名师指津高中英语-高考写作分类掌握-35经历感受

1、 这类要点中常含这类要点中常含“以你或你朋友的经以你或你朋友的经历说明历说明(感受或观点感受或观点)”“讲述一次你或讲述一次你或你朋友你朋友的经历的经历”，前者所述经历一定，前者所述经历一定要紧扣你要说明的感受或观点，后者所述要紧扣你要说明的感受或观点，后者所述的经历故事多与阅读材料中的故事相类似。的经历故事多与阅读材料中的故事相类似。 叙述经历一般包括记叙文的基本要素叙述经历一般包括记叙文的基本要素,即某人在何时何地因何原因做了何事，结即某人在何时何地因何原因做了何事，结果如何，或者说，起因、经过和结果。果如何，或者说，起因、经过和结果。第二节第二节 读写任务读写任务 While walki

2、ng across the desert, one man was slapped by his best friend in the face but he chose to forgive him. Then he was saved by his best friend and he chose to remember it forever. As for me, I would readily choose to forgive others instead of quarrelling or fighting if I felt hurt by them. As is known,

3、forgiving others is the best way to remove the consequence of a conflict and contributes to a harmonious relationship. This reminds me of one of my experiences. Once, one of my best friends wronged me for stealing his money, which hurt me badly. At first, I wanted to hurt him back, but finally I cho

4、se to forgive him after thinking twice. We analyzed the whole thing together and he realized his misunderstanding. After that, he was moved and our relationship became closer. There is no doubt that forgiveness is of great importance in our life. First, forgiveness contributes to building up a harmo

5、nious relationship with others. Besides, forgiving people are considered more easy-going and trustworthy, which helps them make more friends and have more chances to succeed. Last but not least, only by letting go of past conflicts can we have a good mood and live a healthy and happy life.高考链接高考链接 叙

6、述一次想家的经历叙述一次想家的经历(时间、地点、原因时间、地点、原因)。 (2011广东高考广东高考) The passage reminds me of my own experience of feeling homesick. When I was 10 years old, I depended on my parents for everything. However, they once sent me to my uncles home in another city because they were too busy to take care of me. At that t

7、ime, I did miss my parents and feel lonely.一、写作技巧一、写作技巧 经历感受通常只需包含经历感受通常只需包含“谁？干了什么事？谁？干了什么事？结果如何？结果如何？”等等, 然后再谈谈本人对此次经历的然后再谈谈本人对此次经历的看看法及感受法及感受或是从这次经历中得出了什么或是从这次经历中得出了什么经验教训经验教训。 写经历时写经历时, 可用可用借鉴原文借鉴原文法。因为写经历就是法。因为写经历就是写记叙文写记叙文, 将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了, 但一但一定要注意定要注意主题与原文故事一致主题与原文故事一致。如。如: 原材料是

8、一个原材料是一个女孩因牙齿太大被别人嘲笑女孩因牙齿太大被别人嘲笑, 但她通过努力最终取但她通过努力最终取得了成功。我们就可说张三因身材矮小被人瞧不得了成功。我们就可说张三因身材矮小被人瞧不起起, 但他通过努力取得了成功。但他通过努力取得了成功。二、句式模板二、句式模板引出经历：引出经历： (1)The story reminds me of my experience. 这个故事让我想起了我自己的经历这个故事让我想起了我自己的经历(2)This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. 这个故事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的这个故

9、事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。经历。(3) I also had an unforgettable experience.我也曾有一次难忘的经历我也曾有一次难忘的经历(4) Take my personal experience in learning English for example. Three years ago, I. 就以我的亲身经历为例吧就以我的亲身经历为例吧, 三年前三年前, 我我(5) After reading Alans story, I recall the experience of my friend. 看了看了Alan的故事后的故事后, 我回想起我朋我回想

10、起我朋友的那段经历友的那段经历感受启示：感受启示： (1) From this experience I realize that its not easy but meaningful to be a journalist.通过这次经历通过这次经历, 我意识到做记者是我意识到做记者是不容易但又有意义的。不容易但又有意义的。(2) Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 只有通过循序渐进地学只有通过循序渐进地学习习, 我们才能有所成就我们才能有所成就。(3) I benefit a lot from this experi

11、ence and realized that it is honesty that wins us the respect from others and brings us real happiness. 这次经历让我受益匪浅这次经历让我受益匪浅, 我意识到我意识到正是诚实才让我们赢得他人的尊重正是诚实才让我们赢得他人的尊重, 也给我们也给我们带来快乐。带来快乐。(4) Therefore, I learned to cultivate myself to be strong-minded. 因此因此, 我学会了要将自己我学会了要将自己培养成意志坚强的人培养成意志坚强的人 控制性操练控制性操

12、练：以你自己做兼职的经历说明你的感受。以你自己做兼职的经历说明你的感受。1)首先，总述过渡，引出经历，作为开头语：我曾有首先，总述过渡，引出经历，作为开头语：我曾有过难以忘怀的兼职经历。过难以忘怀的兼职经历。2)然后，叙述经历，表明感受，得出结论：然后，叙述经历，表明感受，得出结论：Last summer, I got a job.，Not until then did I realize that. Therefore._ I once had an unforgettable experience of doing a part-time job. I once had an unforg

13、ettable experience of doing a part-time job.Last summer, I got a job in a restaurant. Everyday I had to stand beside the tables serving the customers and wash many dishes, which made me really tired. Not until then did I realize that it was not easy to earn money. Therefore I would reduce my daily e

14、xpenses to the minimum as well as try to make money by myself to pay my tuition fees.叙述你没有珍惜友谊而后悔的经历（包叙述你没有珍惜友谊而后悔的经历（包括时间、地点和起因）。括时间、地点和起因）。1) 首先，后悔自责，引出经历，作为开首先，后悔自责，引出经历，作为开头语：我本应该接受我最好的朋友的道头语：我本应该接受我最好的朋友的道歉。歉。2) 然后，叙述经历，表明感受然后，叙述经历，表明感受：I should have accepted the apology from my friend, Lili. W

15、hen we were in junior middle school, Lili once failed to keep her promise of getting me a photo of my idol. Despite her sincere apology, I refused to talk with her any more, thinking that she didnt cherish our friendship enough. Not until she moved to another city did I realize how much she meant to

16、 me. How I wish I hadnt lost a friend for the meaningless reason. (77 words)主题：叙述你或你的朋友类似主题：叙述你或你的朋友类似“揠苗助长揠苗助长”的经历和感受的经历和感受 The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three tim

17、es a day. However, he failed to follow the doctors advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step

18、can we achieve something. A similar example jumps into my mind. Last year, my friend Lily was admitted to a famous university in Beijing. 三、超级仿写三、超级仿写 1.以你自己或他人成长的某次经历以你自己或他人成长的某次经历, 说明父母说明父母过度照顾子女的影响过度照顾子女的影响。(2010广州一模广州一模)Having been under the complete protection of her parents for many years, she

19、 felt lost when dealing with some complex situations and found it hard to go on with her study without her parents care. In this case, being over loved gave rise to great harm and made it difficult for the child to achieve success.2.以你的经历说明合作的重要性。以你的经历说明合作的重要性。 I think the story can teach us that wh

20、en we work together we can achieve more than when we compete. The story reminds me of my experience when I first came to this school. My classmates, Michael showed great talent in science studies while I was pretty good at history and economics. I feared that Michael would outperform me in the exams

21、 so I avoided helping him and viewed him as my competitor. It was not until Michael suggested that we work together that I understood the importance and benefit of cooperation. We shared learning methods and helped each other. As a result, we both made progress in our studies and became top-ten stud

22、ents. In a word, working together is a win-win method.3.叙述你或你的亲友通过勤奋创造奇迹的一次真叙述你或你的亲友通过勤奋创造奇迹的一次真实或虚构的经历。实或虚构的经历。 This story reminds me of a similar experience of my cousin. He was nothing but a football fan. So you can imagine how angry and disappointed my uncle and aunt were every time the result o

23、f an exam came out! He had been the last in the list of the whole grade! Everybody around my cousin thought him hopeless. However, when he became a student of Senior Three, for some reason, he began to study very hard, or rather, day and night. In spite of the fact that he was quite often laughed at

24、, he kept on studying. To everybodys surprise, he was finally admitted into a famous university. From this story, we can see that nothing is impossible and that hard work creates miracles!4. 读写任务读写任务 阅读下面的短文阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一然后按照要求写一篇篇150词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。 Share your journey with someone and half you

25、r fuel costs. The high price of fuel may be persuading tens of thousands more people to change their trip to work by sharing the driving duties. Those who do share lifts with other people are being told they can save up to 2,000 a year in fuel costs and help prevent pollution. For those who persever

26、e, there can be great social benefits. Lift-sharers Jane and Steven, for example, it is not only lifts they are sharing now, but a house as well. Share books. Mr. Smith has made it a habit in the past year or so to pass on books after hes read them. As he is reading, he thinks of someone who might e

27、njoy the book next, so he hands it on. Not only does it share the love of reading, it lets that person know Im thinking of them. Share anything. Many famous films stars share experiences of joys or sorrows by writing blogs. Ordinary people also share their family photos or opinions about work, studi

28、es, health care, friends and so on.写作内容写作内容1.以约以约30词概括短文的主要内容；词概括短文的主要内容；2.然后以约然后以约120个词就个词就“分享分享”的主题的主题发表看法发表看法, 内容包括：内容包括： (1) 你愿意与人分享吗？为什么？你愿意与人分享吗？为什么？ (2) 说说某一次分享的经历；说说某一次分享的经历；(3) 分享的利弊。分享的利弊。 The passage encourages us to share with others because people get lots of benefits by sharing cars, houses, books and experiences. People can save money and spread happiness and love. Personally, I am too willing to share with oth