass of wine, out of th. Two yuan to send Wang - Anxi gufanyuanying blue sky to make, but see the sky the Yangtze River flow. - Li Bai Me

40、ng Haoran of Guangling profound friendship send a thousand feet deep, less than Wang Lun gave me love. - Li Bai to Wang Lun anteriormo Chou no friends, everyone knows you in the world. High quality BIE Dong love: I would like to know each other with you, the mountains without edge, heaven and earth,

41、 but dare and Jun absolutely!May the heart of people, together forever. Han Zhuo Wenjun Yin Whitehead Cai Feng Shuangfei body without wings heart to heart. Don Li Shangyin Untitled may get in a day, is willing to tie the knot. Sometimes as enduring as the universe, without This regret shall last for

42、 evermore! Don Bai Juyi song its so hard to say goodbye, the East windflowers. A spring silkworm may not stop spinning silk until death, a candles tears dry only when its burned down to ashes. Tang; Li Shangyin Untitled have sailed the seven seas hard water, except Wushan not cloud. Tang Zhen thinki

43、ng health and southern red beans, a few of the spring. Wish you all Jie, it the most acacia. Wang Wei lovesickness flower Kanshe straight must fold, Mo to spend spare! Don Du Qiuniang fur coat Shouxiang Leiyan, actually Speechless choke. Sentimental parting since ancient times. This last year should

44、 be free. Then there are thousands of amorous feelings, and who? Liu Yong Yu Lin! The bells searching, desolate, qiqicancan. This time,What a sad word, sound slow ten years, life and death two vast, do not consider, since unforgettable. Xiaoxuan window, is dressing, care, and in tears. Su Shi Jiangc

45、heng Zi Rouqingsishui, a dream wedding day. Two if love is long, will it be toward the curtain?. Qin QueqiaoExample: the mother line, wandering clothing is affection and love; a bosom friend, neighbors are worried about friendship; when he cut a total of west window candle, but when it is love miss

46、hope of reunion among friends .3, please quote poems, write a paragraph to express your understanding of spring. (exchange comments)Material: Chunxiao (Meng Haoran) spring dawn, hear birds singing everywhere. Night wind and rain sound, flowers know how much. The willow (He Zhizhang) Jasper makeup in

47、to a tree, 10000 dropped the green silk sash. I do not know who is cut out of Verbena, February spring like scissors. The Qingming (Du Mu) Qingming, pedestrian road. I ask where there are restaurants, the shepherd boy points at Xinghuacun. Spring - a suichu fireworks, energy-saving. The spring rain,

48、 energy-saving, energy-saving. Spring flowers - melancholy, East column of a snow, life can be seen several qingming. A month - Midnight deeper people, with Nadou inclined compass. Spring: spring biyutian, Huachuan sleep machines. Spring breeze - spring breeze and the South Bank of the green river,

49、when will the moon shine on me?. Spring: truthfulness east side, always a riot of colour of spring. Spring spring tide death - nights rain, Nowata unmanned boat from the cross. Spring sorrow - q-how can worry about, like a river flowing east spring Hatred - life is based on affection, this hate is n

50、ot the wind and the moon.Spring return - no not heartless things, into a joke.Example: what is spring? Bai Juyis sunrise flaming red flowers, spring green river, such as blue flowers blue; Zhi Nan is Zhanyi for wet apricot rain, the wind blows the gentle; Han Yus Guan Xiaoyu run as crisp grass, clos

51、e but no tenderness is dim; Meng Haoran spring dawn, bird is the smell of flowers heliotropes.Five summaryIn this lesson, we have learned two ways to make the composition language beautiful. The skillful use of rhetoric can make the image beautiful and poetic, and can achieve the effect of classical beauty by using poetry.(Writing: beautiful image with many beautiful classical makhop method)We must make efforts in language, words, elaborate, do not seek dull re