127陈文茹英语高考英语二轮复习短文改错备考策略1

1、短文改错备考策略短文改错备考策略 陈文茹陈文茹 宝鸡中学宝鸡中学 陕西省2010年新课程高考英语学科专题复习指导意见 一、新课改省区高考试题短文改错的变化一、新课改省区高考试题短文改错的变化 二、陕西省高考英语试题短文改错的特点二、陕西省高考英语试题短文改错的特点 三、三、20102010年如何应对新高考短文改错题年如何应对新高考短文改错题 主要内容主要内容 短文改错题型的意义短文改错题型的意义 短文改错题型在一定程度上帮助提高了写作部分在短文改错题型在一定程度上帮助提高了写作部分在 全卷中的权重，同时又能有效地避免评分误差，提全卷中的权重，同时又能有效地避免评分误差，提 高了试卷的信度和效度

2、。该试题区分度明显，有利高了试卷的信度和效度。该试题区分度明显，有利 于为各类高校选拔人才。于为各类高校选拔人才。 新短文改错更具灵活性新短文改错更具灵活性.能全面地考查学生对语言能全面地考查学生对语言 的评价与校正能力以及对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的评价与校正能力以及对词汇、语法和语篇三要素 的把握能力。短文改错结合了阅读和书面表达两方的把握能力。短文改错结合了阅读和书面表达两方 面的能力考查，是综合性强难度较大的题型。面的能力考查，是综合性强难度较大的题型。 新课标考区中的短文改错题型新课标考区中的短文改错题型 2009年新课标考区中年新课标考区中,有福建、安徽、辽宁、有福建、安徽、辽宁、

3、陕西、浙江、宁夏等考卷包括有短文改错的陕西、浙江、宁夏等考卷包括有短文改错的 题型。其中宁夏海南浙江辽宁等省在题型。其中宁夏海南浙江辽宁等省在2009年年 高考中运用了新短文改错题型，其他几个省高考中运用了新短文改错题型，其他几个省 使用原题型。使用原题型。2010年高考陕西省将使用新短年高考陕西省将使用新短 文改错题型。此题考查面宽，阅读和书面表文改错题型。此题考查面宽，阅读和书面表 达两方面的能力考查，命题针对学生在日常达两方面的能力考查，命题针对学生在日常 学习中，写作中常犯的错，错点都设计在很学习中，写作中常犯的错，错点都设计在很 常见的词，短语和简单的句子中。常见的词，短语和简单的句

4、子中。 自自2007年以来宁夏年以来宁夏/海南高考英语试卷中的短文改错题做了海南高考英语试卷中的短文改错题做了 调整，把原来设题短文由调整，把原来设题短文由10行调整为行调整为78行，由原来的行，由原来的10行行9 错调整为共有错调整为共有10处错误，每句最多有两处错误，取消了原来找处错误，每句最多有两处错误，取消了原来找 出正确的一行，这些调整都体现了更多的新意和合理性：一是出正确的一行，这些调整都体现了更多的新意和合理性：一是 更加符合写作时出现错误的客观规律；二是在试题导语中加入更加符合写作时出现错误的客观规律；二是在试题导语中加入 说明说明“假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请

5、你修假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修 改你同桌写的作文。改你同桌写的作文。”这就说明短文改错就是针对我们学生在这就说明短文改错就是针对我们学生在 英语写作中常见的错误而设计的。英语写作中常见的错误而设计的。 2009年浙江省也开始用这种年浙江省也开始用这种 形式的短文改错。形式的短文改错。 这种改变后的短文改错短文情景自然，任务真实，在原短这种改变后的短文改错短文情景自然，任务真实，在原短 文改错的难度区间内，能够适当弥补书面表达部分考查的不足文改错的难度区间内，能够适当弥补书面表达部分考查的不足 ，加强试卷对较高水平学生的区分度，因此具有较高的实用价，加强试卷对较高水平学生的

6、区分度，因此具有较高的实用价 值。值。 新课标考区中的短文改错题型的变化新课标考区中的短文改错题型的变化 短文改错新题型具体分析短文改错新题型具体分析 第二卷中写作第一节第二卷中写作第一节 第一节第一节 短文改错（共短文改错（共1010小题；每小题小题；每小题1 1分，满分分，满分1010 分）分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有1010处语言错处语言错 误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、 删除或修改。删除或修改。

7、 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下），并在其下 面写出该加的词。面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修 改后的词。改后的词。 注意：注意：1.1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；每处错误及其修改均限一词； 2.2.只允许修改只允许修改1010处，多者（从第处，多者（从第1111处起）不计分。处起）不计分。 (2007宁夏、海南卷宁夏、海南卷) I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday p

8、arty five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Mengs parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches t

9、here. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havent see each other much, but weve kept writing to each other.注意!试卷上原文是按照八行呈现.陕西省 2010年高考短文改错将以此短文改错为样板) （2007宁夏、海南卷）宁夏、海

10、南卷） I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five friends to place. We listen to my CDs together and soon listened became best friends. Three years ago, Li Mings parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in me a 或或 weeks Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walk

11、ing along the beautifully beautiful beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay and （2007宁夏、海南卷）宁夏、海南卷） in hospital for a week. Li Ming came to see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havent see each other much but weve seen kept writin

12、g to each other。 （2008宁夏、海南卷）宁夏、海南卷） Dear Ms Smith, I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but high school s

13、tudents and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event.As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, wed like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Ming 试卷上原文是按

14、照六行呈现试卷上原文是按照六行呈现 2008宁夏、海南卷宁夏、海南卷 Dear Ms Smith, I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition are for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition the It Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but high

15、 school students and paintings and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly popular with us Chinese high school students, wed like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. if us Looking forward to hear

16、 from you soon. hearing (2009宁夏、海南卷宁夏、海南卷) Dear Mrs Winthorp, So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think Id e-mail you and let you know what things are going. Im glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the

17、 lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well, I had better to stop now. Im going to attend mine

18、first lesson this afternoon, for Ive got some preparation to make. Keep in ouch. Best, Carol原文八行呈现原文八行呈现 (2009宁夏宁夏/ 海南卷海南卷) Dear Mrs Winthorp, So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think Id e-mail you and let you know what things are going. how Im glad to say that anythi

19、ng has worked everything out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on found second floor.There are two girls from my the course here and I plan to make friend with friends them so that we can help each other on the co

20、urse work. Everyone else with seems very nice and warmly here warm Well, I had better to stop now. Im going to attend mine first lesson this my afternoon, for Ive got some so preparation to make. Keep in ouch. Best, Carol （2009浙江卷）浙江卷） One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a

21、truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disapp

22、ear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.原文六行呈现原文六行呈现 （2009浙江卷）浙江卷） One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, friends a truck came t

23、o a stop besides us. The driver put the window beside down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet an through. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted was gratefully the offer, thanked him and watched the

24、 truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and but （2009浙江卷）浙江卷） he preferred to give it to everyone else. someone/somebody It was a lesson to us that it was possible give to without expect anything in return. expecting 知识项目知识项目 07宁宁08宁宁 主谓一致主谓一致 形容词副词形容词副词 11 从句（代词）从句

25、（代词） 12 非谓语非谓语 动词时态语态动词时态语态 31 名词数和格名词数和格 21 冠词冠词 /介词介词1 固定短语句型固定短语句型 22 行文逻辑行文逻辑 /连连 词词 12 结构平行结构平行 知识项目知识项目 09宁宁09浙浙 主谓一致主谓一致 形容词副词形容词副词 11 从句（代词）从句（代词） 21 非谓语非谓语 1 动词时态语态动词时态语态 11 名词单复数名词单复数 11 冠词冠词 /介词介词13 固定短语句型固定短语句型 2 1 行文逻辑行文逻辑 /连词连词 21 结构平行结构平行 新课标考区中新新课标考区中新短文改错题型呈现的特点题型呈现的特点 （1）错误点大多数集中在词

26、法内容上。主 要体现在名词、代词的数与格，动词时态语 态，短语动词常见固定搭配的用法，不规则 动词的变化形式，形容词副词的区别，介词 的误用等。 （2）句法内容重点考查上下文指代一致， 并列连词，从属连词等引导各种从句的关联 词语。 陕西省陕西省20062006高考英语短文改错高考英语短文改错 Here are the information about Manchester University. 76. is It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 77. far _ has a very big schoolyard. You

27、 can live in the school 78. or near the school. They have all sorts of course. 79. courses Im sure you will find one you like it. I know you 80. it are particular interested in Human Rights. So I will 81.particularly 陕西省陕西省20062006高考英语短文改错高考英语短文改错 see that there is anything on their website(网址网址). 8

28、2. if/whether_ Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 83._to_ when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 84._arrive_ has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or l look 85._and_ forward to seeing you again. See you soon. Pat 2006改错考查改错考查 名词名词1 courses 形容词副词形容词副词2 far, parti

29、cularly 连词连词2if/whether 宾语从句宾语从句 and 非谓语不定式非谓语不定式1加加to 动词时态动词时态1arrive 定语从句定语从句/代词代词1去掉定语从句中的去掉定语从句中的it 主谓一致主谓一致1 is 陕西省陕西省20072007高考英语短文改错高考英语短文改错 Are the years you spent at school best years of your life? 76._the_ Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 77 lessons_ sit at o

30、ur desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers 78_pay_ were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask 79_were_ us difficult questions. We also had to do plenty of homework, and 80_ 陕西省陕西省20072007高考英语短文改错高考英语短文改错 hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lo

31、ts of 81_in_ rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books 82_could_ at the public library, and late I decided to attend college. Now 83_later_ I really enjoy study because Im growing old and know what I 84 studying_ want it. When I was at school. I was just the wrong age! 85_

32、it_ 2007改错考查改错考查 形容词副形容词副1 later 代词代词1 去掉宾语从句中去掉宾语从句中it 非谓语非谓语1 动名词做宾语动名词做宾语studying 时态语态情态时态语态情态 1 could 名词单复数名词单复数1 lessons 冠词冠词1 加加the 固定句型短语固定句型短语 2 were used to 去去were on time 改为改为in time 结构平衡结构平衡1 pay 和和We had to sit 平衡平衡 陕西省陕西省20082008高考英语短文改错高考英语短文改错 John Brown is a London taxi driver who lo

33、ve going to the 76 loves theater. Last week his mother gave him two tickets for a play. 77 The tickets were on Sunday evening. Then John read some 78 for reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one! He 79 terrible wouldnt go to see a play that no one liked it. So two hours 80 it before

34、 the play started, he left the ticket on the back seat of 陕西省陕西省20082008高考英语短文改错高考英语短文改错 before the play started, he left the ticket on the back seat of 81 tickets his taxi. Perhaps someone who wanted see the play would take 82 to them. However, while John went back home, the tickets were 83 when st

35、ill there. In the fact, there were four tickets on the seat. 84 the Someone has placed another pair of tickets on top of them! 85 had 2008改错考查改错考查 名词名词/介词介词各各1 tickets for 形容词副词形容词副词1 terrible 连词连词/行文逻辑行文逻辑1when 状语从句状语从句 非谓语不定式非谓语不定式1加加 to 不定式做宾语不定式做宾语 动词时态动词时态2 had 定语从句定语从句/代词代词1 去掉定语从句中去掉定语从句中it 冠

36、词冠词1 去掉去掉the 固定表达中多余固定表达中多余 陕西省陕西省20092009高考英语短文改错高考英语短文改错 My classmate ,Joseph ,is at present in hospital with a breaking leg .He was walking to school the other 76.broken day when he let a bicycle ran right into him .He never 77.run watches where he is going ,so he often gets into the trouble. 78.

37、the But he is having a nice time there .He has a comfortable 79.正确 room, patiently nurses , and a great deal of time to read . 80. patient Some friends of his go to see him every day , they take him 81. and lots of good book and fresh fruit .He is not losing any time 82. books from school because he

38、 is busy study what he has 83. studying missed in class .The doctor says he is recovering fast than 84. faster expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks . 85. in/within 2009改错考查改错考查 名词名词/介词介词各各1 books in/within 形容词副词形容词副词2 patient faster 连词连词/行文逻辑行文逻辑1 and 并列句并列句 非谓语不定式非谓语不定式2run考查考查let sb do

39、 studying考查考查be busydoing broken 过去分词做定语过去分词做定语 动词时态动词时态0 定语从句定语从句/代词代词0 冠词冠词1去去the 固定短语中多余冠词固定短语中多余冠词 近年来陕西短文改错中反复考查点近年来陕西短文改错中反复考查点 一一,名词冠词名词冠词 1,名词前的冠词是否误用名词前的冠词是否误用 2,名词的格名词的格 3,名词的单复数名词的单复数 二二, 动词的时态、语态及主谓一致动词的时态、语态及主谓一致 动名词、不定式、现在分词、过去分词及动词的特殊用法动名词、不定式、现在分词、过去分词及动词的特殊用法 三三,人称代词的格，指示代词及关系代词及主从句

40、之间的关系人称代词的格，指示代词及关系代词及主从句之间的关系 1人称代词的格是否误用。人称代词的格是否误用。 2. 代词前后指代是否一致。代词前后指代是否一致。 3.it的特殊用法。的特殊用法。 四四,形容词形容词/副词词法副词词法,判断句中的形容词和副词是否误用。判断句中的形容词和副词是否误用。 五五,介词惯用法介词惯用法,惯用法中介词是否误用惯用法中介词是否误用 六六,连词连词/行文逻辑行文逻辑 判断句中的并列连词，从属连词是否误用。判断句中的并列连词，从属连词是否误用。 动词形式名词数 还要注意形和副 代词格,细领悟 介词短语需关注 习惯用法要记住 冠词连词常光顾 20102010年陕西

41、省新高考短文改错题年陕西省新高考短文改错题 20102010年陕西省短文改错将采用宁夏海年陕西省短文改错将采用宁夏海 南卷的形式南卷的形式, ,以以20072007年宁海短文改错题年宁海短文改错题 为样题为样题. . 第二节：满分第二节：满分15分。本题给出一篇约分。本题给出一篇约100- 1 10个单词的短文，文中有个单词的短文，文中有1 0处错误，错处错误，错 误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等。要误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等。要 求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错即将求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错即将 其改正。（宁海卷短文改错满分其改正。（宁海卷短文改错满分10分）分） 2010201

42、0年我们如何应对新高考短文改错题年我们如何应对新高考短文改错题 新短文改错的形式虽然有所改变，难度并没有有 增加，大都是学生在学习和写作中常犯的错误， 故只要掌握好基础知识，并辅以科学训练，相信 会成为学生的得分点。 在词法、句法、行文逻辑三方面进行科学有效的 二轮复习，相信会在后期取得明显的效果。这三 方面复习到位了，很多知识也迁移到单项选择的 考点中，真是一举两得。 词法复习要点词法复习要点 动词常见错误: 高考链接 1,时态错误 (上下文和主从句间的动词时态 的呼应,以及虚拟语气中时态的运用) She was eating her sandwich and drank her milk

43、at the table when I arrived We listen to my CDs together and soon became best friends. 动词常见错误动词常见错误 He ordered that the work must be started at once After I handed in my maths paper,I had felt I would not get a good score.(单选迁移) 2,主谓一致错误 Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library Here ar

44、e the information about Manchester University. Anyone may borrow books from the library,and it cost nothing to borrow them. 动词常见错误动词常见错误 More than one student have been there. Five years are not long in ones life. 3,语态错误语态错误 His hair and clothes were still got wet with the rain. With their hard work

45、,our life has been gotten better. (getting) The bike outside is belonged to him. 4,短暂性动词和延续性动词的区别短暂性动词和延续性动词的区别 You can not borrow it too long. (keep, have) They had got in touch with each other for ages before they met. (kept) 5,同义近义混淆同义近义混淆 I forgot my English book in the library. (left) He wanted

46、 to see the report. (read) He felt someone shouting to him. 6,非谓语动词错误非谓语动词错误 They were made do the job. Looking forward to hear from you soon. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return. 动词常见错误 Our duty is to protect wildlife ,not destroy it. The boy went over

47、at once,opened his umbrella for the old man.单选 迁移 7,缺少谓语动词 When everything ready,the party began. People in the future will able to enjoy a longer ,healthier and more active life. 8,谓语动词处多词 The sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will be put off. I was being waiting on line to buy your n

48、ew book. He was felt very pleased. 9,动词短语不完整(或者多词或者少词) Are you getting up on well with your parents ? Have you ever heard the saying: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy? Can you come up for a good idea to help us out? 名词常见错误 主要体现在数和格的考点.要留意特殊现象 Only mans clothes are sold in the shop. He give

49、 us some good advices. We sat down and ordered two coffee. 不可数名词加s后的特别含义要留心 times manners papers customs forces What pleasant surprise you gave me! 注意an arrival, a beauty, a failure, an hounr , a must , a success The next day he came to borrow a book of my father. Three days journey made me tired. T

50、hen PE can enrich school life and increase students interest in study Everywhere peoples are always throwing away wrappings from food or clothes I saw a boy with heavy glass on his nose. One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to stop beside me. 冠词常见的错误 1冠词漏用 2冠词多余

51、 3不定冠词和定冠词误用 冠词漏用 1 I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. 09宁 2 We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. 08宁 3 Are the years you spent at school best years of your life? 07陕 冠词多余 In the fa

52、ct, there were four tickets on the seat.07陕 He never watches where he is going ,so he often gets into the trouble. 09陕 Im a senior school student in the No.1 Middle School. 不定冠词和定冠词误用 The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. 09浙江 形容词副词常见错误 1,形容词和副词的误用 2,形容词和副词最高级和比较级的误用 3,比较级修饰词错误 4

53、,同义近义和易混淆词的误用 形容词和副词的误用高考实例 Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. 09宁 I grateful accepted the offer.09浙 As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, wed like to invite for you to the exhibition. 08宁 Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. 07宁 形容词和

54、副词的误用高考实例 He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses , and a great deal of time to read.09陕 Then John read some reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one! 08陕 I know you are particular interested in Human Rights. 06陕 I read books at the public library, and late I decided to attend c

55、ollege. 07陕 从上面例子中可以看出,高考命题中主要设错在于 形容词和副词的误用,其他的三种情况出现频率少 点,但是,我们在备考中也不能轻视. Police cars hurried to the taller building in New York. People in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. She stood closely to her mother as she felt cold. 代词常见错误 人称,物主代词,反身代词的误用和不一致 不定代词的误用

56、 1.Im glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. 09宁 2.This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone.09浙 3.Three years ago, Li Mings parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. 07宁 4. We would be gr

57、ateful when you could join them that day. 08宁 陕西省近四年短文改错考查代词 Im sure you will find one you like it. 06陕陕 I really enjoy study because Im growing old and know what I want it. 07陕陕 He wouldnt go to see a play that no one liked it. 08陕陕 陕西省在四年中代词考了3次,其中2次是定 语从句中多词,一个是宾语从句中多词. 物主 代词,反身代词,不定代词没有出现过,我们备 考

58、不可忽视. 介词常见错误 误用误用,多用和漏用介词多用和漏用介词 wed like to invite for you to the exhibition.08宁宁 I plan to make friends with them so that we can help each other on the course work 09宁宁 Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. 07宁宁 He will be out of hospital a few weeks .09陕陕 The tickets were on Sunday evening. 08

59、陕陕 We also had to do plenty of homework, and hand it on time. 07陕陕 介词设错点多是动词或名词搭配介词设错点多是动词或名词搭配,或者常见的介词短语或者常见的介词短语,所以所以 在备考中我们要把常见介词搭配复习充分在备考中我们要把常见介词搭配复习充分.这对于单项选这对于单项选 择择,完型填空的复习都是弥补完型填空的复习都是弥补,可谓一箭三雕可谓一箭三雕.在完成了一轮在完成了一轮 复习后复习后,在此环节的复习和前者构成在此环节的复习和前者构成“造造固固”的关系的关系,我们我们 就彻底把基础建牢固了就彻底把基础建牢固了. 需要反复练习的

60、介词 over, above, on, beyond across, through, past at, in by, with to, for, towards besides, except 句法常见错误之一 固定句型 简单句 强调句 感叹句 并列句 复复 合合 句句 引导状语从句的从属连词引导状语从句的从属连词 引导定语从句的从属连词引导定语从句的从属连词 引导名词性从句的从属连词引导名词性从句的从属连词 句法常见错误之二 常见行文逻辑错误 常见行文逻辑错误主要体现在下面两方面： 句子中的行文逻辑； 上下文的行文逻辑。 1.Last year I was ill but had to s