七年级英语下册 Unit 11 How was your school trip（第6课时）同步作文指导习题 人教新目标版

1、第六课时单元同步作文指导,本单元以“学校旅行”为话题，主要描述旅行期间所发生事情的经过及自己的感受。具体到书面表达中要求同学们会写一篇关于学校旅行的文章，此文章以记叙为主，要说明事件的时间、地点、人物、经过和结果。在写作中，要分清主次，详略得当；另外，由于是写一次印象深刻的经历，故文中应有描述性的句子，比如描述人物的心理、感受、天气状况等。 教材中出现的相关句型： Today I went on a school trip.今天我进行了一次学校旅行。 I think todays school trip was terrible.我认为今天的学校旅行很糟糕。 We took the train

2、 to the museum.我们乘火车去博物馆,We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.我们参观了科学博物馆，那真的很有趣。 I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents.我去了礼品店给我父母买了一些可爱的礼物。 They werent expensive.它们不贵。 All in all，it was an exciting day.总的来说，是激动人心的一天。 I didnt like the trip at all.我

3、一点也不喜欢这次旅行,昨天你刚经历了一次学校旅行，请以“My School Trip”为题，写一篇50词左右的作文，记述你昨天的活动和感受。 My School Trip Yesterday was a sunny day.My school went to the zoo.It was really interesting.We went there by bus.The zoo is very big.At the zoo，I saw lots of animals and I took many photos.I learned a lot about animals.My classm

4、ates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.They werent expensive.It was an exciting day. 【点评】开篇由yesterday表明时间为一般过去时。使用形容词interesting来描述事件的感情基调，吸引读者。点明去目的地的方式，并把动物园之行的活动记叙清楚明了。末尾exciting一词描述了自己的感受,李林今天特别开心，因为他参加了一次非常有趣的采摘活动。请参考下面的信息，帮他写一篇50词左右的日记，记录他今天的活动及感受。 时间：周六 地点：开心农场 交通方式：校车 活动

5、内容： 8：00 am. 乘车出发 9：00 am. 采摘草莓 12：00 pm. 吃午餐 2：00 pm. 爬山 5：00 pm. 回家 活动感受：有点累，但是很开心。 注意： 1书写规范，语句通顺，包括表格中的全部信息； 2开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：go climbing 爬山；tired 疲劳的,April 30，SundayFine Today is Saturday.Our teacher took us to Happy Farm.We went there by school bus at 8：00 in the morning.When we got there，we went to pick strawberries at 9：00.These strawberries were big and red.They tasted good.At 12：10 pm.，we had lunch together.At 2：00 pm