人教版九年级英语下册《nit 13 We're trying to save the earth!Section A Grammar focus 4a-4c》课件4

1、Unit13 Were trying to save the earth.（Written expression）,如何按要求完成写作,Shared bike,Shared bikes Bike-sharing is a new choice for short journeys in cities. It is good to the healthy development of the big cities. A report by a company found that shared bikes started the nations love for bikes again . No

2、w more and more Chinese people are choosing bikes instead of cars to make short journey in cities. An engineer of that company says that since the start of shared bikes, people have made fewer trips by car. The love for shared bikes is not only among young people, who were born in the 1900s, but als

3、o among people over sixty. At weekends, the number of the riders in Shenzhen reaches the top of all cities. On weekdays, the number of people who use shared bikes to travel to work is going up in Shanghai. It is said that bike-sharing will help improve the cities environment. It not only helps solve

4、 the traffic problems, but also will help to make more use of space in cities. Take Beijing as an example, if more people choose shared bikes, an area of five Birds Nest stadium(体育场） will be saved.,Bike-sharing is a new choice for short journeys in cities. It is good to the healthy development of th

5、e big cities. （开篇点题，使用共享单车的好处）,A report by a company found that shared bikes started the nations love for bikes again . Now more and more Chinese people are choosing bikes instead of cars to make short journey in cities.,（运用情况）,An engineer of that company says that since the start of shared bikes, p

6、eople have made fewer trips by car. The love for shared bikes is not only among young people, who were born in the 190s, but also among people over sixty.,（使用情况）,At weekends, the number of the riders in Shenzhen reaches the top of all cities. On weekdays, the number of people who use shared bikes to

7、 travel to work is going up in Shanghai.,（使用情况）,It is said that bike-sharing will help improve the cities environment. It not only helps solve the traffic problems, but also will help to make more use of space in cities. Take Beijing as an example, if more people choose shared bikes, an area of five

8、 Birds Nest stadium(体育场） will be saved.,（对应开头，再次使用共享单车的好处）,要求： 1.书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。 2.分段合理。全文分段一般不止一份自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。 3.要点齐全，不缺要点。 4.首尾呼应，自然成一体。 5.开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。 6.段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。 7.句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。 8.能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。,步骤（Writing steps）： 1.审题 2.列举写作要点。 3.列举关键短语和句型,王

9、美琪,刘继虎,环境保护,假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下： 表示欢迎，有利于家乡的发展。 感到担忧，造成环境污染等。 希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。 注意;80-100词 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，行文连贯。 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总字数,Dear Sir or madam, I am a middle school student ,Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours , Zhang Hua,今年扶贫是我国的政策。我们应该帮助贫困生。请你以学生会的名义写一封倡

10、议书，内容要点如下： 1.许多贫困家庭无力负担孩子去上学（afford） 2.孩子们没有足够的钱去买学习用品和衣物。 3.每个孩子都应尽我们最大的努力帮助他们。,注意： 1.文章开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总字数。 2.80词左右。,书面表达,Dear students, There are many children out of school around us. Some students are going to leave school because Thanks for your joining! Students Union,Dear student, There are man

11、y children out of school around us. Some students are going to leave school because their families cant afford to send them to school. At the same time , children dont have enough money to buy school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for them. So we should try our best to do something to help them, just like giving them school things, clothes , raise some pocket money for them and so on.