高考英语写作训练三篇.doc

1、高考英语写作训练三篇主语+谓语+介词+宾语Weallagreedontheterms.Hehatestoarguewithhiswifeaboutsuchsmallmatters.Allthesethingsaretobeansweredfor.主语+系动词+形容词Goodmedicinetastesbittertothemouth.Hewassotiredthathefellasleepthemomenthewenttobed.Yourexplanationsoundsreasonable.主语+谓语+直接宾语Iwantyourpromise.Haveyourfixedmywatch?Thi

2、sfactoryproduces1000carsaweek.主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语Hepaidmeavisityesterday.Heowedme50yuan.Hewrotehisfamilyaletteryesterday.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(todo)Iwillgetsomeonetorepairtherecorderforyou.Ididntmeantohurtyou.Heinvitedmetoteachatawell-knownuniversity.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(do)Ioftenhearhersingthesong.Thebossmadeworkerswork1

3、5hoursaday.Dontforgettohavehimcome.主语+谓语+现在分词Iheardhersinginginthenextroom.Wecouldfeelourheatsbeatingfast.Didyouobservethebirdsflyingaroundthetrees?主语+谓语+过去分词Imusthavemywatchrepaired.Wemustgethetaskfinishedontime.Speakloudertomakeyourselfunderstoodbyeverybody.主语+谓语+宾语(动名词)Isuggestedputtingoffthemeet

4、ing.Theyallavoidedmentioningthematter.Wecanthelplaughingatthenews.主语+谓语+宾语(不定式)Icantaffordtobuysuchalargehouse.Dontpretendtoknowwhatyoudont.Hefearedtospeakinherpresence.主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语Nothingcanpreventusfromgoingforward.Thankyouforyourhelp.Hedemandedananswerfromme.练习写好句子的方法一：合并句子Itwasearlyinth

5、emorning.Mr.Smithwasinhisgarden.Hewaswateringflowers.Earlyinthemorning,Mr.Smithwaswateringflowersinhisgarden.Agirlwascrossingaroad.Thegirlwaspretty.Theroadwaswide.Aprettygirlwascrossingawideroad.高考英语写作训练2写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：每处

6、错误及其修改均仅限一词; AftertheSpringFestival,therearisessomehottopics,andluckymoneyisincludingaswell.Tocollectopinionsfromthepublic,anonlinesurveyhasmadethesedays.82%oftheparticipantsregardluckymoneyasoneofthemostimportanttraditionalcustom,representinggoodwishesfromtheelderlytothenewgeneration.Besides,luckym

7、oneyisthemoreattractivepartforchildren,itformsthegoodmemoryofourchildhood.Therest,however,thinkbadofit.Foronething,theamountisgrownbiggerandbigger,makingitaheavyload.Foranother,ithasbeenagoodexcusetobribe(贿赂)peopleinthepower,whichisbadforbuildingahealthyandharmonioussociety.Personallyspeaking,luckym

8、oneyisnothingwrong.Onlywhenweknowitsmeaningcanyousendourheartywishestotheyoung.笫二节书面表达(满分25分)假如你是李华，在你校学习的美国交换生David和你成为了好朋友，并且在他的帮助下你的英语学习取得了很大的进步。在他结束学习回国之后,请用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容应包括：1.表达思念;2.感谢帮助;3.希望保持联系。注意事项：1.不得透露真实姓名和学校2.词数：100左右3.开头和结尾已写出，不计入词数DearDavid,Howtimeflies!Itsbeenatotalweeksinceyouleftour

9、school._YoursLihua参考答案：短文改错AftertheSpringFestival,therearisessomehottopics,andluckymoneyisincludingaswell.ariseincludedTocollectopinionsfromthepublic,anonlinesurveyhasmadethesedays.been82%oftheparticipantsregardluckymoneyasoneofthemostimportanttraditionalcustom,representinggoodwishesfromtheelderlyto

10、thenewgeneration.Besides,luckymoneycustomsisthemoreattractivepartforchildren,itformsthegoodmemoryofourchildhood.mostwhichTherest,however,thinkbadofit.Foronething,theamountisgrownbiggerandbigger,badlygrowingmakingitaheavyload.Foranother,ithasbeenagoodexcusetobribe(贿赂)peopleinthepower,whichisbadforbui

11、ldingahealthyandharmonioussociety.Personallyspeaking,luckymoneyisnothingwrong.Onlywhenweknowitsmeaningcanyousendourheartywishestotheyoung.we书面表达范文DearDavid,Howtimeflies!Itsbeenatotalweeksinceyouleftourschool.Thankyousomuchforyourhelp.HowIwishyoucouldstayherealittlelonger!Onwritingthisletter,precious

12、memoriesrushintomymind.IstillrememberwhenyoufirstcameintoourclassroomsmilingandshowedusyourwonderfulStreetDance,which,aswellasyournativeaccent,attractedusall.WhatleavesmethedeepestimpressionisthewayyouhelpedmememorizeEnglishwords.YoualwaysrepeatedthewordsformanytimesbeforeIcouldlearnthemallbyheart.W

13、ithyourhelp,IhavemademuchprogressinmyEnglish,whichfinallyranksthetop10inmyclass.Thankyousomuchagain!Ireallyhopewecanstayintouchforever!YoursLihua高考英语写作训练3本文解析的高考范文是一篇应用文书信：DearAllen,Howiseverythinggoing? OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundaymorningintheschoolhall.AndImwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.

14、Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Thentherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply. Bestwishes, LiHua解析：1.书信格式要点，略。2.文中要点如下：Howiseveryt

15、hinggoing?OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundaymorningintheschoolhall.AndImwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.第一段，开门见山地表明我校将要举行音乐节，并且交代了时间是在下个周日上午，地点在学校的大厅，然后又说我写信邀请你参加。通过这几句话可以看出来，他很明确的叙述了一件事以及发生的时间和地点，也说清楚了是“我写信给你”。Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Thentherewillb

16、evariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.第2段是主体部分，”就事论事”，它就第一段所提到的举行音乐节这件事情进行了具体的说明，比如开幕式的开始时间，校长将会发表讲话，还会有精彩的表演，也邀请他上舞台表演。Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.这句话相信同学们很熟悉了，是书信格式的结尾的老套路，不用多说。3.还不明白的请看全文翻译：亲爱的艾伦，一切都好吗？

17、我们学校将在下周日上午在学校礼堂举行音乐节。我现在写信邀请你加入我们。开幕式将于上午9:00开始，校长将发表演讲。然后，将有才华横溢的学生表演各种各样的精彩表演。绝对欢迎你上舞台表演，这将为我们的节日增添色彩和乐趣。期待你的早日答复。4.现在我们可以推测出这篇范文的原题目应该是什么样的吗？我想你一定猜对了！以下就是原题：假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。-假装是分割线-悄悄地分一下-5.现在，我们再把这篇作文按照正常的答题顺序“写”一遍：先仔细的阅读作文题目，根据题目要求确定好写作的人称，时态，以及段落安排，归纳出写作要点。这时你会发现，正确的审题并抓住这篇作文的要点，其实并不难，关键是要细心。然后，你可以尝试复述一下上面范文的要点表达或者换成你自己的