浙江3套新高考英语试题读后续写部分及参考答案[共15页]

1、2016 年 10 月：读后续写（满分 25 分）阅读短文， 根据所给情节续写， 使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to campovernight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came upand they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so ang

2、ry that she saidto Tom, Im going to find a better spot for us to camp and walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbedto a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothingbut forest and, far beyond, a snow

3、capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she waslost.Tom! she cried. Help!No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop

4、for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wantedvery much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how muchshe loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water tricklin滴g(落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stre

5、am. To her great joy, shealso saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tastedanything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope itwould lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helico

6、pter. Is that for me?Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minuteslater, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that sheshould go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意 : 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用 5个以

7、上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3.续写部分分为两段 ,段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. JaneParagraph 2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.12016 年10 月 浙江高考 续写答案Possible versions 1:Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jan

8、e had to stay alone inthe forest for another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didnthought about Tom. “He must have called for thheol isceo p t e r s . Maybe he was in one ofthem and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow. ” She fell asleeof seeing Tom.Paragraph 2:It was da

9、ybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along thestream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a hugeflat rock in an open area at a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. Toher great joy, the helicopter appeared ag

10、ain. The nearer it got, the more she flaggedthe yellow blouse. Luckily, the helicopter didn t miss Jane this time and it landed near thebig rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down andburst into tears. (续写词数： 154)Possible versions 2:Paragraph 1:But no more heli

11、copters came and it was getting dark again. Jane tried to find shelterfrom the night cold. But unfortunately, she slipped over and broke her leg. With the extremepain, Jane managed to make her way to a rock for shelter. Under the rock, Jane stayed wideawake, knowing she might not be able to get to t

12、he lake with a broken leg. “Donbteafraid. Tom must be searching for me. And the helicopter will come back tomorrow, ” shethought to herself. After quite a while, Jane fell asleep.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She struggled to her feet and headed for thestream. After having some berr

13、ies and stream water, Jane walked slowly to an open area towait for her rescue. To her great joy, she soon heard the helicopter. Jane madly wavedher yellow blouse when it came into sight. Sadly, the helicopter flied away again. However,soon came the rescue team, together with Tom, who had found Jane

14、 s locatiohelicopter. Jane was saved. 续( 写词数： 163)22017 年6 月浙江卷读后续写（满 25 分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节续写，使之构成一个完整故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cyclingfrom his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicyclerepair, but they had enco

15、uraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. AsMac pedaled (骑行 ) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters athome. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. a b“ig dMo ag n! , thea”t sthought. But

16、 when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at allb, ut awolf : quickly catching up with him. Mac sheart jumped. He found out his can of hearspray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloudenveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell bac

17、k, shaking its head. But a minute later, itwas by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. Hefired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（. 追赶）Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but wa

18、s careful not toshow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew thaotnce he hit the hill, he be easy caught up and the wolf would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. Theydidn tht ink much of it when they saw two cyclists

19、repairing their bike on the side of theroad. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man ona bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehiclebehind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a

20、 dozen yards awaynow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。32017 年 6 月续写答案Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Seeing the car stop, Mac jumped off hisbicycle immediately and rushed to the door of the car. So frightened was he

21、that he hardlysaid a whole sentence, but stammered, “the wolf , please let me in. ”running towards the car, Paul opened the door without any hesitation, pulling Mac into thecar. Three men in the car were staring out of the window and saw the wolf standing there,thinking how to fight back the wolf.Pa

22、ragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. About a hundred meters away, thetwo men stopped and realized what had happened to their friend. Being aware of thweolf scruelty and not to startle the wolf, they were determined to stay where they were andattempted to think out an idea.

23、Suddenly, one of the cyclists touched the food bad whichthey brought. A good idea occurred to him that they could lead the wolf to the forest bythrowing their beef and pock away. Smelling the flavor of the meat, the wolf turned aroundand ran alongside the meat. The two cyclists u-turned in a crossro

24、ads. What comforted thetwo cyclists was that Mac did not get injured. r sto“p pTi nhgatnok syaovue fmo e, said Macto Paul and Becky. Mac and his two friends decided to go back home in case they would runinto the wolf again.42017.11月读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A vacation with my motherI had an

25、interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all becauseof my mother loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family tripwe took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parentsdecided to

26、spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along theway. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and Iunwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wedever see them again?Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we l

27、oaded suitcases, books, games,camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove offagain two hours later afterwedreturned home to get the purse andtraveler chescks Momhad forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Momwas dr

28、iving while Dad slept: “Youstand outside the door and play lookout放( 哨) whileI go, and I slltand outside the door and play lookout while yougo. ”I had terrible picturesin my mind: “Honeyw, here are thekids? ”“What?O! h, Gosh I thought they were beingawfully quiet. W”e were never actually left behind

29、 in a strange city, but wewerenatboutto take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After drivingin vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Whydidn wte find a house with alikely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David

30、 and I became nervousTo our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand ourobjections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have beendelighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found avacancy in the next town.注意： 1. 所续

31、写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us._Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._5解析 1：题型解读原题大意： 我的母亲和健忘（ absent-minded and

32、forgetfu）l ,一家四口去祖父母在的省自驾旅游，途中发生了有趣的事情，比如爸爸叫我盯住妈妈，以防她开车的时候睡着： 第一段开头句：我们拿出来新买的帐篷 第二段开头句：我们愉快地欣赏路边的景色 关键词： mom dad David (弟弟) tent camping nice trouble forgetful absent-minded浙江省在新高考改革后的第三次的英语高考中，又又又一次考了续写！（说好的概要和续写交替出现呢？）但是这次的续写话题和之前两次又不太一样，（ 2016年 10月：森林迷路； 2017 年 6 月：路上遇狼；）之前两次的话题都有着明确的主线和情节发展方向，但是

33、这次的话题非常开放，主线非常不明确，进而导致的问题是同学们不知道该怎么展开处理了 。实战解析 首先，根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事（尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个 forgetful 的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事）（也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现 nice这一个点）； 其次，第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景： 此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只能有景色描述； 例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，

34、看到景色（同时回忆往事），最终把故事的落脚点放在 “家人的感情 ”“亲情”生“活的乐趣 ”与“妈妈一起的趣事 ”等等角度都可以的；当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题；总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多； 再次，除了情节方面的内容以外，以下几个方面是考生需要着重关注的得分点：字迹清晰程度，语法多样性和句式丰富性，衔接成分的使用，语言的场景恰当程度；高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构一定程度上影响了老师对考生写作水平的判断；说到语法丰富性方面，例如在作文中用到从句结构、强调句、非谓语结构等。尤其应6该注意的是：避免句型单一化，如通篇使用定语从句，这样反而使阅卷

35、老师觉得该考生对句型掌握的不够充分。应该在文章写作中有意识地多使用不同的句型结构。例如： They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.（such.that结构）。 由于阅卷老师在评卷时的时间十分有限，在作文中放入显耀的连接词可以帮助老师快速抓住文章结构，促使老师更好地理解文章主旨，同时清晰的连接词可以显示作者写作时严谨的逻辑。例如： upon ones arrival, then, however,besides, while等。解析 2：题型解读读后续写既考查学生对所学语言知识的运用能力，

36、又考查学生的发散思维能力和创造力。该题型要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络和关系。续写这篇短文时，考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、 人物特征和情感等。 在此基础上， 考生顺着文章的思路， 根据线索，发挥想象， 对其后的情节进行合理预测， 并用英语表达出来。 同时，在组织语言时，切记使用 5个以上给出的提示词。读后续写表面看来难度不小，但在平时教学过程中，若能抓好词汇教学，注重词汇运用能力的培养，写出好的续写篇章是不成问题的。至于发散思维的培养，在高考备考阶段，如果能按话题进行词汇复习，将孤立的词汇通过话题联系起来，必然能起到事半功倍的效果。

37、续写分析 前文提要：第一段：童年有趣，总是充满惊喜和欢乐，皆因母亲可爱又迷糊健忘的性格。7第二段： 准备出游， 万事俱备， 但出发两小时后又返回家中， 因为妈妈忘了钱包等。第三段：兄弟俩对母亲的粗心大意可谓是心有余悸，生怕妈妈把他们落在加油站的厕所里独自上路，以至于上厕所要轮流“放哨”。第四段：妈妈是善良的，自然认为所有人都和自己一样善良，所以在找不到有空房的酒店时，妈妈才提议去别人的院子里搭帐篷。兄弟俩很紧张，还好爸爸否决了这个提议。最终一家人还是住进了酒店。续写线索：第一段所给首句： The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had

38、brought withus. 本段开头与前文衔接不太自然，却也就给考生提供了更为广阔的想象空间。既然记起了帐篷，那么可以围绕帐篷展开段落，可以体现母亲的“健忘”，也可突出母亲的 “善良”， 落脚在一些比较有趣的事上， 与第一段“surprise and amusement”s呼应。第二段所给首句： We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along theway. 与前文“意外不断”不同，本段画风突变，转而写风景，续写可往心情愉悦的方面写。此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托氛围，最终可把故事的落脚点放在“亲

39、情”“生活的乐趣”“母亲的趣事”等方面。续写词汇已给提示词汇：absent-minded, forgetful, trip, David, camping, tent, Mom, Dad, trouble, nice话题激活词汇：8情感：happy, glad, wonderful, terrific, great 动作：laugh, smile交通、旅行： drive, pull over, set the brake, set out, set off, trip, journey环境：scenery, mountain, range, valley, river, lake, fores

40、t, sun, set, wind, blow题型解读 3：本次的为续写的写作，续写的文本内容相对比上次的难， 今年的续写与以前两次不一样，出现了标题，也不是遇险了。初看文章有些地方情节不太顺畅。比如在第五段，作者表明他们不喜欢用帐篷，可是第六段的段首句说： The next daywe remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with u我s. 们记起了我们已经带来的帐篷。衔接不太自然啊。但这里也就给考生提供了更为广阔的想象空间。怎样更为合理？本次续写发挥空间比较大。比如续写第一段，说记起了帐篷，那后面我们会围绕帐篷展开一些话题。（当然也可能

41、不这样处理）按照“妈妈”健忘以及好心的性格特点，预测会发生一些有趣的事。估计会产生一些问题，然后这些问题解决了。因为续写第二段段首句表明他们顺利经过几个州，而且沿途欣赏美丽的景色，说明第一段结束的时候，一切进展顺利。 We drove through several states and saw lots ofgreat sights along the way.续写第二段段首语，明显画风变了，” saw lots of great sights along the way有心情欣赏美景了。之前是令人烦恼的，那么之后是令人快乐的。在优美的景色里，上演他们家人之间美妙的事。这里就需要考生发挥足够

42、的想象力。考虑到文章第一句话 I had an interesting childhood，最后一段要不要首尾呼应一下，说明会发生怎样interesting。文章最终体现的主题应该是亲情，是爱。9总体来看，2017 年浙江省高考英语试卷难度保持稳定，有较难的部分，但是相对来讲难易结合，较好地考查了考生对基础知识的掌握、语言运用的能力和一定的思维能力。Possible versions: 1.Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. But thenwe were half

43、an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying“Forgetfulpeople like me may lose things repeatedly, soit usnwise to give up thetent. F”inally, wegot back the tent and hit the road again. If Momhad

44、nbteen that absent-minded, it wouldhave saved us the trouble of going back again and again.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the

45、 tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast anorange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting aroundthe camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents ofthe journey a pleasant smile would spread oveMr o msfac

46、e. (续写词数 163)Possible versions:2.Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To ourdelight, Mom gave up the idea of camping in somestranger basckyard. Instead, we founda wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, whereDad

47、 could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were10disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke upwith a sore neck the next morning.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It

48、was afantastic trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, andoverlooked deep valleys. During the trip,Momsbeingabsent-minded not only got us intomuch trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so forgetfulas to leave me and Davidbehind in the gas

49、 station bathrooms. We all arrived atgrandparents h ome safe and sound.续( 写词数 147)11浙江英语高考新题型 读后续写 专练一 A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden.One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots inthe market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables t

50、o town. But it was raininghard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were soldout, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home hesaw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to helpthe per

51、son to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood onhis body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, anofficer asked, “Are these yours ” “Yes,

52、 sir. ” the f a（r m胆e怯r a地ns）we.red“t iHmai dvleyyou killed the man ” “No, no, sir. ” the farmer said in a hurry. “Whenman” “About seven last evening. ” “Did you see who killed the man ” “brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet ” “beNcoa,mseir.ang”ry The oand told the policemen to beat

53、him up and sent him into prison. The officer wanted to trapthe farmer into the confession供( 认), but the farmer didn t admit he was the mu注r d意er：er.1. 所续写的短文词数应为 150左右；2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段开头语已经为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用关键词语。Paragraph 1:The officer was so angry that he asked the p

54、oliceman to beat him up again. _Paragraph 2:The farmer was lucky .A few days later, _12Possible answer:专练一Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmerwas very afraid, he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he didnhe was in

55、nocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped thatsomeone could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with alot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who kill

56、ed theman on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening.he was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. Sohe took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young manwas right. The police

57、officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmerwas fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.13浙江英语高考新题型 -读后续写 专练二I was responding to a call from a small brick flat in a quiet part of town. I assumed Iwas being sent to pick up some party-goers，or someone who had just had a fight with alover，or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.When I arrived at 2：30 a.m.，the building was dark except for a single light in a ground