英语作文写作模板

1、学习必备 欢迎下载 写作1 基本表达 人们认为：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 万能理由（Omnipotence） 1. 方便：convenient/ convenience 2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift waste time/ mone

2、y/ space; costly, lavish 4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative 5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6. 娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lon

3、ely 7. 环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8. 安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9. 经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10. 人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改） 1、字母大小写 2、怪符号 3、单词拼写 4、主谓一致 5、动词时态 6、名词单复数 四级作文的要求、评分标准及评卷实例 一、 四级考试对作文的要求 大学英语考试大纲明确规定

4、：四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文学习必备 欢迎下载 理通顺，表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误。 二、评分原则 四级考试作文采用总体评分（GLOBAL SCORING）的方法，即把内容和语言作为一个统一体进行综合评判。主要是看内容是否切题，表达是否充分，所用语言是否能清楚而明确地表达思想。评卷人员根据思想内容和语言表达的总体印象给出奖励分（REWARD

5、SCORES），并不是按语言点错误的多少扣分。 三、评分标准 作文题满分为15分。 阅卷标准共分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。 2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。 8分基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。 11分切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。 0分白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数档次（如8分）相似

6、，即定为（8分）；若认为稍优或劣于该档次，则可加一分（9分）或减一分（7分），但不得加减半分。字数不足应酌情扣分： 8189词：扣1分；7180词：扣2分；6170词：扣3分；5160词：扣 4分；50以下词：扣5分。 经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低分”制计算成绩，其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。 实例一 题目：BicyclesAn Impor

7、tant Means of Transport in China 提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及 （2）和汽车的比较 （3）自行车在中国的前途 Score: Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicyc

8、le, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. 学习必备 欢迎下载 So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compare

9、d to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesnt ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isnt too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesnt need any oil, an

10、d it cant cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles. Score: Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bic

11、ycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people - man and woman, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”. 注：1. 第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。 2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。 3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。 Compared with cars, bicycles

12、 are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes

13、, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. 注：1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。 2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于 3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词 4. cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive 5. be good for health 对健康有好处（万能理由） 6. Moreover 表示递进 In my op

14、inion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. 注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score: T

15、here millions of bicycles in todays China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in peoples daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need world, the over all

16、popular are bicycles strength, riders the but oil 学习必备 欢迎下载 especially in China. 注：第一句应该用there be结构 Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slo

17、w, it costs more times than a car. I think the population of Chinas bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be

18、the same as today but I believe that its quality will be improved. I、对比观点选择题： 1.有人认为； 2.另外一些人认为； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。（最好写成4段） 实例二 99年6月真题 Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择 2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的想法 When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but s

19、ome other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better. Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wro

20、ng way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books. 学习必备 欢迎下载 But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of

21、 information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better. To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.

22、I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. Bu

23、t those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limited. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the ot

24、her hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours. Most people thought that read books should have been selective. But others believed reading extensively was correction. 学习必备 欢迎下载 Selective books or reading extensively? Sure, you can choice one fr

25、om previous ideas, on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we interested, and it would be helpful for us. on another hand. Someones interesting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldnt reading at only one level. I confirmed all of these ide

26、as were good but werent wise. As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Dont treat these books with reckless abandon. The best technology of reading is connect. How should we read? Should we read selectively or e

27、xtensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our

28、 mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively. But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows m

29、uch in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively. Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively

30、in one field. Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books aregood to human beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men should read books widely. Because widereading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change 学习必备 欢迎下载 the world. It is m

31、y point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more b

32、eautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading. Score: Most people thought that read books should have been selective. But others believed reading extensively was correction. Sel

33、ective books or reading extensively? Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas, on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we interested, and it would be helpful for us. on another hand. Someones interesting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we

34、 couldnt reading at only one level. I confirmed all of these ideas were good but werent wise. As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Dont treat these books with reckless abandon. The best technology of reading

35、 is connect. Score: I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those boo

36、ks which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limited. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we

37、 can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours. Score: Some people thin reading shall be chosen.Becaus some books aregood to human beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people thin that men should read books widely

38、.Becaus widereading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to changethe world.Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausreadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsome people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched onT.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbook

39、sandgainmoreusefulknowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up thoseunhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time 学习必备 欢迎下载 and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading. 失分原因：结构失调，表述方式单一 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构： （启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者

40、是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Score: How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（启） 注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解 ? ? ? ? ? ? of modern science and ? ? m ? e ? ?SCNUN204 SYSTEM ?ad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant re

41、ad all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.（承） 注：1. 本段总分总结构 2. they argue that = they think that 3. with the development of. 随着的发展 4. whats more 递进关系，moreover 5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构： （转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句； （2）提出另一种观点或缺点； （3）本段的

42、支持性分论点 （4）本段总（可以省略）。 But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of

43、knowledge, we must read extensively.（转） 注：1. But 转折词（信号词） 2. they emphasize that = they think that 3. todays society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4. 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of ；knowledge/ much knowledge学习必备 欢迎下载 获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge 5. knows nothinglittle；he may be useles

44、she may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构： （合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法； （2）给出自己的观点。 Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合） Score: When it

45、 comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better. 注：结构非常好，可以套用。 Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those

46、good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books. ? ? ? ? 琀?*.,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。 2. as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones 3. lead us to the wr

47、ong way 改为 lead sb. astray 4. they suggest that = they think that 5. touch 碰（闪光点词汇：如教材P7：shouldering the responsibility of doing sth. 肩负起责任） But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book o

48、nly contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better. 注：1. hold 认为 同样表示“think”的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold 2. the best book 在西方国家是“圣经”的意思

49、 3. to know more, to read more 错误，中式英语 To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading. 四级作文真题 2003年1月 社会热点话题（三段：启、承、合） Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a comp

50、osition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 学习必备 欢迎下载 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1、当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2、诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实 It Pays to Be Honest 2002年6月 图表题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic S

51、tudent Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below: 1、上图所示为1990年、1995年、2002年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化； 2、请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）； 3、你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。 Student Use of Computers 2002年1月 书信题 Directions: For thi

52、s part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可

53、以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼有而有之。 January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr. President, 学习必备 欢迎下载 2001年6月 ? ? 爀? ?焒? ? ? 鐀 ? ? 匀牥楶散倠捡?2 ? ? ? ? ? 匀乃乕?4 猀畣n渀 猀畣n渀 ?代?木? ? 嬀祓瑳浥倠 潲散獳匀獹整m 猀獭?硥e 挀牳獳攮數 眀湩潬潧?硥e 猀牥楶散?硥e 氀慳獳攮數 猀捶潨瑳攮數 猀捶潨瑳攮數 猀捶潨瑳攮數 猀捶潨瑳攮數 猀捶潨瑳攮數 猀潰汯癳攮數 攀灸潬敲?硥e ?牴祡攮數 ?瑮?灲攮數 愀捴歨攮數 渀摶瑳慲?硥e 挀晴潭?硥e 愀捴歨牳?硥e 猀潴浲楬?硥e ?卍攮數 ? 一摶?楬湥却牥楶匀?敧瑮攮數 唀华攮數 愀杬攮數 眀慵捵瑬攮數 眀業牰獶?硥e 伀 y minutes to write a