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1、【题文】请认真阅读下面有关某校学生父母教育方式现状调查的饼状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。One Friday in June, 2018. In a schoolMr. Chen: What will your parents do if you get a lower grade in school?Li Hua: They will be angry and scold me.Mr. Chen: Do you want to have a talk with your parents, for example, about your life in school
2、?Li Hua: I dont want to tell them my school life as well as my feelings, because they cant understand me.Mr. Chen: How do you like the relation between your parents and you?Li Hua: Although they love me, they often push me to study hard, which puts too much pressure on me.【写作内容】1. 用约30个词概括上述饼状图的主要内容
3、;2. 简要谈谈父母教育方式的重要性;3. 谈谈你理想中的父母教育方式。(上述对话仅供参考)。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。_【答案】Most of the students enjoy a harmonious family atmosphere with equal treatment. However, about 16% of the parents expect too much of their children and some are even ha
4、rder on them.The importance of family education cannot be stressed too much. Its well known that the family is a persons first school, and parents are the first teachers. Proper family education is always in the most fundamental position, which plays a very important role in shaping a childs growth
5、and development.In my opinion, the ideal family educational mode should be the one that adopts the scientific method of encouragement, guidance, and tolerance. Parents should pay great attention to emotional communication by sparing the time to talk with children, listen attentively to their aspirat
6、ions and give them encouragement. Only in this way can children build self-respect and self-confidence and develop their physical and mental health.【解析】【分析】这是一篇议论文。要求概括图文内容并对给出材料反映出的现象谈谈自己的看法。【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1. 用约30个词概括上述饼状图的主要内容;2. 简要谈谈父母教育方式的重要性;3. 谈谈你理想中的父母教育方式。(上述对话仅
7、供参考)。第二,人称为第三人称。第三,时态为一般现在时。第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,用约30个单词写出上文概要。第二段,简要谈谈父母教育方式的重要性。第三段,谈谈你理想中的父母教育方式。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: a harmonious family atmosphere,expect too much of their children,family education,fundamental position,a childs growth and development,the ideal family educational
8、mode,第四步:确定较为高级的句子:非限定性定语从句Proper family education is always in the most fundamental position, which plays a very important role in shaping a childs growth and development. 限定性定语从句In my opinion, the ideal family educational mode should be the one that adopts the scientific method of encouragement, g
9、uidance, and tolerance. 倒装句型Only in this way can children build self-respect and self-confidence and develop their physical and mental health.第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如:非限定性定语从句Proper family education is always in the most fundamental position, which plays a very important role in shaping a childs growth and development. 限定性定语从句In my opinion, the ideal family educational mode should be the one that adopts the scientific method of encouragement, guidance, and tolerance. 倒装句型Only in this way can children build self-respect
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