走进2016高考读后续写课堂

1、1,走进,2016,高考读后续写,Continuation writing,in 2016 College Entrance Examination,2,对第五档,21-25,作文的描述,1,与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开头语衔,接合理,2,内容丰富，应用了,5,个以,上短文中标出的关键词语,3,所使用语法结构和词汇丰,富、准确，可能有些许错,误，但完全不影响意义表,达,4,有效地使用了语句间的连,接成分，使所续写短文结,构紧凑,Tips for writing,1. Thorough reading,2. Creative plotting,构思,3. Swift drafting,4

2、. Careful polishing,5. Neat copying,3,Step 1,Thorough Reading,1. Read the article carefully and analyze the,5 elements,when, where, who, what, how,When,Who,Where,What &how,one weekend,Jane and her husband Tom,in the forest,4,Step 1,Thorough Reading,Jane _ with Tom and,_away to _ a better spot,Unfort

3、unately, she was _ on the,way. She _ for help and kept,_ until she was so tired. After a,nights rest, Jane _at the break of,the day and _ the sound to a,stream, getting something to eat,What & how,quarrelled,walked,find,lost,cried,moving,rose,followed,1. Read the article carefully and analyze the 5,

4、elements,when, where, who, what, how,5,Step 1,Thorough Reading,1. Read the article carefully and analyze the,5 elements,when, where, who, what, how,What & how,As she picked her way along the,stream, Jane _ a helicopter,and another, so she _ her,yellow blouse, _ that she,should go and _ them if the,h

5、elicopters come back,heard,took off,thinking,flag,6,Step 1,Thorough,Reading,The plot of original article,quarrelled,walked away,got,lost,saved herself,missed her,husband,saved herself again,helicopter appeared and flew away,7,Step 1,Thorough Reading,2. Read and pay attention to the,feeling,of,the ch

6、aracter in different paragraphs,Para 1,Para 2-4,Para 5,Para 6,angry,fearful, regretful, tired, helpless,happy, stronger,hopeful,8,Step 2,Creative plotting,Attention,Being creative doesnt mean you can,write whatever you like. Continuation,writing must be designed in a,logical,and,reasonable,way. And

7、on top of that being,creative will be appreciated,logic,creativity,9,Step 2,Creative plotting,Paragraph 1,But no more helicopters came and it was,getting dark again,_,Paragraph 2,It was daybreak when Jane woke up,_,10,Step 2,Creative plotting,Use over 5 of the following words,Jane,Tom lake walked cl

8、imbed,at a distance stream to her great joy,people,action,feeling,object,place,11,Step 3,Swift drafting,1. When no more helicopter came,and it was getting dark again, whats,Jane s,feeling,and whats her,action,2. What,happened,when Jane wake,up at daybreak,helicopter, yellow blouse, Tom,at a distance

9、, lake,Jane, to her great joy, walked,climbed, stream,12,Step 4,Careful,polishing,13,But no more helicopters came and it was,getting dark again,All of Jane,s hope,sank into darkness due to only the empty,valley replied to her yellow blouse,with,birds sounds,at a distance. When the,pretty beautiful m

10、emory flashed back in,her mind,Jane felt really regret to walk,away and her eyes were filled with tears,shining like a stream. She take some of,the berries, which was the only one can,support her for a while, then she fell,asleep with upset,14,It was daybreak when Jane woke up,She,heard a familiar s

11、ound calling,her name,when she found she was surrounded by,trees. She,yelled loudly,and rushed into,the direction,where the sound came,as,soon as she figured out that Tom was,finding her. Tom,heard Janes voice, as,she was appeared in her sight, he dashed,to her and,hugged her tightly without,hesitat

12、ion,Both of them were survived by,a helicopter,that found them in time,15,Paragraph,1,But,no,more,helicopters,came,and,it,was,getting,dark,again,Jane,had,to,stay,alone,in,the,forest,for,another,cold,night,Although,she,felt,a,little,sad,she,didnt,get,fearful,She,thought,about,Tom,He,must,have,called,

13、for,those,helicopters,Maybe,he,was,in,one,of,them,and,will,come,back,again,I,have,to,guide,him,tomorrow,She,fell,asleep,and,dreamed,of,seeing,Tom,Sample One,16,Paragraph,2,It,was,daybreak,when,Jane,woke,up,She,ate,some,berries,and,then,walked,along,the,stream,hoping,to,find,a,suitable,place,to,guide

14、,the,helicopter,Fortunately,she,saw,a,huge,flat,rock,in,an,open,area,at,a,distance,She,rushed,to,the,rock,climbed,onto,it,and,waited,To,her,great,joy,the,helicopter,appeared,again,The,nearer,it,got,the,more,she,flagged,the,yellow,blouse,Luckily,the,helicopter,didnt,miss,Jane,this,time,and,it,landed,

15、near,the,big,rock,slowly,Tom,jumped,off,the,helicopter,and,ran,towards,Jane,She,broke,down,and,burst,into,tears,17,Paragraph,1,But,no,more,helicopters,came,and,it,was,getting,dark,again,Jane,tried,to,find,shelter,from,the,night,cold,But,unfortunately,she,slipped,over,and,broke,her,leg,With,the,extre

16、me,pain,Jane,managed,to,make,her,way,to,a,rock,for,shelter,Under,the,rock,Jane,stayed,wide,awake,knowing,she,might,not,be,able,to,get,to,the,lake,with,a,broken,leg,Dont,be,afraid,Tom,must,be,searching,for,me,And,the,helicopter,will,come,back,tomorrow,she,thought,to,herself,After,quite,a,while,Jane,f

17、ell,asleep,Sample Two,18,Paragraph,2,It,was,daybreak,when,Jane,woke,up,She,struggled,to,her,feet,and,headed,for,the,stream,After,having,some,berries,and,stream,water,Jane,walked,slowly,to,an,open,area,to,wait,for,her,rescue,To,her,great,joy,she,soon,heard,the,helicopter,Jane,madly,waved,her,yellow,b

18、louse,when,it,came,into,sight,Sadly,the,helicopter,flied,away,again,However,soon,came,the,rescue,team,together,with,Tom,who,had,found,Janes,location,from,the,helicopter,Jane,was,saved,Sample Two,19,Step 5,Neat copying,20,21,22,23,24,Task,Assess your,partners composition,档次,logic,creativity,language,第五档,21-25,第四档,16-20,第三档,11-15,第二档,6-10,第一档,1-5,0,分,25,1. Read and analyze the original article,carefully,2. Ma