高级商务英语BEC2021写作部分综合指导

1、资料来源：来自本人网络整理！祝您工作顺利！高级商务英语bec2021写作部分综合指导 为了让大家可以进步bec高级的写作分数，我在这里给你们带来高级商务英语bec2021写作局部综合指导，仅供参考。 高级商务英语bec2021写作局部综合指导(1) 7. 说明缘由： this is owing to due to a result of because of 注：owing to 通常用于不好的消息。假如想在缘由中用法动词，请加上the fact that的从句。 环境： you have seen an advertisement in the newspaper for a post as

2、 office manger. you want an application form. i would appreciate it if you could send me an application form. the photocopier in your office has broken down. you want to have it repaired, quickly. we would be grateful if you could send a repairman to fix our photocopier as soon as possible. you have

3、 moved your office and you want the post office to forward your letters to your new address. please could you forward my letters to my new address. you want the telephone company to put another telephone in your office. you need it urgently. we would appreciate it if you could put another telephone

4、in our office immediately. you have written to a company and you want them to reply quickly. i would be grateful if you could give us a reply quickly. 8. 恳求实行行动： please could you as soon as possible. we would be grateful if you could without delay. we would be appreciate it if you could immediately.

5、 注：please could you 是最挺直的方式。在要求一些一般性的事情时，可以用法这种表达 9. 愧疚： we must apologize for we apologize for we are extremely sorry for 注：以上句型后请用法动词ing形式。 以上句型中的for可以换成that，然后用从句表达。 一般来说，说明产生问题的缘由，然后在信的结尾处再次表达歉意。 再次愧疚： please accept our apologies once again. we hope that this has not caused you any inconvenience

6、. with apologies once again. 10. 要求供应信息： please could you we would be grateful if you could we would appreciate it if you could give us further details about . inform us (about/if) let us know ( about/if ) we would like to know ( about/if ) 注：假如需要特殊重要的信息，可以在以上句型前用法：in particular。 环境： you wrote a let

7、ter to someone and they havent replied. you want to know if they received the letter. we would be grateful if you could let us know if the letter has reached you. a businessman is going to your country. he wants you to get a visa for him. you need all the details about his passport (his nationality,

8、 date of birth, where his passport was issued, and when it expires). please could you give details about your passport. i would like to know your nationality, date of birth, where your passport was issued and when it expires. you want to know about the same businessmans flight (flight number, date a

9、nd time of arrival). in particular, i would like to know your flight number, date and time of arrival. increase prices - fall of the dollar we have been force to increase our prices. this is owing to the fall of the dollar. delay the delivery of the goods - strike by airline pilots we have been forc

10、ed to delay the delivery of the goods. this is owing to the strike by airline pilots. increase all salaries by 10% - rise in sales we are able to increase all salaries by 10%. this is the result of a big rise in sales. cut all salaries by 10% - fall in sales we have been forced to cut all salaries b

11、y 10%. this is due to the fact that there has been a fall in sales in the past ten months. cannot deliver your new order - we have not received your payment fro the last order we regret that we are unable to deliver your new order immediately. this is owing to the fact that we have not received your

12、 payment for the last order. cancel the meeting - a lot of staff have been ill we have been forced to cancel the meeting. this is because some members of our staff have been ill. bec高级商务英语2021写作局部综合指导(2) 11. 轻度埋怨： unfortunately, + 表示 something is wrong 的句子 环境： a company has sent you a bill for the w

13、rong goods. unfortunately you sent us a bill for the wrong goods. please could you send us a correct bill as soon as possible. your new photocopier has broken down. you have to write to the company who sold it to you. unfortunately our new photocopier has broken down. please could you send a repairm

14、an to fix it for us as soon as possible. two temporary secretaries do not speak english. you have to write to the agency who sent them to you. unfortunately two temporary secretaries you recommended to us do not speak english. we would be grateful if you could recommend two more who could speak engl

15、ish. you keep receiving letters for someone else. you have to write to the post office. unfortunately i keep receiving letters for someone else. please could you make the address clear before you deliver letters every day. 12. 提示某人对某事的留意： i should like to draw your attention to (the fact that) i sho

16、uld like to point out that 假如你提示的事情对方已经知道(你想表达你的生气)： i should like to remind you that i hope that it is not necessary to remind you that 环境： one of your staff keeps parking his car in front of the main door, the space which is reserved for the md. i should like to remind you that the space in front

17、of the main door is reserved for the md. someone is interested in purchasing a large quantity of your simplex cameras. tell him about 25% discount for large orders. i should like t draw your attention to the fact that we offer about 25% discount for larger orders. one of your staff arrives half an h

18、our late for work every day. (she should start at 9.30.) i hope that it is not necessary to remind you that work start at 9: 30 every day. someone is interested in your products. tell him that you guarantee that your prices are the largest in the country. i should like to point out that we guarantee

19、 that all prices are the lowest in the country. 13. 要求某人实行行动： we must insist that do (do指动词原型) 注：请留意这一句型和句型8的区分。 环境： we must insist that you deliver the goods immediately. 14. 警告： unless if(not) we will be forced to 环境：(what warnings would you give these people?) a company that has not paid your bil

20、l unless you pay the bill, we will be forced to take legal actions. another company that is using your companys car park if you do not move your car away from our park, we will be forced to turn to the police. an employee who always arrives late for work unless you come to work on time, we will be f

21、orced to fire you. a builder who has left a lot of their tools in your office if you do not take your tools from our office, we will be forced to throw them away. 15. 剧烈埋怨： 注： 剧烈埋怨遵循以下步骤： a. 阐述发生的问题：it is now over nine months since we placed this order and we are still waiting for the cabinets. b. 用

22、法句型12：i should like to point out that we have already paid for these cabinets. c. 用法句型 13：we must insist that you deliver them immediately. d. 用法句型14：unless we hear from you within 7 days we will take legal action. bec高级商务英语2021写作局部综合指导(3) 第三章 写作后的检查(包括图表写作) 检查的四个主要方面： 1.标点符号： 完全禁用的符号： ：“ 。 2.拼法： 双写

23、辅音 y改成复数 3.语法： 主谓全都 冠词 次序 介词 时态 漏词 4.可能导致信息表达不清的因素： 太长的段落 太长的句子 运用不常用法的词汇 一次包含太多的信息 信息不完好 信息挨次混乱 图表作文 对于线性图表的描绘 上升 1. 对于上升趋势的描绘： a. 可以用法的动词或动词词组： to increase to go up to rise to grow to jump to leap to soar to shoot to pick up b. 可以用法的名词： an increase a growth a jump a soar an upward trend 2. 对于上升到某个

24、位置的描绘： a. 1. a. 中的动词+to+详细数据。 b. 1. a. 中的动词+to+the peak of+详细数据。 c. 1. a. 中的动词+reaching the peak of +详细数据。 d. 1. a. 中的动词+reaching + 详细数据。 e. to peak at + 详细数据 f. to climb to + 详细数据 3. 对于上升的程度的描绘： a. 1. a. 中的动词+by + 详细数据。 b. 1. a. 中的动词+副词。 对于平稳的趋势的描绘，可以用法的动词或动词词组： to hardly change to have little chan

25、ge to keep steady to level off to remain constant to stay the same 表示程度的副词： 1. 程度较大： considerably dramatically greatly markedly obviously quickly rapidly sharply significantly suddenly 2. 程度较小： slightly gradually slowly steadily 时间的嵌入 嵌入时间时所用法的介词和介词词组： in fromto between.and duringand at the start of by the end of over at the end of throughout 时间s + 详细数据 高级商务英语bec2021写作局部综合指导(4) 上升和下降趋势的组合描绘(嵌入了时间和程度之后)： 1. 先上升后下降的句型： . increased slowly during and but fell sharply in . a steady fall in during and followed the s