初中英语素材中考英语作文模板作文病句和错句修改

1、中考英语作文 模板 作文病句和错句修改 中考英语作文 英语作文模板：图表作文的框架 as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthe table(graph/picture/pie/chart),_ 作文题目的议题 has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from in to in . From the sharp/mark

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5、 for your kind consideration and reference. I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I amlooking forward to your replies at your earliest Best regards for your health and success.

6、Sincerely yours, X X X 中考英语作文 英语作文模板：现象说明文 Recently ,what amazes us most is,it is ture that There are many reasons explaining.The main reason is. what is more.thirdly .As a result. Considering all there,.For one thing ,for another .In Conclusion. 一种事物或现象（负面意义倾向） 关于A的话题，早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角

7、落， 都有越来越多的关于 A的议论。 给 A 一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社 会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的 不良影响。 认真分析后我们可以看到， A对社会/世界/健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角 度来看，A的出现直接损害了 （这里加入一句针对性的话， 如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡） 。 （举例）。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是， 由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和 空

8、间。 事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付 出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利 益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对 此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。 而如今，我们已深受其害， 要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生， 我们 每一个人都应给予 A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决， 唯有这样，避免它带来更 多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。 初中英语作文病句和错句修改 下面的英语句子都是出自

9、 朗文国际 三册和四册的学生作文 ， 不是病句就是错句 . 让 我们用锐利的眼睛 ， 一起来找茬吧 . 1. We have computer class one week a time. 2. Go into my school， you can see many flowers. 3. There have 100 books. 4. I study there very happy. 5. I usually swimming there. 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 7. Several h

10、ours after, he was surprised. 8. He had to asked the other one. 9. He thought he speak well. 10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing . 11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese. 12. This film is very good-looking . 13. It is very good to family look. 14. I think we can t live Internet. 15. People us

11、e the net to send the mails has the most people. 16. I have a future dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life road. 18. I think everything must be change a lot. 19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do. 20. But I singing not very well. 21. Tom s mum didn t care him. 22. Al

12、most students use the computer not study. 23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net. 24. When I was very small. 初中英语作文病句和错句修改 怎么样 , 找出错误没有啊 . 下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧 1. I have computer class once a week. 英语中表达频率次数时 : 一次 once, 两次 twice 从三次开始用 three times . 2. Going into my school, you can see many

13、flowers. 这里使用动名词 going 做主语 , go 这个动作由后面的 you 发出. 3. There are 100 books. 表示某个地方有什么 , 一般使用 There be 的存在句型 . 4. I study there very happily. Study 是个动词 , 表示动作的程度要使用副词 , 不可以用形容词 happy. 5. I usually swim there. -ing 结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语 . 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 这个句子的表达

14、和语法上都有问题 . 如果单从中文意思来看 , 大家都明白他在说什么 , 但是要是让外教来批改 , 估计他会无尽的苦恼了 . 所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上 , 使用正 确的语法 . 该句子的表达应该为 : By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall. 7. Several hours later, he was surprised. 使用 after 时 ,不能放在时间表达语的后面 . 8. He had to ask the other one. “Have to do something ” 是固定用法 , 不定式后

15、用动词原形 . 9. He thought he spoke well. 这个句子属于语法时态的不一致 10. Mr. Li is from Beijing . 一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词 . 11. He studies very hard. He likes studying Chinese. 首先要区分 hard 和 hardly. 虽然两个都可以做副词 ,但在意思上有很大的区别 . He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他几乎不工作 . 这个两个表达相差很大 其次 ,be 动词后面不能使用副词 . 12. This film is

16、 very interesting. 这是一个完全中文式的英语句子 . good-looking一般用来形容人物的 . 13. It is fit for family to enjoy. 又是一个中文式的句子 , 14. I think we can t live Internet. 学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网 . 不改变原意的基础上 , 我们修改为 : I think we can t rely on Internet. 15. Most people use the net to send the mails. 这是一个要表达比例的英语句子 . 学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行

17、”翻译. 16. I have a dream about future. Future 在这里不可以直接修饰 dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life s journey. “人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road ”来表达。 18. I think everything keeps on changing. 不细心看这个句子 ,我完全不了解他想表达什么 . 但从上下文来推测 ,我想他想表达世事 在变化的意思 . 19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do. 宾语从句要使用正常语序 20. But I don t sing very well. 动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用 . 一般现在时的句子表否定 , 如果是实意动词需要有 do 来帮忙 . 21. Tom s mum didn t care about him. Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。 22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study. 一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。 23. Send mail is most of people like to do