[语言类考试复习资料大全]高级写作分类模拟题模拟2

1、书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。祝愿天下莘莘学子：学业有成，金榜题名！语言类考试复习资料大全高级写作分类模拟题模拟2高级写作分类模拟题模拟2写作题问题:1. PART ONEQuestion 1 The bar charts below show levels of wheat production and wheat prices in a European country for the period 1990-2000. Using the information from the bar charts, write a short report summarizing the chan

2、ges in production and prices between 1990 and 2000. Write 120-140 words. 答案:Introduction The aim of this report is to summarise the changes in production and average prices of wheat between 1990 and 2000. Findings Focusing our attention on wheat production, it can be seen from the graph that the out

3、put rose steadily over the period. A general upward trend from 0. 9 millions of tomes in 1990 to 2. 3 millions of tomes in 2000 is clearly recognizable. On the other hand, the average price of wheat totaled 1,400 /T in 1990, but in 1995 it increased rapidly reaching a peak of 2, 900 /T. In 2000 the

4、price fell to 2, 400 /T which was however more than the minimum price in 1990. Conclusion As can be seen from both graphs average price of wheat did not show the same characteristics as total wheat production.解析 该习作较好地完成了题目要求的写作任务，结构比较清晰，所用词汇和短语较丰富，例如：focus on，reach a peak；能运用恰当的连接词如on the other han

5、d，并且能够用到focusing on这样的分词放在句首做状语的结构。句型的使用也较丰富，如：it can be seen that，as can be seen from等等。但也有小的错误，例如：more than the minimum price.结尾部分表达欠佳，但并不影响整篇文章给人的好印象。 PART TWO Write an answer to ONE of the questions 2-4 in this part. Write your answer in 200-250 words. 2. Question 2 You have recently attended th

6、e following one-day courses: Developing Your Potential Trends in Electronic Commerce Managing People Reducing Costs Your companys Training Manager has asked you to write a short report about the training. Write the report for the Training Manager: describing the two courses which you found most usef

7、ul, explaining how you benefited from them, outlining the specific training courses you would like to attend next year, giving reasons why these courses would be useful to you. 答案:Report: Training courses Introduction The aim of this report is to summarise and assess the training courses I have rece

8、ntly attended for the use of the Training Manager. Courses In my opinion, the most useful courses were: Managing people and Trends in Electronic Commerce. Managing People was a one-day course focused on management techniques and their successful implementation. It examined different management style

9、s and their benefits and disadvantages. Trends in Electronic Commerce was a practically oriented one-day course. The main issues discussed involved: the latest trends in e-commerce, security of information, business to business (B2B) trading and potential savings enabled by e-cornered. Benefits Both

10、 of these courses were very interesting for me, as I work as a Purchase Manager. I am going to use some of the management techniques in my department. I would like to improve the current approach to motivation or organization of meetings for example. I think that motivating people is a key aspect of

11、 my job.Trends in Electronic Commerce course was also very useful for me as we are set to start ordering process using the Intemet technology. Conclusion Next year, I would like to attend at least one of the following courses: Effective Negotiations, Time Management, Communication-a key factor for s

12、uccess. As all of these topics are closely related to my profession, I am sure that it would be to my and also companys benefit if I could attend these courses.解析 这是一篇比较好的习作，能够完成题目要求的所有写作任务。文章结构清晰，让人一目了然。语言使用清楚得当，词汇运用比较丰富。能够使用“I would like to”等表达句式，并能正确运用定语从句，例如：the training. courses I have recently

13、 attended for the use of the Training Manager.连接词的运用也较恰当如“as”。但文章中也有小的错误，例如：would be to my and also companys benefit，此外时态的运用稍显混乱。 3. Question 3 Your manager has asked you to contact a local business school, inviting their students to apply for a three-month work placement in your company. Write a le

14、tter to the Principal of the business school: introducing your company and the idea of the placement, describing what work the placement would involve, explaining what skills and qualities the successful applicant should have, saying how the placement would benefit the applicant. 答案:27 March 2003 To

15、: Mr. Thomas George Invitation for a three-month placement for students in Zee Online Education Ltd. Dear Sir, Zee Online Education is a leading multinational company in the field of online learning 答案:As it has been decided that changes in the customer service of the company ought to be made, the f

16、ollowing points are brought up for attention: 1. Existing customer service is inadequate because: a) It is too slow in the attention to the client, and b) very often erroneous information is given to the client. Summarizing there is an evident waste of time and loss of client variability. 2. Extendi

17、ng opening hours of the Sales Department, as suggested by the Sales Director will solve the problem only partially due to the fact that- a) Not sufficient clients need the service during after-hours, and b) the root of the problem springs from the initial delay the customer generally has to suffer.

18、3. Additional measures that should be studied for possible approval are: 3.1-Passing phone enquiries directly to a call centre. 3.2-Training junior salesman in customer service policy of the company. 4. The selection of the above listed measures is based on the following information gathered from th

19、e Marketing and Personnel Departments as well as from a considerable amount of data obtained directly from the client and which pinpoint the following flaws: 4. 1. Clients who telephone the company complain regularly of the excessive time they are kept hanging on the line until someone attends them. 4.2. Another regular complaint from clients