中考英语书面表达选择题练习1

1、【英语】中考英语书面表达选择题练习1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 面表达初三的学 生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有 步、喜悦。 根据表格提示，写一篇 “ Our school life in Grade Nine的短文，介” 九年 的学校生活，并提出希望和建 。老 工作 真 ，充 心在校学生（至少 两点）作 作 多舍弃 好周末其它活 ， 愿望（ 一到两点）要求：1所写内容必 包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当 ：2文章不少于90 ，开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数；3 意通 ，意思 ，条理清楚， 写 范；4文中不得出 真 姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade

2、NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.【答案】 Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. M

3、ost of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making

4、 efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gai

5、ns. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，内容 ，表达流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如at school， work hard ， most of ， patient enough ，help sb. with sth. ，all kinds ofproblems ， in our life ， as a result， as for students ， listen to ， be busy doing ， try to

6、do ， spend a lot of time doing ， not any more ，play basketball 等。而 It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be. 等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后

7、展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后打算给 Liz Payne留言 ,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum 参观的愿望。,你内容包括：1.简单介绍自己；2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听 Liz Payne的讲座）；3.预期收获。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；2.语句连贯,词数80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不

8、计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I m Li Hua,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Liz Payne,I m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I m writing to tell you that oucity will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit LondonCanal Museum. From www.canalmu

9、.uk, I know you will have a report“ An Update onththe Cotswold Canals” February,which6 will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, theThames and Severn Canal. What s more, I hope to learn mo

10、re about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum 以及听 Liz Payne 的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称 I 来叙述，时态应以一般

11、将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人

12、称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如I m writing to tellyou that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. .uk, I know you will have a report中使用了宾语从句；From“ An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th , which will happen durin

13、g the same period of our Winter Camp. 中有一个非限制性定语从句； And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。3近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角 ”投稿 ,内容包括：1. 雾霾的危害2. 雾霾产生的原因（2 个） 3. 应对雾

14、霾的措施（3 个）提示：雾霾smogpoisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 词数 110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people._【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused

15、great concern among people.Smog has a bad effect on peoples health.Many people, children and the old in particular,suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that

16、has caused this.The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people s burning coal, driving cars,industry production and so on.What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars andstricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Se

17、cond, for us individuals, living agreen life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice.Also plantingmore trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾

18、霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。4书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按

19、照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. NowI d

20、like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was b

21、ad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or sc

22、hool by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas?I m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，

23、告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短

24、文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to

25、 the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the enviro

26、nment. 等。5书面表达每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（ n） _ Ihave ”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。要求： 1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80 词左右。A（ n） _ I have_【答案】 A（ n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrappe

27、d by yellow cloth. It s a black toy gun and it can shot somsmall plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was ea

28、ger to have my own toy gun.One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. Aweek later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In o

29、rder to get it,father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I willremember my father s love forever. Every time I miss him, I ll take out the toy gun and sayyou, my dear father!【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开

30、描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。写作亮点：这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gunwrapped by yellow cloth （用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（ small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了 。在描述得到的 的 候不落俗套， 到了自己的家庭那 比 困 ，父 是通 努力工作 我 的，写作是富有感情

31、的，也通 段 把玩具 予了一定的意 。最后玩具的意 得到了升 ，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier ），上升到了保家 国的 面， 的一篇作文是有深度的，能 人感 的，是一篇 秀的范文。6 面表达共享 （ shared bikes）在 州投入使用以来， 人 来了 多便利，受到人 的追捧，改 了人 的出行方式，但同 也遇到了一些挑 ，是国民素 的“”照妖 ， 你根据表格中信息的提示， 21 世 英文 写一篇关于共享 看法的稿件。社会 状自从出 ， 受 誉。1.随 可 ，出行方便 多 2.有益健康，减少 染3. 用不高， 担得起1.未及 存在 2.占道 路你的 点我

32、 （考生自 ，至少2 点）注意事 ： 1.短文 包括表格中所有提示内容，要求 句通 ，意思 。2.表格中 “你的 点 ”一 用 23句 展开合理想象。作适当 。3. 数在 90 个左右，文章的开 部分已 出，不 入 数。 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Share

33、d bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are som

34、e problems too. Some people cant return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】这篇作文要求我们给 21 世纪英文报投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形

35、式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含

36、了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如 They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can

37、help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. 这几个长句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如Also, What s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。7写作某英文网站的 “ StudentLife 栏”目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someonehappy ”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:1. Who was the person

38、you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意： 1词数： 100 左右（题目不计入总词数）。2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。【答案】 Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldnt adjust

39、to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping

40、 in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5 个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正

41、确运用过去时态。写作亮点：既然 是一篇 叙文，就 完整地呈 故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明 （ Last summer），地点（ in rural area ）， 要概括事件（ teach children English ）， 是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短 和固定搭配的正确使用也 篇文章增色不少，例如 “adjust to （” 整以适 ）， “as time went by （”随着 的流逝）， “made great progress （”取得巨大 步）， “ keep on learning（ ”学 ）， “ In a word（ ”而言之）等等短 使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作

42、者 极的人生 度，表示如果 有机会自己 于参与， 使得 篇文章 构完整，表意更加清晰。8近期某英文 就 “ Snowplow Parents（ 雪机式父母） ” 一 展开 。 “ 雪机式父母 ”的特征是不惜一切代价 孩子 除他 生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困 ，以便他 可以 松 有成功的人生。 从下表的两种 点中 一种 点，并 合此 点 述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。理解不理解 点父母出于 孩子的 才 么做。父母控制一切，孩子没有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：1、 数： 60-80 。2、短文 包括所 点中的要点，可适当 。3、短文中不得出 真 的人名、校名等相关信息。_【答案】例文

43、I really cant understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in childrens lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,par

44、ents shouldnt do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【 解】1. 干解 ：本文是一篇 作文，要求就“ Snowplow Parents（ 雪机式父母）” 一 展开 ，并根据表格中所 出