新高考书面表达读后续写教学总结

1、此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no mon ey. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The n ext morning he took two baskets of vegetables to tow n. But it was raining hard that after noon and there were fe

2、w people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a pers on lyin g on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and

3、there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without tak ing the baskets with him.The n ext after noon the farmer was sent to the police statio n. Havi ng show nthe baskets, an officer asked,“Are these yours ”“Yes, sir. ” the farmer atimidly （胆怯地）.“ Have yQJiled the m

4、an”“ No, no, sir. ” the farmer said in a hurry.“ Whe n did you see the dead man ”“ About seve n last eve ning.”“ Did you sekilled the mar”“ No, sir. ” The officer brought out a knife and asked,“ Hait yet ”“ No, sir. ” The officenbecandfetold the policemen to beat him upand sent him into pris on. the

5、 officer wan ted to trap the farmer into the con fession供 认）,but the farmer didn t admit he was the murderer.1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.The farmer

6、was lucky .A few days later,此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除Possible an swer:Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up agaiThe farmer was very afraid, he thought he would be sen ten ced to death by killi ng people, but he did nt, he was innocent. He must tell people the tr

7、uth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that some one could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days latera young man came to the police statio n with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw t

8、he police office used a knife killing the man late in the eve ning. he was so frighte ned and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real crim in al. After the inv estigati on, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into

9、pris on and the policema n who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers二、读后续写（25分）I was resp onding to a call from a small brick flat in a quiet part of tow n. I assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-goefsor some one who had just had a

10、fight with a lover, or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the in dustrial part of tow n.When I arrived at 2： 30 a.m., the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances many drivers just honk （按喇 叭） once or twice, wait a minute, the

11、n drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depe nded on taxis as their only means of tran sportatio n.Uni ess a situati on smelled of dan ger I always went to the door.This passe nger might be some one who n eeds my assistance reas oned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked.“ Jus

12、tansweutsi asfil,elderly voice. I could hear someth ing being dragged across the floor. After a long pause the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat , like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.The apart

13、ment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.只供学习与交流此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除“Would you carry my bag out to the car ” she

14、said. I toothe suitcase to the cab, then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly toward the cab.She kept tha nking me for my kindn ess.“ Itshothoig her.“ I tost trytreat my passe ngers the way I would want my mother treated.”注意：1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.

15、 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Having give n me an address, a hospice , she asked. Gould you drive through downtown?” Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and-itParagraph 1:Having give n me an address, a hospice , she asked. Gould you drive t

16、hrough downtown?” Asked why we didntake the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last cha nce for her to visit the city. We drove through the n eighborhood where she and her husba nd had lived. Besides, she asked me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit starin

17、g into the darkness, saying nothing. At last, she said she was tired and wan ted to go to the hospice.Paragraph 2:we drove in sile nce to the address she had give n me , and it waslow buildi ng, where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nu rses who must have bee n expect ing her came o

18、ut to the cab as soon as we pulled up. I ope ned the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman was already seated in a wheelchair. Whe n she asked how much she owed me, without thi nkin g, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug . It was my assistance that helped one of weak people rea

19、lize her wish.三、读后续写（25分） 只供学习与交流此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除My fiance (未婚夫)and I were excited about shopping for our first home. But our funds were limited , and none of the houses in our price range seemed satisfactory.One age nt recomme nded a house in particular. Although her descripti on soun ded won

20、 derful, the price was bey ond our ran ge, so we decli ned. But she kept urging us to have a look at least .We fin ally did and it was love at first sight. It was Our Home, small and charm ing, overlook ing a quiet lake. Walk ing through the rooms and talk ing with the own ers, a nice elderly couple

21、, we felt the warmth and happ in ess of the marriage with in that home. As perfect as it was, the price remained too high for us. But every day, we would sit by the lake, looking at the house and dreaming of what it would be like to live there.Days later, we made a(n) offefar below the asking price.

22、 Surprisingly, they did n laugh at us. They ren ewed their offer in stead . It was also much more tha n we could afford, but far less tha n the orig inal ask ing price.The n ext day, we got a disappo inting message that ano ther buyer had offered a much higher price. Even so, we decided to talk with

23、 the owners directly. We made our final offer, which still was thousands of dollars less than the other buyer s IWe knew it, but we had to try. Nobody knew if we could get it.1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1Paragraph 2;Paragraph

24、1We went to the owners home after we made our final offer,the other buyer came to visit the own ers, he said the price he offered was much higher tha n ours, he begged the owners to sell it to him, then the owner asked the buyer, “why do you want this house? the buyer said ” because it is near the c

25、ity, I want to buy it for investment. I can rent it to earn money” the owner thought for a while and then looked at him and said, Im sorry, sir, I can sell my house to you, because I am look ing for some one who truly loves my house, not just for money”此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除Paragraph 2:The owner loo

26、ked at us and said, “ want to sell my house to you” then he expla in ed: He d see n us sitti ng by the lake all those times; he knew how much we loved the place and that we appr6cdte the years of work they had put into their home; he realized he would take a loss by selling it to us, but it was wort

27、hwhile; we were the people they wan ted to live there. He told us to con sider the differe nce in the price “ an early wedding presenhat show we found our home and how I learned that when people are kindthey are not strangers, only friends we haven t yet me另一个购房者来到房主家，他说他出的价格要比我们高很多，他请求房主把房 子卖给他，然后房

28、主问他你为什么要卖我的房子那个购房者说因为房子在城市附近，我想卖了投资，我可以出租赚钱。那房主想了一会儿然后看着他说。 对不起先生我不能把我的房子卖给你，因为我要找一个真正爱我的房子的人， 不只是钱的问题。他知道把房子卖给我们他要损失一笔钱，但这是值得的，我 们就是他们想要局长在这所房子的人，他告诉我们他就当把这差价作为我的结 婚礼物。那就是我们找到家的过程，我也从中学到当人们山里的时候，他们就 不是陌生人，只是我们还没遇见的朋友。那个房主又看着我们说，我想把我的房子卖给你们，然后他解释说他看见我们 一直坐在湖边，他知道我们是多么爱这个地方我们赞赏他们这些年对这座房子 所投入的工作，他意识到把

29、房子卖给我们他将损失很多，但这是值得的，我们 是他们想让我们住在哪儿的人，他告诉我们那个差价作为我们结婚的礼物。四、读后续写（25分）A frie nd of mine, n amed Jack, received an expe nsive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin（顽童）was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir?he a

30、skech Jack answered, “ Yes, my brother gave it to me for ChristmasThe boy was” surprised.“ You mean your brother gave it to you and it did cost you nothing? Sir, Iwish ” He hesitate犹豫）,Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wan ted, but what the boy said surprised him greatly. “ I wish, ” the b

31、oy went“dhat I could be a brother like that. Jack looked at the boy in surprise, and the n he said aga in,“ Would you like to take a ride in my car? “ Oh yes, I ” Ibvfeto ,” the boy answered.After a short ride, the boy turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mi nd driv ing in front o

32、f my house?”Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what the boy wan ted. He wan ted to show his n eighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong aga in .“Will you stop where those two steps are?the boy asked.只供学习与交流此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除1所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3

33、续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the step Paragraph 2Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his ca Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard him coming back, but he was not coming fast. He was carryi

34、ng his little crippled残疾的）brother. He sat dow n on the step and poin ted to the car.“Therdne is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn t cost him a cent. And some day I m going to give youjust like it thenyou can see for yourself all the nice thin

35、gs in the Christmas windows that I ve been trying to tell you about”Paragraph 2Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three bega n an un forgettable holiday ride., looking at all those beautiful things. That Christma

36、s Eve ,Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “ more blessed to give tha n to receive.” He also learned what it means to be an elder brother like that”五、读后续写（25分）Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passe nger at 2:30 a. m. Whe n I arrived to collect, I f

37、ound the buildi ng was dark except for a sin gle light in a ground floor win dow.I walked to the door and knocked, Just a minute, answered a weak, elderly voice.After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase.I took the suitcase to

38、the car, and then returned to help the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly towards the car.此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除She kept tha nking me for my kindn ess. Its nothin g, I told her. I just try to treat my passe ngers the way I would want my mother treated.Oh, youre such a good man. She said. Wh

39、e n we got into the taxi, she gave me an address, and the n asked, Could you drive through dow ntow n?Its not the shortest way, I an swered quickly.Oh, Im in no hurry, she said. Im on my way to a hospice （临终医院）.I dont have any family left. The doctor says I dont have very long.I quietly reached over

40、 and shut off the meter 计价器）.For the n ext two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked, the n eighborhood where she had lived, and the fur niture shop that had once bee n a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a girl.Sometimes shed ask me to slow dow

41、n in front of a particular build ing and would sit stari ng into the dark ness, say ing nothing.At daw n, she sudde nly said, Im tired. Lets go no w. We drove in sile nee Lo the address she had give n me.How much do I owe you? she asked.Nothing. I said.You have to make a livi ng, she an swered. Oh,

42、there are other passe ngers, I an swered. She said tha nks to me, but she looked so sad.1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1Almost without thinkin g, I bent and gave her a hugParagraph 2I was on my way to visit he Possible an swer:Al

43、most without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug She held onto me tightly.Before the woma n left , I said to her, “ My mother treated every one kin dly, she is a great pers on, but she passed away years ago. you are like my mothethe woma n此文档仅供收集于网络，如有侵权请联系网站删除said, thank you. If you want to visit m

44、e, I tell you my story. ” Then the woman left. After a long pause, I drove the taxi to go home.Paragraph 2The n ext day, I was on my way to visit herThe old woma n told me that she used to be a milli on aire. She became immersed in making mon ey. She was the owner of a particular buildi ng we saw la

45、st ni ght. But she n eglected her family. her only son died one year ago because of can cer. She sold everythi ng to save him, but failed. How sad! At last, the old woman said to me, Life is short, but please be in no hurry. Though every one has to earn money to make a living, always remember that f

46、amily is the most important thing to you,” I said nothing but nodded hard.六、读后续写（25分）Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station加 油站）about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was pla nni

47、ng to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register收款台）,I said hello to an older couple who were also pay ing for gas.I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and won dered what I should do. A car pulled up beh ind me. It was the couple I had spoke n to at the gas stati on. They said they would take me to my friends .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husba nd gave me his bus in ess card.I wrote him a