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1、dear tom, i have learned that you are interested in chinese culture. now id like to tell you some information about the chinese summer camp which will be held in our school. the camp, scheduled from july 20 to august 8, is intended to carry forward chinese traditional culture. im sure you will benef

2、it a lot from it. first, you will learn daily chinese. second, all kinds of parties and cultures bout chinese history and traditional culture are prepared for you to participate in. in addition, there are some trips to the local museums and tourist attractions, which offers a good chance to learn ch

3、inese culture. if you are interested in it, please sign up before may 20 at our school website: if you have any other questions, i would be more than glad to help yours, li hua 大声朗读大声朗读 dear tom, i have learned that you are interested in chinese culture. now id like to tell you some information abou

4、t the chinese summer camp which will be held in our school. the camp, scheduled from july 20 to august 8, is intended to carry forward chinese traditional culture. im sure you will benefit a lot from it. first, you will learn daily chinese. second, all kinds of parties and cultures bout chinese hist

5、ory and traditional culture are prepared for you to participate in. in addition, there are some trips to the local museums and tourist attractions, which offers a good chance to learn chinese culture. if you are interested in it, please sign up before may 20 at our school website: if you have any ot

6、her questions, i would be more than glad to help yours, li hua 告知告知信信“三步三步 走走”： 观察思考：观察思考： 1. 文章的体裁？文章的体裁？ 2. 写作目的？写作目的？ 3. 要点？要点？ 4. 时态？时态？ 5. 过渡词？过渡词？ 1.1.写信的写信的缘由和目缘由和目 的的； 2.2. 阐述告知的内阐述告知的内 容容 3.3.表达表达希望、期待希望、期待 或表示愿意提供帮或表示愿意提供帮 助助（注意：语气要（注意：语气要 真诚、自然、亲切真诚、自然、亲切 动人）动人） 作文训练之作文训练之告知信告知信 套用句式套用句式

7、1.现在，我很高兴地告诉你现在，我很高兴地告诉你的细节的细节。 2. 我写信是为了告知你我写信是为了告知你。 now, id like to tell you about the details of im writing to inform/ let you know that. 3. 如果你想要知道一些关于如果你想要知道一些关于的事情，我可以告诉你的事情，我可以告诉你 if you would like to know something about, i could tell you that 套用句式套用句式 1.ive learned from the newspaper that/

8、 i know you are fond of, so i think it is a good chance for you to if you would like to try, you will have to sign uo at 2. now i want to tell you something about the details are as fellows. 3. as i know, you are very interested in therefore youd better 套用句式套用句式 1.如果你有其他问题，我非常乐意帮助你如果你有其他问题，我非常乐意帮助你。

9、 2. 如果你对它感兴趣的话请让我知道如果你对它感兴趣的话请让我知道。 if you have any question, i would be more than glad to help. please let me know if you are interested in it. 3. 我希望你在大学中取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。我希望你在大学中取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。 if you have any other questions, please dont hesitate to ask me. 假定你是假定你是jason，已经获取大学录已经获取大学录 取通知书，你的美国

10、好友取通知书，你的美国好友lucas 写信询问你高考后的假期计划。写信询问你高考后的假期计划。 请你根据以下要点给他回信。请你根据以下要点给他回信。 要点如下：要点如下： 1. 提前为大学做准备（浏览与大学提前为大学做准备（浏览与大学 所学专业相关的书籍所学专业相关的书籍）。 2. 找一份兼职工作（挣零花钱、积找一份兼职工作（挣零花钱、积 累社会经验）累社会经验）。 3. 每天锻炼一小时（跑步或打球）每天锻炼一小时（跑步或打球）。 注意：注意： 1. 词数词数100左右。左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连可以适当增加细节，以使行文连 贯。贯。 根据题目要求审题：根据题目要求审题： 1.

11、 文章的体裁？文章的体裁？告知信告知信信信 2. 写作目的？写作目的？ 告知告知lucas 高考后计划高考后计划 3. 要点要点 3个个 4. 时态？时态？ 一般一般将来将来时时 5. 过渡词？过渡词？ ？ 实战演练：实战演练： 实战演练：实战演练： 根据题目要求审题并列根据题目要求审题并列 出提纲：出提纲： 写作：写作：15分钟完成分钟完成 假定你是假定你是jason，已经获取大已经获取大 学录取通知书，你的美国好学录取通知书，你的美国好 友友lucas 写信询问你高考后的写信询问你高考后的 假期计划。请你根据以下要假期计划。请你根据以下要 点给他回信。点给他回信。 要点如下：要点如下： 1

12、. 提前为大学做准备（浏览与大提前为大学做准备（浏览与大 学所学专业相关的书籍学所学专业相关的书籍）。 2. 找一份兼职工作（挣零花钱、找一份兼职工作（挣零花钱、 积累社会经验）积累社会经验）。 3. 每天锻炼一小时（跑步或打每天锻炼一小时（跑步或打 球）球）。 注意：注意： 1. 词数词数100左右。左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文可以适当增加细节，以使行文 连贯。连贯。 告知告知信信“三步走三步走”： 1. 文章的体裁？文章的体裁？ 2. 写作目的？写作目的？ 3. 结构（几个层次？）结构（几个层次？） 4. 时态？时态？ 5. 过渡词？过渡词？ 1.1.写信的写信的缘由和目的缘由

13、和目的； 2.2. 阐述告知的内容阐述告知的内容 3.3.表达表达希望、期待或表示希望、期待或表示 愿意提供帮助愿意提供帮助（注意：语（注意：语 气要真诚、自然、亲切动气要真诚、自然、亲切动 人）人） 互评作文（互评作文（2分钟）分钟） 任务任务：1. 看看别人如何表达你的疑难点；看看别人如何表达你的疑难点； 2. 看看同学的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。看看同学的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。 评判依据：评判依据： 1. 字数字数: 100词左右。词左右。 2. 卷面是否整洁？卷面是否整洁？ 3. 要点要点是否齐全？是否齐全？ 4. 句子结构是否完整？句子结构是否完整？ 5 . 用了哪些核心

14、句型？用了哪些核心句型？ 评分档次评分档次： 第一档：第一档：21-25 (优秀）优秀）要点要点齐全，齐全，语法语法错误很少；错误很少； 第二档第二档: 16-20（良好）（良好）要点要点齐全，齐全，语法语法错误较少；错误较少； 第三档第三档: 11-15 （及格）（及格）要点要点基本齐全，错误较多；基本齐全，错误较多； 第四档第四档: 6-10 （较差）（较差）要点要点不齐全，错误很多；不齐全，错误很多； 第五档第五档: 1-5 （差）只写了一两个相关词句。（差）只写了一两个相关词句。 dear jason, im glad to hear from you and i am writing

15、 to let you know that i am willing to share my plans for the holiday with you. the plans are as fellow. to begin with, to prepare for my future university life, i will read some books related to the major i choose. then i plan on doing a part-time job, which will be beneficial to me. for one thing,

16、i can make some pocket money , with which i can buy what i like. for another, i can gain some social experience which will not only enrich my holiday, but broaden my horizon. whats more, i am going to do exercise for an hour everyday. i will run or play ball games to build a stronger and healthier b

17、ody. what about your plan? im looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours, li hua homework：背诵背诵范文和关于范文和关于告知告知信信 的核心短语、句型。的核心短语、句型。 课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了 北京大学北京大学(peking university)，他来自贫困地区，他来自贫困地区， 是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信， 要点如下：要点如下： 1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲

18、。考上理想大学，父母骄傲。 2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。努力学习将来为家乡服务。 3. 对未来祝福。对未来祝福。 注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。 dear wang qiang, congratulations! i have learned with delight that you are admitted to peking university, your ideal one! i know you have worked very hard

19、 in the past years, so im truly happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. i am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. i just want you to know how pleased i am to witness your success. this is a new start for you and its good for you to study wi

20、th so many excellent students and learn from top professors. i wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future. best wishes! yours, li hua 课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友peter获得了获得了 “汉语桥汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你 为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺

21、信，要点如下： 1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。 2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。继续努力，有机会来中国留学。 3. 希望见面和交流。希望见面和交流。 注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。 参考词汇：参考词汇：“汉语桥汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “chinese bridge” chinese speech contest dear peter, i would like to

22、 express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “chinese bridge” chinese speech contest. i know that you were not good at chinese at first. however, you practiced speaking chinese every day. as the saying goes, “everything comes to him who waits”. finally, you succeeded! in m

23、y mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student. so im so surprised that you become champion of this competition. if you go on studying chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in china. at last, i hope to see you and communicate with each other. sincere congratulations to you again! yours, li hua dear henry, i am w