2014年中考英语书面表达分类点拨

1、20142014年年 中考英语书面中考英语书面 表达分类点拨表达分类点拨 Part 3 句型归纳句型归纳 一、写人记事类一、写人记事类 1 1At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say my English teacher is not only kind but also hard my English teacher is not only kind but also hard working.working. It

2、 goes without saying that my English teacher is not It goes without saying that my English teacher is not only kind but also hard only kind but also hardworking.working. 2 2I like my English teacher so much that I cant help I like my English teacher so much that I cant help saying that she is the be

3、st person I have ever seen. saying that she is the best person I have ever seen. 3 3In life, it doesnt matter who you are, but whether In life, it doesnt matter who you are, but whether someone appreciates you for what you are, accepts you someone appreciates you for what you are, accepts you and lo

4、ves you unconditionally. and loves you unconditionally. 4 4Without you, I wouldnt be the same one as I am now.Without you, I wouldnt be the same one as I am now. Part 3 5 5Friends are the persons who can share happiness and Friends are the persons who can share happiness and sorrow with us. sorrow w

5、ith us. 6 6Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad times and the confused times. the sad times and the confused times. 7 7He not only led us to an appreciation of the English He not only led us to an appreciation of the Englis

6、h language and literature, but also aroused our great language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Part 3 8 8There is no doubt that parents have given me a lot There is no doubt that pa

7、rents have given me a lot since I was born. since I was born. 9 9I think its necessary to do something to show my I think its necessary to do something to show my gratitude. gratitude. 1010These magic words touched my heart and I started to These magic words touched my heart and I started to love my

8、 love my 1111Im deeply moved by what Mike did.Im deeply moved by what Mike did. 1212I want to learn from him to help the person in need.I want to learn from him to help the person in need. Part 3 假如你是李英，在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师假如你是李英，在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师Mr SmithMr Smith要求你们要求你们 每人给他写一封英语书信作为纪念，信的内容包括：每人给他写一封英语书信作为纪

9、念，信的内容包括： 1. 1. 你对你对Mr SmithMr Smith的整体印象；的整体印象； 2 2简述一次经历或一件事；简述一次经历或一件事； 3 3你的感受或愿望；你的感受或愿望； 要求：书信内容不少于要求：书信内容不少于8080词。词。 实战演练实战演练 Part 3 1 1段落和要点段落和要点 从题目要求和信的主要内容分析，可将此书信分为四段：第从题目要求和信的主要内容分析，可将此书信分为四段：第1 1段描段描 述对英语老师的整体印象和表达对老师的感谢之情；第述对英语老师的整体印象和表达对老师的感谢之情；第2 2段简述一段简述一 次经历或一件事；次经历或一件事； 第第3 3段表达感

10、受或者愿望；第段表达感受或者愿望；第4 4段结尾，可以升段结尾，可以升 华自己对老师的感情，进一步表达祝愿或者感谢之情。其中，第华自己对老师的感情，进一步表达祝愿或者感谢之情。其中，第1 1、 4 4段可略写。段可略写。 2 2时态时态 印象和愿望使用一般现在时，一次经历或者一件事使用一般过去时。印象和愿望使用一般现在时，一次经历或者一件事使用一般过去时。 【思路点拨思路点拨】 Part 3 1 1For me, not only are you an excellent teacher, but also For me, not only are you an excellent teach

11、er, but also a warm a warmhearted friend.hearted friend. 2 2You came at the right time and told me not to give up, You came at the right time and told me not to give up, but face it with a fearless heart. but face it with a fearless heart. 3 3After saying this, it was you that helped me practice Aft

12、er saying this, it was you that helped me practice the speech over and over again. the speech over and over again. 4 4I have to be honest and say, without your help, I I have to be honest and say, without your help, I wouldnt be the same one as I am now. wouldnt be the same one as I am now. 5 5And I

13、 am so thankful that I cant help saying this And I am so thankful that I cant help saying this again “Thank you very much” again “Thank you very much” 6 6I am looking forward to seeing you enjoying teaching in I am looking forward to seeing you enjoying teaching in the school! the school! 【经典句型经典句型】

14、 Part 3 【自我展示自我展示】 Dear Mr SmithDear Mr Smith， How are you? Its a pity that I am leaving this How are you? Its a pity that I am leaving this school soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank school soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank you very much”you very much” _ _ _ _ _ _ Part 3 O

15、ne possible versionOne possible version： Dear Mr SmithDear Mr Smith， How are you? Its a pity that I am leaving this school How are you? Its a pity that I am leaving this school soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank you very soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank you very much”much

16、” For me, not only are you an excellent teacher, but also For me, not only are you an excellent teacher, but also a warma warmhearted friend. Do you remember the time I was hearted friend. Do you remember the time I was facing an English speech competition alone and wanted to facing an English speec

17、h competition alone and wanted to give up because of weakness? You came at the right time give up because of weakness? You came at the right time and told me not to give up, but face it with a fearless and told me not to give up, but face it with a fearless heart. After saying this, it was you that

18、helped me heart. After saying this, it was you that helped me practice the speech over and over again. Thanks to your practice the speech over and over again. Thanks to your help, I took the first place in the competition. Since help, I took the first place in the competition. Since then, we have be

19、come close friends. then, we have become close friends. Part 3 I have to be honest and say, without your help, I I have to be honest and say, without your help, I wouldnt be the same one as I am now. And I am so thankful wouldnt be the same one as I am now. And I am so thankful that I cant help sayi

20、ng this again “Thank you very that I cant help saying this again “Thank you very much”much” Although you will no longer teach me, you will be the Although you will no longer teach me, you will be the best teacher and friend in my heart forever.best teacher and friend in my heart forever. I am lookin

21、g forward to seeing you enjoying teaching in I am looking forward to seeing you enjoying teaching in the school! the school! Best wishes Best wishes， Li YingLi Ying Part 3 1 1I am happy/glad to receive/get your letter and I am I am happy/glad to receive/get your letter and I am sorry to hear that yo

22、u sorry to hear that you 2 2Thank you for telling me about your problems/trouble.Thank you for telling me about your problems/trouble. 3 3I knowI know题目中所述困难。题目中所述困难。 4 4题目中所述困难，题目中所述困难，right?right? 5 5提建议句型：提建议句型： (1)Why not(1)Why not？意为？意为“为什么不为什么不？”后接动词原形，是省略了后接动词原形，是省略了 主语的省略形式，完整句型为主语的省略形式，完整句型

23、为“Why dont you/they/weWhy dont you/they/we？”如：如： Why dont you go with meWhy dont you go with me？Why not go with me?Why not go with me? 二、二、 困难建议类困难建议类 句型归纳句型归纳 Part 3 (2)What about(2)What about？意为？意为“怎么样？怎么样？”后可接名词、代词或动后可接名词、代词或动 名词。如：名词。如： What about going out for a walk? Im going to the What about

24、 going out for a walk? Im going to the park.What about you?park.What about you? (3)had better (3)had better 意为意为“最好最好”，“还是还是好好”，后接动词原形。，后接动词原形。 如：如： You had better stay at home. You had better stay at home. 你最好待在家里。你最好待在家里。 Part 3 (4)(4)用情态动词提建议用情态动词提建议 You should finish your homework as soon as pos

25、sible. You should finish your homework as soon as possible. 你应该尽快完成作业。你应该尽快完成作业。 You ought to go to the washroom before the film begins. You ought to go to the washroom before the film begins. 电影放映之前，你应该去一下洗手间。电影放映之前，你应该去一下洗手间。 You have to tell your parents before you go out and play. You have to te

26、ll your parents before you go out and play. 你出去玩之前必须告诉你的父母。你出去玩之前必须告诉你的父母。 You must buy a ticket to go into the cinema.You must buy a ticket to go into the cinema. 你必须买票进电影院。你必须买票进电影院。 (5)If I were you, Id(5)If I were you, Id意为意为“如果我是你，我将会如果我是你，我将会”，为，为 虚拟语气句型。虚拟语气句型。 Part 3 6 6The easiest way is to

27、The easiest way is to 7 7Doingis the key toDoingis the key to 8 8Dont forget toDont forget to 9 9These are all my suggestions.These are all my suggestions. 1010I hope my advice can help you.I hope my advice can help you. 1111I am sure everything will be fine.I am sure everything will be fine. 1212I

28、am looking forward to hearing from you again!I am looking forward to hearing from you again! 1313Its quite common for us. Take me for example, I used Its quite common for us. Take me for example, I used to have the same problems and I went over them. to have the same problems and I went over them. P

29、art 3 Dear SallyDear Sally， Im very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here Im very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers, ice except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips, but we are not allowed to ord

30、er creams and potato chips, but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little them according to the school rules. I usually have little lunch and I often feel tired and cant follow the teachers lunch and I often feel tired and cant follow the teachers in the a

31、fternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible.any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours Yours， BettyBetty 实战演练实战演练 Part 3 建议类作文一般可以分为四个部分：建议类作文一般可以分为四个部分： 第一、第一、 表达已收到

32、来信并了解了对方的问题，并表示理解或表达已收到来信并了解了对方的问题，并表示理解或 者同情。者同情。 第二、第二、 简述对方的困难简述对方的困难( (难承上启下难承上启下) )，一般可以在，一般可以在I knowI know之之 后直接抄写对方来信中所述困难，或者在直接抄写对方来信中所述后直接抄写对方来信中所述困难，或者在直接抄写对方来信中所述 困难之后加困难之后加“rightright？”。 假如你叫假如你叫Sally, Sally, 是是BettyBetty的笔友，你收到了她的来信。请你的笔友，你收到了她的来信。请你 给她写一封回信，针对她的问题谈谈你的看法，并给出可行给她写一封回信，针对

33、她的问题谈谈你的看法，并给出可行 的建议。的建议。 【思路点拨思路点拨】 Part 3 第三、第三、 提出建议。针对具体问题使用提建议句型提出可操作提出建议。针对具体问题使用提建议句型提出可操作 的、正面的三到四条建议。万能建议：在学校发生的问题和老师谈；的、正面的三到四条建议。万能建议：在学校发生的问题和老师谈； 在家发生的问题和父母谈；朋友吵架和朋友谈。建议与建议之间要在家发生的问题和父母谈；朋友吵架和朋友谈。建议与建议之间要 有层次，可使用有层次，可使用first, second, third, all in all first, second, third, all in all 或者

34、或者 to to begin with, whats more, besides, in a word begin with, whats more, besides, in a word 等。等。 第四、第四、 表达希望你的建议有帮助，或者希望收到对方的来信表达希望你的建议有帮助，或者希望收到对方的来信 或者好消息。或者好消息。 Part 3 1 1I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in school I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in school lunch. Here is some a

35、dvice. I hope it will work out lunch. Here is some advice. I hope it will work out well. well. 2 2Though it is quite common for students to complain Though it is quite common for students to complain the school lunch, you should not let your feeling the school lunch, you should not let your feeling

36、get in your way of being healthy. get in your way of being healthy. 3 3If I were you, Id like to have a faceIf I were you, Id like to have a facetotoface face talk with my teacher. talk with my teacher. 【经典句型经典句型】 Part 3 4 4At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say At the bottom of my h

37、eart, I have to be honest and say that fast food is not only bad for your health, but that fast food is not only bad for your health, but also nutritiously also nutritiouslyunbalanced.unbalanced. 5 5The reason why your school doesnt allow you to eat The reason why your school doesnt allow you to eat

38、 hamburgers is that teachers worry about your health. hamburgers is that teachers worry about your health. 6 6I am sure things will turn out to be fine.I am sure things will turn out to be fine. 7 7Looking forward to your next letter.Looking forward to your next letter. Dear Betty, Dear Betty, I hav

39、e read your letter._I have read your letter._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours truly Yours truly， SallySally Part 3 【自我展示自我展示】 One possible versionOne possible version： Dear BettyDear Betty， I have read your letter. I am sorry to hear that you I have read your letter. I am sorry to hear that you have trouble i

40、n school lunch. Here is some advice. I hope have trouble in school lunch. Here is some advice. I hope it will work out well.it will work out well. First of all, youd better try your best to eat more First of all, youd better try your best to eat more lunch. That will bring you more energy. And you w

41、ont feel lunch. That will bring you more energy. And you wont feel tired in the afternoon classes. Then, though it is quite tired in the afternoon classes. Then, though it is quite common for students to complain the school lunch, you common for students to complain the school lunch, you should not

42、let your feeling get in your way of being should not let your feeling get in your way of being healthy. Finally, if I were you, Id like to have a facehealthy. Finally, if I were you, Id like to have a face totoface talk with my teacher.face talk with my teacher. Part 3 At the bottom of my heart, I h

43、ave to be honest and say At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say that fast food is not only bad for your health, but also that fast food is not only bad for your health, but also nutritiouslynutritiouslyunbalanced. Worst of all, those hamburgers unbalanced. Worst of all, those hamburg

44、ers will be the same old hamburgers as you have had a million will be the same old hamburgers as you have had a million times before. But the school lunch is healthier. In times before. But the school lunch is healthier. In addition, the reason why your school doesnt allow you to addition, the reaso

45、n why your school doesnt allow you to eat hamburgers is that teachers worry about your health.eat hamburgers is that teachers worry about your health. These are all the things that I want to say. I am sure These are all the things that I want to say. I am sure things will turn out to be fine. Lookin

46、g forward to your things will turn out to be fine. Looking forward to your next letter.next letter. Yours truly Yours truly， SallySally Part 3 1 1is located inis located in 2 2lies in the north/south/east/west oflies in the north/south/east/west of 3 3You can take a bus/train/a plane to enjoyYou can

47、 take a bus/train/a plane to enjoy 4 4is famous/wellis famous/wellknown for itsknown for its 5 5If you are interested in/If you preferIf you are interested in/If you prefer， you you can can 6 6Only if you come toyourself, can you experience Only if you come toyourself, can you experience its charm.

48、its charm. 7 7For your next vacation, why not consider For your next vacation, why not consider visiting visiting？ Part 3 三、三、 地点描写类地点描写类 句型归纳句型归纳 8 8If you come toIf you come to， you should never missyou should never miss 9 9In a wordIn a word，is a place worth visiting.is a place worth visiting. 10

49、10We have a beautiful playground with lots of We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it. trees around it. 1111Great changes have taken place since about Great changes have taken place since about thirty years ago. thirty years ago. 1212Beijing, the capital of China, is famous for i

50、ts Beijing, the capital of China, is famous for its long history and splendid culture. long history and splendid culture. 1313Beijing duck is one of the most delicious foods, Beijing duck is one of the most delicious foods, which you should never miss. which you should never miss. 1414Beijing is a l

51、ovely place where the people are Beijing is a lovely place where the people are friendly and warm friendly and warmhearted.hearted. Part 3 假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请 给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并 谈谈你的感受。谈谈你的感受。 Hi! Liu JingHi! Liu Jing， My

52、 grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself. He says the bus service in Beijing is very good himself. He says the

53、bus service in Beijing is very good now, and people can go to anywhere by bus. Is he right? now, and people can go to anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?Can you tell me something more about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Im looking forward to hear

54、ing from you soon. Yours Yours， Tony Tony Part 3 实战演练实战演练 1 1要点：开头和结尾已给出，剩下部分重点介绍北京的公要点：开头和结尾已给出，剩下部分重点介绍北京的公 交服务和自己的感受。交服务和自己的感受。 2 2时态：一般现在时；人称：第三人称、第一人称。时态：一般现在时；人称：第三人称、第一人称。 Part 3 【思路点拨思路点拨】 【经典句型经典句型】 1 1The bus service in Beijing is so wonderful that I The bus service in Beijing is so wonder

55、ful that I believe he will have a great time traveling around believe he will have a great time traveling around Beijing by bus. Beijing by bus. 2 2Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a b

56、us do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap. and the tickets are cheap. Part 3 3 3I am sure your grandpa will have a happy time to take I am sure your grandpa will have a happy time to take a bus in Beijing! a bus in Beijing! 4 4At the bottom of my heart, I have t

57、o be honest and At the bottom of my heart, I have to be honest and say taking a bus is wonderful because it is not only say taking a bus is wonderful because it is not only comfortable but also good for the environment. comfortable but also good for the environment. 5 5It is a good choice for your g

58、randpa to travel by bus It is a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing. in Beijing. 【自我展示自我展示】 Hi! TonyHi! Tony， Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. _ _ _ _ If you have more questions, please feel free to ask me. If y

59、ou have more questions, please feel free to ask me. Yours Yours， Liu JingLiu Jing Part 3 One possible versionOne possible version： Hi! TonyHi! Tony， I am glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. I am glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Bei

60、jing is so Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is so wonderful that I believe he will have a great time wonderful that I believe he will have a great time traveling around Beijing by bus. First of all, there are traveling around Beijing by bus. First of all, there are bus lines all ove