话题07情感与态度(解析版)

1、备战2021年中考英语书面表达话题突破话题七情感与态度解析版话题突破表达情感、说明态度是对中学生的一项重要要求，也是中考常考的热点话题。研究近5年全国中考书面表达试题可以发现，情感态度话题的考查几率很大，。此话题范围比拟广泛，主要从以下几方面进行设题:1.情感表达，如感恩他人、表达爱和幸福 2生活态度,如诚信、宽容、分享;3励志鼓励，如学会自立自强；4.应对烦恼、 困惑，如学会解决问题、自我减压等。主题一直击热点Writi ng 1原创题2021春节由于疫情当前，今年的寒假显得格外的长。 你的好朋友Lin Lin在家经常与父母亲争吵， 与同学的交往中也遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李

2、华的身份给他写一封邮件一一提出你的一些建议。建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，老实守信要求：I 词数60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；2 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。参考词汇：share solve respect friendlybe honest toDear Tony,Im sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents and classmates: Im glad to help you.I hope everyth ing will go w

3、ell with you soon.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Lin Lin,Im sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. Im glad to help you. Here are some suggestons for you. First, whe n you have difficulties, you should talk to your pare nts, your teachers or your friends and share your sad ness and happ in ess

4、 with them. They will help you solve the problem.Second, whe n you get along with your frien ds, you are supposed to respect them.Third, you should be frien dly to people around you. You can help each other.Last but not least, you have to be hon est to your frien ds. Then you will make more frien ds

5、.I hope everyth ing will go well with you soon.Yours,Li HuaWriti ng 2原创题微博Micro-blog 是一个信息分享、传播以及获取平台。微博用户通过网络、短信或彩信，发布 短消息，快捷、创新的沟通方式吸引着越来越多的生人明星和 网络草根参加，成为一道亮丽的文化风景。越来越多的同学有自己的微博。对于微博不同的人持有不同的意见。请你结合下面的信息发表自己的观点写一篇英语短文。有的人认为网络不平安；有的人认为分享快乐与不开心的事情；有的人认为太花费时间；有的人认为得到朋友的建议和帮助；我的观点是.要求：1词数：80左右，开头已经给出

6、，不计入总词数；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Micro blogs are gett ing more and more popular with tee nagers these days. Differe nt people have differe nt opinions on Micro blogs.【参考范文】Micro blogs are gett ing more and more popular with tee nagers these days. Differe nt people have differe nt opinions on Micro blogs.Man

7、y people think it is good for teenagers to share their opinions on Micro blogs. They can share their joy and sadness on Micro blogs. Micro blogs make it easier for teenagers to get help and advice from friends. But many other people say the interment is not safe enough and it takes too much time. Th

8、ey say Micro blogs are only for adults.I think it is good for teenagers to use Micro blogs. But we shouldnt spend too much time on them.主题二 典型剖析 (一)( 2021 年河北省) 文明礼貌从我做起， 从现在开始， 从点滴小事做起。 请根据下面的提示和要求， 以 “When to Say Thank You 为题，写一篇短文。提示 :1) When should we say “ thank you at home?2) When are we suppo

9、sed to say“ thank you at school?3) .要求 :1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3) 词数 80 个左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数 )参考词汇 :wash, encourage, openWhen to Say Thank YouIt s polite to say“ thank you when others help us or say something kind to us.【答案】教你审题看完题目后 ,同学们应首先明确以下问题 :1.主题 :When to Say Thank

10、You2.体裁 : 记叙文。163人称:描述他人时用第三人称，表述自己的观点时用第一人称。4时态:表达情感态度，时态以一般现在时为主。5思路点拨：可以采用三段式作文。第一段引入主题。第二段举出一些例子说明什么时候要说谢谢，第三段总结全文，提出建议。思路导图引入主题It polite to say “ thanlyou when others help us or say someth ing kind to us.举出一些例子 When toSay Tha nk Youwhe n they cook for us.whe n they wash clothes for usWhen the t

11、eachers help us work out questi onsWhen the teachers and classmatesen courage us,Whe n some one ope n the door for us总结全文，提出建议If every one is polite to others,the worldwill be more and more beautiful.佳作赏析When to Say Thank You It s polite for us to say“thank you when others help us or saykind to us.B

12、eing polite is a good tradition in our country. Nobody likes a pers on who is impolite .Itmportaht soir us to be polite.We should say“ tha nk you should say“ tha nk you whe n they wash clothes for us.We should alspolite at school.When the teachers help us work out questions ,we should say “ thank yo

13、u tcWhen we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us,we should say“ thank you .When sithe door for us,we should say“ OWte yoiould say“ tha nk youofte n as possible.运用了 it 形+容词+for sb to dosome做某事对某人来说怎么样及 使用不定代词+形容词的表述，一些友好的话 something kind。e动名词充当主语。o使用了 who引导的定语从句。 help sb do sth

14、帮助某人做某事 使用短语 get bad grades取得坏)m成绩ope n使用短语 as often as possible.尽可能经常的 If every one is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.使用if引导的条件状语从句。总分值积累提分短语做某事对某人来说怎么样it 形+容词+for sb to do sth说一些友好的话 someth ing kind良好的传统 good traditio n洗衣服 wash clothes在学校 at school计算出 work out取得坏成绩get b

15、ad grades尽可能频繁 as ofte n as possible.提分句子开篇句：当别人帮助我们或对我们说一些友好的话时，我们说 谢谢是有礼貌的。It s polite for us to say“ thank you when others help us or say something kind to us.礼貌在我们的国家是一个很好的传统。Being polite is a good traditi on in our coun try.没有人喜欢一个人是不礼貌的。Nobody likes a pers on who is impolite.对我们来说有礼貌是很重要的。It s

16、 important for us to be polite.结尾句：如果每个人都对别人有礼貌，世界会越来越美丽。If every one is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.点睛句：我们应该尽可能多地说谢谢 We should say “ tha nk you as often as possible.礼貌是人生习惯的第一件大事。Polite ness is the first great thi ng in life.一个人的礼貌是一面照出它的肖像的镜子A mans courtesy is a mirr

17、or to his image有礼貌不一定总是智慧的标志，可是不礼貌总使人疑心其愚蠢Good manners are not always sig ns of wisdom, but bad manners always make one suspect of folly礼貌是博爱的花朵Polite ness is the flower of uni versal love礼貌使有礼貌的人喜悦，也使那些受人以礼貌相待的人们喜悦。Polite ness pleases those who are polite, and those who are treated with courtesy.好话

18、一句三冬暖，恶语伤人六月寒。A good word is warm in win ter, but a bad word hurts in June.主题二典型剖析二当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子们来说，学会自立相当不要包办一切； 你的提出合理建议，让 观点孩子自己做决定；重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息，以Learn to Be Independent为题写一篇100词左孩子不要过度依赖父母，学做家务,照顾自己;勇于面对并解决困难；要求:1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词

19、数。参考词汇:make decisions; depend on; look after; on the one hand.on the other hand.Lear n to Be In depe ndentNowadays, many childre n are treated as little emperors at home.教你审题看完题目后，同学们应首先明确以下问题：1.主题:Learn to Be Independent。2体裁:本文属于图片和提纲相结合的议论文。3. 人称:描述他人时用第三人称，表述自己的观点时用第一人称。4. 时态:表达情感态度，时态以一般现在时为主。5.

20、 此题提供了两幅图，一幅是父母包办一切，另一幅是孩子遇到问题不知道怎么办。表格中分别针对家长和孩子给出了不同的建议。鉴于以上分析，我们可以把作文分为四段：第一段，描述图片展示的社会现象；第二段,针对父母提出建议；第三段，针对孩子发表看法；第四段，总结全文。像这种图片和表格结合的作文，同学们要 认真审题，注意不要遗漏要点。思路导图社会现象图 片信息Parents show so much love to their children that when they face problems, they don t know what to doAs for pare ntsLear n to B

21、eIn depe ndentbelieve in their childre ngive children proper advice and more cha nces to make their own decisi ons.As for childre n结论shouldn dtepend on their parents too muchlear n to do choresface difficulties bravelynever give up.Lear n to Be In depe ndent佳作赏析Lear n to Be In depe ndent赏析:Nowadays,

22、 many children are treated as little emperors at 使用了 show.to sb., so.that 结构和 when 引导home.Parents show so much love to their children that 的从句，句式结构复杂，为得高分奠定了根底。when they face problems, they don t know whatlb d使用固定句型 It s+adj.+for sb. to do sth自然又So it s important for chiedr to learn to be independen

23、t.恰当地弓I入主题。 In my opinion, parents should believe in their children 使用了 in my opinion, believe in 等短语。and never do everything for them. It s necessary to give 使用了 It siecessary to do 句型，give sb.childre n proper advice and more cha nces to make their own decisi ons.As for children, they shouldn depen

24、d on their parents too much.On the one hand, they should learn to do chores. It helps to develop their independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.On the other hand,they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solve them. Besides, they had better lear n to n ever give up. In a w

25、ord, the earlier childre n lear n to be in depe ndent, the better it is for their future.advice,make ones decisions 等高级短语，提升文章档次。 使用as for children自然地转换对象；还用了depe nd on 短语。 on the one hand 与下文的 on the other hand 照应,使文章脉络清晰，结构紧凑。 使用了 ought to do, try to do 等短语。 besides, had better使表达内容更简明清晰。 用in a wo

26、rd总结全文；句式the+比拟级.,the+比拟级.的运用显示了深厚的语言功底。被视为 be treated as 在我看来 In my opi nion 给一些建议 give some advice 取决于 depe nd on另一方面 On the other hand 最好 had better提分句子总分值积累提分短语给 某人 show sth to sb.相信 believe in自己做决定make one s own decisi ons.一方面 On the one hand,应该 ought to总之 In a word开篇句：父母对他们的孩子表现出如此多的爱，当他们面临问题时

27、，他们不知道该做什么。Parents show so much love to their children that when they face problems, they don t know what to do.因此,重要的是孩子们学会独立。So it s important for children to learn to be independent.结尾句：总而言之,越早让孩子学会独立，对他们的未来更好。In a word, the earlier children learn to be independent, the better it is for their fut

28、ure.点睛句：在我看来，父母应该相信他们的孩子，从来没有为他们做一切。In my opinion, pare nts should believe in their childre n and n ever do everyth ing for them.有必要给孩子适当的建议和更多的时机做出自己的决定。It s necessary to give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.对于孩子，他们不应该太依赖他们的父母。As for children, they shouldn t depe

29、nd on their parents too much.一方面，他们应该学会做家务。On the one hand, they should lear n to do chores.它有助于开展他们的独立性，教他们如何照顾自己。It helps to develop their in depe ndence and teaches them how to look after themselves.另一方面，他们应该勇敢地面对困难，试着解决它们。On the other hand, they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solv

30、e them.之外，他们最好学会永不放弃。Besides, they had better lear n to n ever give up.有志者事竟成。Where there is a will, there is a way.一切皆有可能。Nothi ng is impossible.成功总是留给有准备的人。Success will always come to a ready man.世上无难事，只怕有心人。Noth ing is difficult if we put our heart into it.主题三真题回放Writi ng 12021南平质检母亲节即将到来，假设你是李华，

31、请根据以下内容提示，写一篇80词左右的感恩信，感谢母亲给予你生命，呵护你健康成长，让母亲感受到你真挚的爱。注意：1文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数2文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。【参考范文】Dear Mom，Mother s Day is coming. I would like to say Happy Mother s Day in this letter. You give ood life and take gcare of me. Thanks for preparing breakfast for me in the early mor

32、ning.You took me to the hospital when I was sick.You teach me to be brave. When I have problems with my study and life,you are patie nt to en courage me.Also,l develop the good habit of lear ning with your help.Yours,Li HuaWriti ng 22021年湖南长沙.假设你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的,有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一

33、封英文邮件抚慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解 提出建议。要求：180词左右开头已给出，不计入总词数；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3信中不得出现真实人名和校名。Dear Henry,I lear ned that you are feeli ng sorry and upset because of los ing the basketball game【参考范文】Dear Henry,I lear ned that you are feeli ng sorry and upset because of los ing the basketball game. Its no

34、t easy being in your situati on, and its no rmal to have these feeli ngs. Any way, dont be too hard on yourself.You know, basketball is about team effort. Its n ever just one pers ons fault. What matters is that you shouldlearn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think abou

35、t how you can do better next time.As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why dont you sit dow n and com muni catewith them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, youre sure to win the next one.Best wishes!You

36、rs,Li Hua主题四实战特训Writi ng 1每一代人都有他们不同的生活习惯，每一代人都有不同的思维方式，于是 代沟就悄然形成了。它如同一座大山一样，把不同时代的人截然分开，使他们不能彼此理解。经常听到有些孩子抱怨父母不理解他们，父母与孩子之间存在着代沟。假设你是一位父亲或母亲，你会怎样处理与孩子之间的关系？要求：语句通顺，过渡自然，80词左右。提示：1多交流，增进相互了解；2不要总是抱怨孩子，应当多鼓励；3给孩子适当的娱乐时间；4为孩子树立一个好典范。If I Were a Pare nt【参考范文】If I Were a Pare ntIf I were a pare nt, I w

37、ould try to com muni cate with my child. I would nt say I was n ot like this or that at his age.I would allow him to develop his hobbies, such as liste ning to pop music, watch ing action movies, choos ing hisown clothes, mak ing his own frien ds, etc. If I were a pare nt, I would en courage my chil

38、d to have more fun afterschool. The most importa nt thing is that I would set a good example for him and win his respect.Writi ng 2假设你是李华，望子成龙、望女成凤是很多父母的想法和心愿，这些父母仅仅是将孩子看成 了自己愿望的接力棒而已，或许在他们看来，生孩子就是为了实现自己未能实现的梦。在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求，有时你是否会感到厌烦呢？你是怎样解决的？请你根据以下表格提示用英语写一篇短文。父母的要求每天清扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉.你的看

39、法虽然太严厉，但理解他们.你的解决方式与父母多交流；为父母做些家务 要求：1文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容，可以展开思路，适当发挥。2不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息。3词数80左右。【参考范文】My n ame is Li Hua. There are too many rules in my family. I have to clea n the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I cant go out on school ni ghts. I must go to bed by 10:00 pm. I think my pare nts are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored. But I un dersta nd.they really love me. Ill com mun icate with my pare nts as much as possible .and share my happ in ess and sad ness with