2015年公开课短文改错课件

1、短文改错短文改错 梅江区嘉应中学梅江区嘉应中学 刘映明刘映明 2015年年10月月28日日 Just find out the mistakes Task one Mr. Zhang is sixty years old and had retired . He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes lively . He usually made preparations for the lessons and w

2、as strict in us. Each time we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it . I was poor in biology . He often helps me with my study patient .With his help I made great progresses . He was very kind to his students . As an experienced teacher, he respected or loved by all the student

3、s. Have a check Mr. Zhang is sixty years old and had retired . He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes lively . He usually made us has good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time we made mistakes in our hom

4、ework , he would ask us to correct it . I was poor in biology . He often helps me with helped them with my study patient . With his help I made great progresses . He was very kind to his students . As an experienced teacher , he respected or loved by all the students. progress was and patiently Make

5、 a summary in groups 1. had has 3.去掉去掉the 2.our us 4. in with 时态时态 指代不一致指代不一致 冠词冠词 搭配搭配 5. it them 代词代词 Task two 9. 增加增加was 6. helps helped 8. progresses progress 10. or and 时态时态 名词单复数名词单复数 被动被动 连词错用连词错用 7. patient patiently 形容词副词错用形容词副词错用 短文改错要注意短文改错要注意: 动词动词形形、名词、名词数数，注意，注意形形和和副副； 主谓、主谓、非谓动非谓动 ， 习

6、惯用语习惯用语要记住；要记住； 句子成分多分析，句子成分多分析，逻辑错误逻辑错误需关注；需关注； 冠介缺余冠介缺余常常现，常常现，连词连词误用逻辑辨；误用逻辑辨； 数数有基序，有基序，代代有格，有格，从句从句细辨引导词细辨引导词。 添加或删除的词通常是虚词。添加或删除的词通常是虚词。 少了一个词，要求添加的词有：少了一个词，要求添加的词有： 冠词：冠词：in countryside in in countryside in the the countryside(2015countryside(2015课标课标I)I) As result As As result As a a result(

7、2014result(2014课课 标标I)I) 介词：介词：listening music listening music listening listening to to music(2014music(2014课标课标II)II) 连词：连词：He had, he was He He had, he was He had, had, andand he was(2013 he was(2013课标课标I)I) 不定式符号：不定式符号：came see me came came see me came to to see me(2007see me(2007课标课标) ) 物主代词：物主

8、代词：Tom saw parents Tom saw parents Tom saw Tom saw hishis parents(2015 parents(2015课标课标II) 多了一个词，要求删除的词有：介多了一个词，要求删除的词有：介 词、冠词、连词、助动词、不定式符号词、冠词、连词、助动词、不定式符号 toto。 冠词：冠词：InIn a a fact In fact(2013fact In fact(2013 课标课标I)I) all kinds of the flowers all all kinds of the flowers all kinds of flowers(201

9、4kinds of flowers(2014课标课标II)II) 介词：介词：he lent to me lots of he lent to me lots of clothes he lent me lots of clothes he lent me lots of clothes(2011clothes(2011课标课标) ) 连词连词 AlthoughbutAlthough AlthoughbutAlthough 不定式符号：不定式符号：had better to had better to stop had better stop(2009stop had better stop(

10、2009课标课标) ) 助动词：助动词：has has brought brought brought(2010brought(2010课标课标) ) Lots of studies have Lots of studies have been been shown Lots of studies have shown Lots of studies have shown(2015shown(2015课标课标I)I) 副词：副词：soso very very much that so much that so much that (2015much that (2015课标课标II)II) T

11、ask three单句改错单句改错 每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及 一个单词的增加、删除或修改。一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 1、For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and. hours 2、Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals. us 3、Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the s

12、ame place year after year, but we have never had any disease yet或者去掉或者去掉but 4、 Last year, she decided study abroad. to 5、I look forward to see her again in the near future. seeing 6、We sat by the fire, have our barbecue. 7、Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake having Feeling 提示：根据非谓语动词与其逻辑主语的关系提示

13、：根据非谓语动词与其逻辑主语的关系 来确定用来确定用-ing形式还是用形式还是用-ed形式形式 因因we与与have是主动关系是主动关系 因因we与与feel是主动关系是主动关系 8、We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! 9、I found the test difficulty, but I tried hard to do it.作作 作定语、表语、补语作定语、表语、补语, 用形容词用形容词 wonderful difficult 10、Interesting, it had a connection with the Britis

14、h porcelain industry. 作状语，修饰动词、形容词、全句，用副词作状语，修饰动词、形容词、全句，用副词 interestingly 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处处 语言错误语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及 一个单词的增加、删除或修改。一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其并在其 下面写出该加的词。下面写出该加的词。 删除删除: 把多余的词

15、用斜线（把多余的词用斜线（）画掉。）画掉。 修改修改: 在错的词下画一横线在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出并在该词下面写出 修改后的词。修改后的词。 Task three When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on

16、 the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. 1. 2015课标卷课标卷I The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to prot

17、ect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it. When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. and the thought 1. 2015课标卷课标卷I Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. with The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found