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1、段落展开 Tension 1教书育人 例子法 理由段=1句主题+x句解释+y句举例 2教书育人 （1）每一个论点都要有理由 （2）每一个理由都要有例子 （3）每一个例子都要有细节 3教书育人 1句主题 注意：主题句简洁，尽可能短，否则第 二层（解释）就无法拓展。 4教书育人 y 句例子 例子是万证之母 5教书育人 y 句例子 真例子和假例子一样 中国例子和外国例子一样 名人例子和普通人例子一样 一例与多例一样 本人例子和别人例子一样 6教书育人 The new science and technology has brought great convenience to modern soci

2、ety. Modern transport means such as light trails, the underground, automobiles and jet airlines, makes traveling a piece of cake. My personal experience is a case in point. 举例法：1.细例子的展开 7教书育人 My grandparents live in a small village in northwestern China. When I was a child, the last thing I wanted t

3、o do was go to visit my grandparents from the city my parents and I was in. We had to take several kinds of vehicles before we finally got there. However, due to the development of transportation system, we can now take a direct train and this has reduced the journey by 8 hours. 8教书育人 The new scienc

4、e and technology has brought great convenience to modern society. Modern transport means such as light trails, the underground, automobiles and jet airlines, makes traveling a piece of cake. 9教书育人 Do you agree that people should have hobbies and do physical activities that are very different from on

5、es work? A hobby different from work can help us relax. 10教书育人 A friend of mine is a technician in an international cell phone company. Her job requires her long hours to deal with clients and works in front of a screen. 11教书育人 The job can be stressful at times and requires use of significant techni

6、cal knowledge. In her spare time she practices dancing. Dancing is extremely different from her work because it focuses more on physical activity and less on mental effort. 12教书育人 My friend claims that dancing has really helped her relax after a long days work. She can shut her mind off, listen to m

7、usic and express herself through her body. It is also a great way for her to keep healthy. 13教书育人 Dancing has been helpful in reducing stress in my friends work life and has made her much happier overall. Her decision to take up a hobby completely different from her work has had a positive impact on

8、 her life. 14教书育人 Do you agree or disagree: Children should not be allowed to play computer games. 20080607 15教书育人 Do you agree or disagree: Children should not be allowed to play computer games. 20080607 16教书育人 computer games 魔兽世界: WoW CS DOTA 17教书育人 computer games 魔兽世界: WoW Blizzard（暴雪公司） 十大职业：德鲁伊

9、、猎人、法师 、圣骑士、牧师、潜行者、萨满祭 司、术士、战士、死亡骑士。 18教书育人 computer games 魔兽世界: WoW Blizzard（暴雪公司） 十大职业：德鲁伊、猎人、法师 、圣骑士、牧师、盗贼、萨满祭司 、术士、战士、死亡骑士。 19教书育人 Playing computer games can enhance our ability of teamwork. 20教书育人 Almost everyone has heard of or even played the classic game-world of warcraft, which is produced

10、by Blizzard, the most famous game producer of the world. 21教书育人 In this game, players alone can not enter some large 40-player raid to complete a huge mission, so they must gather into a group with different careers such as warriors, priests, and warlocks. 22教书育人 Only with a suitable career configur

11、ation and good communication among players can they accomplish the complicated missions. 23教书育人 In this sense, the game does offer children a perfect platform to improve their abilities of communications, teamwork and leadership. 24教书育人 Almost everyone has heard of or even played the classic game-wo

12、rld of warcraft, which is produced by Blizzard, the most famous game producer of the world. In this game, players alone can not enter some large 40-player raid to complete a huge mission, so they must gather into a group with different careers such as warriors, priests, and warlocks. Only with a sui

13、table career configuration and good communication among players can they accomplish the complicated missions. In this sense, the game does offer children a perfect platform to improve their abilities of communications, teamwork and leadership. 25教书育人 The new science and technology has brought great

14、convenience to modern society. Modern transport means such as light trails, the underground, automobiles and jet airlines, makes traveling a piece of cake. 举例法：2.粗例子的并列 26教书育人 Communication becomes much easier with mobile phones, the Internet, and fax machines. 27教书育人 Communication becomes much easi

15、er with mobile phones, the Internet, and fax machines. 28教书育人 Communication becomes much easier with mobile phones, the Internet, and fax machines. Meanwhile, the household appliances such as air conditioners, washing machines, microwave ovens and refrigerators, relieve us from everyday chores. In a

16、 word, with the development of new science and technology, our life becomes more convenient in many aspects of our life. 29教书育人 Communication becomes much easier with mobile phones, the Internet, and fax machines. Meanwhile, the household appliances such as air conditioners, washing machines, microw

17、ave ovens and refrigerators, relieve us from everyday chores. In a word, with the development of new science and technology, our life becomes more convenient in many aspects of our life. 30教书育人 Communication becomes much easier with mobile phones, the Internet, and fax machines. Meanwhile, the house

18、hold appliances such as air conditioners, washing machines, microwave ovens and refrigerators, relieve us from everyday chores. In a word, with the development of new science and technology, our life becomes more convenient in many aspects of our life. 31教书育人 Communication becomes much easier with m

19、obile phones, the Internet, and fax machines. Meanwhile, the household appliances such as air conditioners, washing machines, microwave ovens and refrigerators, relieve us from everyday chores. In a word, with the development of new science and technology, our life becomes more convenient in many as

20、pects of our life. 32教书育人 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past. 举例法：3.数字例子 33教书育人 Early independence causes many young adult to fail. A recent survey can back up my point. 34教书育人 The survey, conducted by USA

21、 Today, after polling thousands of college graduates, has found that a significant percentage of respondents claimed that they have difficulty finding well-paying jobs and have to ask for help of their families. 35教书育人 玩电脑游戏可以帮助减缓压力。 36教书育人 The researcher emailed 10,000 users of a popular online gam

22、e and got 1,212 to complete a survey that included questions relating to their gaming habits and how they feel before and after games. 37教书育人 The participants were given a sweet 5- euro credit to the gaming site for completing the 15-minute survey. The survey revealed that, as predicted, online gami

23、ng seems to ease recovery from job fatigue. 38教书育人 Economists at the University of Texas- Austin analyzed data from five large surveys conducted between 1971 and 2009 in the USA, Canada, Germany, and Britain. They found that beautiful people are generally happier than the plain Jane or Even ugly Joe

24、. 39教书育人 学生穿校服可以省下更多的时间学习。 40教书育人 A recent survey can back up this point. The Beijing Youth made a study of 2,400 students for a period of two years. 41教书育人 Despite their genders, religious background, there is one thing in common: most respondents claimed that they spend an average half an hour put

25、ting on make-up and choosing clothes before going to school, and their examination score is lower since too much time is wasted. 42教书育人 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 take for example 例子的标志词 43教书育人 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 take for example 以为例省略号里只能 填名词，不能 填句子 例子的标志词 44教书育人 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 take for example 以为例省略号里

26、只能 填名词，不能 填句子 for instance 例子的标志词 45教书育人 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 take for example 以为例省略号里只能 填名词，不能 填句子 for instance比如= for example 例子的标志词 46教书育人 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 take for example 以为例省略号里只能 填名词，不能 填句子 for instance比如= for example such as 例子的标志词 47教书育人 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 take for example 以为例省略号里只能 填名词，不能

27、填句子 for instance比如= for example such as例如后面跟名词， 切记不能用在 句首 例子的标志词 48教书育人 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 This point is best illustrated with the example of 这个观点可以 用的例子 最有力地证明 后面跟名词 This point can be confirmed by the example of 这个观点可以 被的例子 支持 后面跟名词 consider for example 以为例省略号里填 名词或者that 从句 is a case in point. 是一个恰

28、当 的例子 省略号里填 名词 49教书育人 举例之后 一定要强调这样的例子不胜枚举 Such examples could be multified indefinitely. The list would be endless if we try to make an inventory of such examples. 例子的结尾： 50教书育人 因果链拓展因果链拓展 解释：因果链扩展就是为中间段落 主题句找“前因后果”。 使用情况: 原因-主题句-后果 51教书育人 主题句：天下雨-我迟到 因果链扩展：天下雨路滑我走慢了 我迟到了-漏听了重要知识点对我的学 习是有害的 天下雨我给女朋友

29、送伞-路滑我走慢 了送晚了挨骂了独自一人郁闷去了 后来想起上课-我迟到了-漏听了重要知 识点对我的学习是有害的 52教书育人 例一：政府应该把钱投在儿童教育上还是 大学教育上 主题句：孩子年龄小，处在关键时期-对 儿童教育进行投资是最有效果的 因果链：孩子年龄小，处在关键时期-这 个阶段吸收知识比较快-教授的知识越早 对他们将来的发展越有利-这样的教学投 资就是最具回报的 53教书育人 Children aged 3-5 years old are quick learners in the new knowledge. Once imparted these new information,

30、 children will fast respond to them, which will be memorized in a short time and will not be forgotten in the later years. The more advanced knowledge children learn, the better they will grow. That is, early education is the most effective one. 54教书育人 例2：分析青少年犯罪的原因 主题句1：父母离婚-孩子犯罪 因果链：传统道德衰落-父母离婚孩子

31、未得到照顾-感到被父母抛弃容易受到 坏人诱导孩子犯罪-对社会安定是有害 的 55教书育人 In the first place, the increase in juvenile delinquency is the result of the rising divorce rate. With the decline of moral standards, many couples separate when they quarrel with each other. When they decide to separate, a majority of them do not take i

32、nto account the influence on their children. 56教书育人 Children who are not taken care of feel that they have been abandoned by their parents and the whole society. Consequently, the minors are easily led by bad people who fear to commit crime by themselves. 57教书育人 例3：孩子要不要自己管理零花钱 主题句：鼓励孩子处理自己的零花钱-培 养孩

33、子好的消费习惯 因果链：父母给孩子零花钱-孩子学习合 理分配-使用不当会过的拮据在失败中 吸取教训养成良好的消费习惯 58教书育人 Encouraging children to handle their own pocket money will help them to cultivate good spending habits. This is because when the patents give the monthly money to a kid at the very beginning of the month, he or she then has to learn t

34、o arrange the spending plan carefully. For instance, how much will he spend on snacks; how much will he allocate to stationery; or maybe has to save some for an extra-class club. 59教书育人 If the child spends the money unwisely, such as using up all the 30 dollars within the first 3 days, or investing

35、all the bucks on the Barbie dolls, as a result, he or she has to endure the following days pennilessly. Consequently, in the long run, the children must learn from their failure, and gradually form a reasonable spending habit, which is significant for a successful financially responsible adult. 60教书

36、育人 例子4：出国读书好不好？ 主题句：孩子出国留学可以培养孩子独 立自主的能力 因果链：国与国之间的经济文化交流增加 孩子出国留学变多缺乏家庭朋友帮忙- -自己解决问题可以培养孩子独立自主的 能力，增强自信 61教书育人 Since international cultural and economic communication is dramatically increasing, there is a growing tendency for wealthy family to send their children abroad for further education. 62教书

37、育人 But children in a strange country will lack the assistance from their family members and friends to overcome studying difficulties or deal with daily chores such as saving daily expenses and having regular meals every day. 63教书育人 In this way, they have to cultivate their ability to be fully indep

38、endent to work out all these by themselves, which leads to the increase of confidence among children. 64教书育人 1.I think serious TV shows can be used as supplementary teaching tools. For many American students, once they get back home, the first thing that they do is to turn on the television. Therefo

39、re, recommending to their students serious TV shows that contain reflections on history, economy, science or social justice can really help teachers extend teaching into their students leisure time. 65教书育人 2. One reason I believe its a teachers responsibility to help students learn is that many stud

40、ents are of a young age. A firstor second-grade teacher works with children who are only six or seven years old. At this age, a student is too young to recognize the value of education. Therefore, it should be the teachers job to make sure the children can learn. 66教书育人 3. Music is a quick and conve

41、nient mood enhancer. Music media, like CDs, are cheap and available everywhere. Mp3 is also widely obtainable and affordable. As a result, you can stimulate your emotions at the flick of a switch. 67教书育人 Hearing the lyrics of a song can easily create feelings of sadness or happiness. A certain melod

42、y can relax us or excite us. It can even put us in a romantic or solemn mood. Music is a great way to control and modify our moods and emotions. It is far cheaper and healthier than other mood enhancers, like alcohol and cigarettes. 68教书育人 类型类型单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 原因 as因为 注意这两个词后 面要跟从句而不 能只跟一个名词 since

43、 due to 注意这两个词后 面要跟名词而不 能跟从句 owing to 因果关系的标志词 69教书育人 类型类型 单词或词组单词或词组解释解释说明说明 结果 hence 因此 用在句首或句中， 如果用句中，则 句中用分号 thus therefore as a consequence作为结果 用在句首比较多， 后面用逗号 as a result consequently so that因此用在句中 目的 thereby一次达 到的 目的 不用用在句首， 在正式英语中后 面加动名词 70教书育人 不是关系的关系 巧妙运用paraphrase转述 耍赖法 71教书育人 in other wor

44、ds that is that is to say i.e. By that I mean What is meant by that is 耍赖法的标志词 72教书育人 Another reason Im against students being in control is that it means students wont study as much. By that I mean if students get to pick the program, theyll only pick the areas they like. 73教书育人 Taking a variety of subjects provides a common core of kn