2017年中考英语满分作文鉴赏

1、2017中考英语满分作文鉴赏现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。 作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护 环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个 低碳生活”的中学生。请以“ MyLow-carbon Life为题，写一篇短文描述自己的 低碳生活”内容包括：1. 地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。2. 你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到 低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室 及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。3. 号召更多的人加入到 低碳生活”中来。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经

2、给出，不计入总词数。My Low-carb on LifeThe en vir onmen tai polluti on is worse and worse today.【优秀满分范文】My Low-carb on LifeThe en vir onmen tai polluti on is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut dow n, and water and air are polluted. As a stude nt I try to have a low-carb on life to save en ergy and redu

3、ce polluti on.Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and n ever waste water.I wish more stude nts to joi n me and make the earth more an

4、d more beautiful.【写作要求】每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌 朋友啊朋友！你可曾想 起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我 ”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇 90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。【优秀满分范文】Frie ndsWhat are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are thosepeople who can help you when you are in trouble. Don t forget the say

5、ing,“A frin n eed is a frie nd in deed.CarFtelriyou your mistakes, though what they sayis hard for you to liste n to. You can share your happ in ess, trouble and worry withfrien ds. Some one also says,“ You can t walk any step without a frie nd.” So I thifriends are very importa nt to us. I would li

6、ke to make as many frie nds as possible.【写作要求】最近，你们班就 是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一， 你的看法如何？根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers为题，写一篇 短文。原因赞成帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己；反对怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解；你的观点？（至少两点）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。参考词汇：美德virtueShould We Help

7、 Stra ngers?Rece ntly our class had a discussi on about whether we should help stra ngeDiffere nt stude nts have differe nt opinions【优秀满分范文】Should We Help Stra ngers?Rece ntly our class had a discussi on about whether we should help stra ngeDiffere nt stude nts have differe nt opinionsSome think we

8、should try to help strangers Helping others is a virtue, and helping others is helping ourselves We may come across some trouble and need others help some day If every one isnt willi ng to help us just because we are stra ngers to them its hard to imagine what our world will be like .However, some a

9、re afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble. Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindn ess.In my opinion , we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help but we should also protect ourselves from gett ing into trouble If every on

10、e tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love .【写作要求】某英语报开展“ How to Deal with Our Study Problems征文比赛，请你根据提示的 内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像 蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；2. 我们应该足够细心，因为 失之毫厘，谬以千里”；3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得

11、大的进步。5. 有问题时，我们要求：1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 词数90个左右；3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整【优秀满分范文】How to Deal with Our Study ProblemsAlthough we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful eno ugh,

12、 because “ a miss is as good as a mile ” . We should also achieve a balanee between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don tlose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.s not wise to keepWhe n hav ing problems, we can ask people around us for help. It

13、 our worries to ourselves.【写作要求】学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The PersonWho Has In flue need Me Most的英语文章。内容要点如下：1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时 间都奉献给了工作；4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。5. 我希望要求：1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯;2. 词数90个左右；3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用 2-3句话

14、补充完整【优秀满分范文】The Person Who Has In flue need Me MostMy mother is the pers on who has in flue need me most.She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can t be too careful. She oftenworks extra hours. She has

15、 devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.I hope I can be a pers on like her. I also hope she will pay more atte nti on to her own health. She d better have more time to relax herself.【写作要求】假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上，以“ Walk

16、 for childre n in poor areas为题，为某中学生英文报写一 篇报道，内容要点如下：1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款2. 10月23日，星期六3. 路径：学校一市中心4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活 动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5万多元。5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为 注意：1.报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3. 词数80个左右。【优秀满分范文】Walk for childre n in poor areas

17、Not long ago, our school orga ni zed a charity walk to raise money for childre n in poor areas.It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. Bu

18、t during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meanin gful experie nce and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.【写作要求】保护环境，人人有责”你想成为一名绿色使者吗？请

19、行动起来吧！其实，环保 就在我们身边。请以“ How to Be a Gree ner Person为题，写一篇短文。注意:1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2. 短文词数90左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇： draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sortHow to Be a Gree ner Pers on?It s our duty to protect our environment around us.【优秀满分范文】How to be a gree ner

20、pers onIt s our dutypcotect the inviyonment around us.Whe n we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a bus. Whe n we go out foractivities, we shouldn t step on the grass. We can t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we d better use a cloth bag. At home we canwatee and electricity.When we lea

21、ve a room, we should turn off the ligts. At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shoudn t lispop music or spit in pulic.Let s do something to protect ourvironment.【写作要求】灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄？”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生 命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄 一.Dr Norman B

22、ethune1. Natlonality（国籍）:Canada2. Hobby: taking photos3. Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; inven ted medical tools二.Liu Xia ng1. Nationality: China2. Hobby: singing3. Main stories: won the first4. Olympic gold medal in the men s 110m hurdles eve nt in Athe ns; set a worl

23、d record in the same eve nt in Lausa nne从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以 The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。要求：包含所选信息卡上的内容；适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等； 不能出现表明你身份的信息； 词数80左右，不含已给出部分。The Hero in My HeartAs we know, most people have heroes in their hearts.Forme,【优秀满分范文1】The Hero in My HeartAs we know，most people have heroes in their hea

24、rts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Can ada.Dr Beth une was good at perform ing operati ons. And tak ing photos was his hobby .In 1938，he came to China. He ope ned hospitals and inven ted medical tools. He workedso hard that he saved thousands of Chines

25、e people. He didn t stop to take care of hisown injured hand and died.I am deeply moved by his stories. So I work hardttbday and do my best to help others.【优秀满分范文2】The Hero in My HeartAs we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me Liu Xia ng is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chin

26、ese sportsma n.Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004, he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men, s 110m hurdles eve nt in Athe ns. Then, he set a world record in the same eve nt in Lausa nne. Besides trai ning and tak ing part in competitio ns, Liu Xia ng also likes singing and he sings well.Wi

27、th his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.【写作要求】请以“My Favourite Great Book为题，根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文， 注意适当表达自己的看法。1. Who is the writer of the great book?2. What is the main idea of the book?3. Who are the importa nt characters?4. What

28、s the theme of the story?【优秀满分范文】My Favourite Great BookMy favourite great book is The Adve ntures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain.Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy. He lives with his aunt Polly. His aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two fri

29、ends, Huck and Joe. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he getslost in a cave. And fin ally Tom and Huck find a box of gold. Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters. Becky is pretty with fair hair. Huck is Tom s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad ma

30、n of the story.The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.【写作要求】某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“ How to keep a goodrelationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇80个词左右的 英语短文参加此次活动：1. 父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题2你对这些问题的看法；3你与父母保持良好关系的做法。How to keep a good relati on ship with

31、 pare ntsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My pare nts n ever allow me to go out【优秀满分范文】How to keep a good relati on ship with pare ntsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My pare nts n ever allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don t aihooseenby own clothes, either.

32、 Andthey pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don t quiteun dersta nd me.However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don t allow me to makemy own decisi ons and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright

33、 future.In order to keep a good relati on ship with my pare nts, I study hard, liste n to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.【写作要求】Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club,从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面 所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。In the pastNowPers on alitiesshy, quiet, get n ervous easilybr

34、ave, outgo ingHobbiesread ingreadi ng, singingAbilitiesgood at dancing, singing要求：1. 覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Joining a club sometimes cha nges a pers on greatly.【优秀满分范文】Joining a club sometimes cha nges a pers on greatly.Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get n ervous eas

35、ily and her face ofte n turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now,Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn t afraid of speaking out in public anymore.What s more, she has lots

36、oo hbies, such as singing, writi ng and dancing. She isgood at them as well.People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.【写作要求】以“My Weekend Housewor为题写一篇短文，谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活， 并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。用英语写一篇70词左右的短文

37、要求：内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，表达正确。【优秀满分范文】My Weeke nd HouseworkOn last Saturday morning I got up at about seven o clock. After breakfast, I went tothe store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shop in g. I thi nk it s fun. Then I swept the floor. I didn t do the laundry and the dishes. I don

38、t likewash in g. In the after noon I clea ned the yard. After that I folded my clothes and made my bed.【写作要求】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于表达，更要善于倾听。请你 根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “ Bei ng a Good Liste ne的英文演讲稿。凶注意：1 词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好，不计入总词数；2短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3 短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。Being a Good Liste nerG

39、ood after noon, every one!Today I d like to share my ideas of“ Being a Good Listener” withyou.Thank you for your liste ning!【优秀满分范文】Being a Good Liste nerGood after noon, every one!Today I d like to share my ideas of“ Being a Good Listener ” with you.Good liste ning can always show respect and build

40、 good relati on ships with people.Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust each other. Teachers should also liste n to their stude nts so that they can in crease their un dersta nding and improve relati on ships. Stude nts should liste n to their classma

41、tes, then their frien dship will be in creased and they will help each other.we d better be patient while listening. Don t forget to keep silent while listening. In aword, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.Thank you for your liste ning!【写作要求】为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安

42、全为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。1. 慎重交友2.遇险报警3安全饮食4.其他（1-2点）注意：1）内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥2）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3）词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇： be careful, on line, dan ger, call.for, go badHow to keep safe?As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggesti ons.First,【优秀满分范文】How to keep safe?As tee nagers, we shoul