2021考研英语备考：作文提升小攻略-范例

1、 2021考研英语备考：作文提升小攻略2021考研英语备考：作文提升小攻略一、分词用于首段描图考研英语大作文的文字规定部分明确给出要求，首段必须对图画或图表的内容进行描写阐释，分词结构的运用主要是对图画或图表的具体细节进行修饰补充。在句子中若有一个主体，多个动作时，可以用分词做状语;若遇到简单的动词结构做修饰语时，可以用分词做定语。例1：两名游客在船上边吃边聊，扔了许多垃圾到湖里。分词结构做状语。句子的主干是“两名游客边吃边聊”，是一个“主谓”结构。“在船上”做地点状语。“扔了许多垃圾到湖里”做伴随状语。主干可译为two visitors are chatting and eating。“扔了

2、许多垃圾到湖里”是句子的主语做的另外一个动作，所以可以译为伴随状语，即throwing various garbages into the lake。Two visitors are chatting and eating on a boat, throwing various garbages into the lake.例2：火锅中有很多被煮的文化元素。分词结构做定语。句子主干是“火锅中有许多文化元素”，是一个There be结构。“被煮的”做“文化元素”的定语。主干可利用there be句型翻译为“there are many cultural elements in the hot p

3、ot”。“文化元素”的修饰语中包含一个动词“煮”，与“文化元素”是被动关系，实际上是动词结构做定语，可译为分词被动结构。There are many cultural elements being boiled in the hot pot.二、分词做状语用于论述分词结构做状语时，可以表现出与句子主干之间的逻辑关系，比如说明原因、阐述结果等，与其用其他句子来表述，不如用分词更为简洁明了。例1：孩子被父母宠坏了，从来没有机会了解苦难是什么。过去分词做状语表原因。句子的主干是“孩子没有机会”，是“主谓宾”结构。“被父母宠坏了”从逻辑上来说是主干的原因。“了解苦难是什么”补充说明没有机会做的具体内容

4、。“被父母宠坏了”说明的是原因，可以译为分词结构spoiled by their parents。“有机会做某事”译为have a chance to do。“了解苦难是什么”可以拆分为“了解”和“苦难是什么”，是动词加上一个宾语从句，译为learn what hardship means。Spoiled by their parents, children can never have a chance to learn what hardship means.例2：考虑到问题的严重性，我们必须马上采取有效措施。现在分词做状语表原因。句子的主干是“我们必须马上采取有效措施”。“考虑到问题的严

5、重性”说明“采取措施”的原因。“我们必须马上采取有效措施”可以译为 we must take effective measures immediately。“考虑到问题的严重性”与主干是因果逻辑关系，译为分词短语considering the severity of the problem。Considering the severity of the problem, we must take effective measures immediately.2021考研英语：作文亮点首尾句解析1、 As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon 2、

6、As is shown in the pie chart这两个句式用as引导的非限定性定语从句引出图画或图表内容，意为漫画以象征的手法为我们阐述了一个观点，正如饼状图显示的那样。3、From the picture we can see该句式中的亮点是将介词短语做状语置于句首，不影响句子的整体结构。4、 Portrayed in the set of drawings above are/is5、Emerging from the drawing is a miracle:6、 Described by the bar chart above are/is这三个句式都是倒装结构，非常漂亮。放在

7、篇首，能够在茫茫考卷中，吸引阅读组老师的眼球，分数定会提升。7、The cartoonist laid out the image elaborately, placing.at the center of picture.8、 The implication conveyed in the cartoon is that这两个句式中使用了分词结构placing和conveyed。大家在学考研语法时，知道分词结构是考研英语中的核心考点。如果在写作中能够灵活运用这一核心考点，阅读组老师自然会觉得咱们考生功底深厚，作文定能得到理想分数。9、The photo exhibits us an eye-

8、catching scene:该句式用特殊标点符号(冒号)引出图画描述的具体内容。这样的句式，比较方便，考生使用起来比较灵活。首段图画或图表内容描述清楚后，一定要在作文中提出自己对该现象或者哲理的看法或观点，这样的作文才有深度。一想到提出看法、观点，同学们脑海中立刻浮现的句式 in my opinion, from my point of view，as far as I am concerned。这些句式太过于平凡，无法让阅卷组老师眼前一亮。那怎样让阅卷组老师欢喜呢?以下几个句式，供大家学习：(1)It is undeniable that(不可否认)(2) It is obvious th

9、at(明显的是)(3) It occurs to me that(我想到)(4) I give my vote to the former/ the latter opinion. (我同意前者/后者的观点)(5) be supported by sound reasons(有充分的理由支持)(6)As the proverb goes(正如谚语所说)点睛尾句1、It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to.例句：It is hoped that we should pay more attent

10、ion to the problems of unemployment.2、Only in this way/only when/only through., will/can we.例句：It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.3、 As long as., we will be able to./the problems is bound to.例句：As long as we persist in spreading scienti

11、fic knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.4、In the course of time/In a long run/In the long term, sth. is more likely/bound/sure to.例句：In a long run, the practice of birth control is believed to do a great benefit to the future of China.5、In a word, there

12、is every/little chance/probability/possibility that.in time to come.例句：In a word, there is every chance that this wise move in economic construction will acquire a broader significance in time to come.6、Anything/anyone that/who.will have to.例句：Anyone who has a strong bias against China will have to

13、threat her with increased respect.7、It is high time that.例句：It is high time that the issue were to be solved so as to promote the economic development.8、 We should do our best in eliminating.例句：We should do our best in eliminating air pollution.9、The problem is not.; the problem is.例句：The problem is

14、 not that we cannot do it; the problem is that we hate to do such nasty things.10、In order to., we must.例句：In order to make our world a better place in which to live, we must learn to live in harmony with all wildlife species.11、All the above evidence/experience/ facts goes to show that.例句：All the a

15、bove evidence goes to show that the birth of computer has benefited our life greatly.12、No surprising/ It is apparent that the task of.demands/requires/deserves immediate/serious/considerable attention/consideration.例句：It is, therefore, apparent that the task of fighting against corruption requires

16、considerable consideration no13、We can come to the conclusion that.例句：We can come to the conclusion that living on campus is the best way of learning independence, and of understanding other people and society at large.14、 We then have reasons to be confident that in the near future.例句：We then have

17、reasons to be confident that in the near future, no child is forced out of school because of poverty.15、 My suggestion is that.; otherwise.例句：My suggestion is that effective measures should be taken to check population growth; otherwise, the potential consequences are unimaginable.16、As for me, I ha

18、ve always been taking care to. So, I.例句：As for me, I have always been taking care to choose a goal and a right path before doing anything important. Then I will work hard and perseveringly. So, I have made some achievements and I will do better.17、 So I believe a.omorro.will be achieved through effo

19、rts of every person.例句：So I believe a safe tomorrow of less car accidents will be achieved through efforts of every person.18、 Therefore, we should not only.but.as well.例句：Therefore, we should not only realize that competition and cooperation, like two sides of the coin, have to go hand in hand, but

20、 fix more attention on how to make full use of cooperation as well.19、In short, .are the major problems to be solved to.例句：In short, shortage of water, decrease of fertile fields and environmental pollution are the major problems to be solved to increase grain production.20、Who is to say that.?例句：Wh

21、o is to say that our scientists may not provide a better theory?作文要拿高分必须要练，要注意积累好的素材。提升你的遣词造句的能力。梳理分享一批高分句型，大家注意学以致用：There be结构1) There are other techniques that might help you with you studying.2) There is more entertainment in a good book than is a month of typical TV programming.3) Most curious o

22、f all, there was no quality control whatever.4) There were no breaks in the day to relieve the boring work.5) In the past 50 years there has been a great increase in the amount of research being done on the brain.6) There are so many of thee paths and so many metal particles that it is impossible to

23、 land a flying saucer without is being smashed by one.7) There is much that we can learn from him today.8) There are two sides to every question. If you take one side with decision and act on it with effect, those who take the other side will of course resent your actions.9) There is no sense(道理)in

24、leaving important decisions to inexperienced people.10) There is little sense in treating the child so severely. After all he is too young to know that he was doing wrong.11) There is no surgical patient I cannot treat competently, treat just as well as or better than any other surgeon.12) There wer

25、e still situations in which I couldnt be certain my decision had been the right one.13) Theres no right or wrong in the situation. Theres just luck.14) Theres no way to prepare for the next timeno intelligent response to a gun.15) There is no way to stop the process of aging. In fact, we can only de

26、lay it.16) There are other indications that high school cheating may be on the rise (还有一些迹象表明)17) There is some evidence that dishonesty may ebb and flow(起伏波动)18) Today there is evidence that the time between each of the steps in this cycle has been shortened.19) There can be on doubt that he is the

27、 right person for the job.20) There is no doubt that their support will make a difference in out cause .21) There is no doubt that these measures will contribute to the solution of the problem.22) There is no doubt that Jim had more talent than anybody who ever played football.23) Theres no substitu

28、te(替代物) for practical experience.24) There is urgent need to debate this issue openly25) There are tow ways in which one can own a book.26) There have been some small fluctuation(波动) in the past year, but by and large prices have remained stable.It 结构1) It is advisable to exercise(拥有) patience in de

29、aling with such complicated situations.2) It is advisable to place important telephone numbers nest to the phone in case of an emergency.3) It is biologically reasonable for deer to reduce their cost of living to increase their chances of surviving in winter.4) It is essential that the increase in p

30、roduction should be geared to (适应) the increase in public demand.5) It is necessary that young and old people should communicate more with each other.6) It is thoughtless of some parents to allow their children to watch whatever program is on television.7) It is incredible(不可思议) that he ate the big

31、cake just in tow bites.8) It was obvious to everyone that the marriage would sooner or later end in separation if not diverce.9) It was clear that Dad could do no more than he was doing already.10) It is certain that fresh air and exercises are more valuable than medicine.11) It is certain that with

32、 determination and hard work you will succeed eventually.12) It was quite apparent that both sides were making a great effort to win the prize.13) It was almost impossible for an Indian to gain even a fair education an extremely difficult, as a result, for an Indian to rese high in life.14) It is ea

33、sy to fall into bad habits but very difficult to break away form them.15) Its not easy to size up (估计) the situation right no For we are not well informed on recent developments.16) It is not easy to say exactly what each part of the brain does.17) It is not wise to change you money into U . S. curr

34、ency.18) It was not until about 1600B.C. when the chariot (马拉战车) was invented that the maximum speed was raised to roughly twenty miles per hour.19) It is only recently that science has begun to give us some idea of how the brain really works.20) It was not until the century that man realized that t

35、he whole of the brain was involved in the working of the mind.21) It is conflict and not unquestioning agreement that keeps freedom alive.22) It was in times of crisis that I finally found out what he was really like.23) It took the human race millions of years to attain that record.24) It took a me

36、re twenty-year flick(一瞬) of time to double the limit again.25) It takes (took) sb. some time to do sth.26) If it takes less time to bring a new idea to the marketplace, it also takes less time for it to sweep through the society.27) It will take the council a few weeks to judge the situation before

37、it takes any further action.28) It is well known that many of our problems are caused at least in part by failure to communicate.29) It is fairly well known that wild animals survive form year to year by eating as much as they can during times of plenty.30) It is probably less well known that even w

38、ith their stored fat, wild animals spend less energy to live in winter than in summer.31) It remains unknown whether there are intelligent beings outside the solar system.32) It has been pointed out that in 6000B. C. the fastest transportation available to man over.33) It is now thought that the mor

39、e work we give our brains, the more w* able to do.34) It can be argued that such a response may not mean much (有人认为)35) It is reported that the electronic industry is going on rapidly in recent year.36) It is reported that there has been a decrease in the annual birth rate over the last two decades.

40、37) It is estimated that the total expenses in the trial manufacture of the new products will come to 30,000 yuan.38) Once it was thought that nighttime dreams interfered with our needed rest.39) It has been observed that unemployment brings enormous psychological troubles.40) Even so, it seemed to

41、him that he was part of the whole event.41) It seems to me that the Americans are a highly mobile people. Most of them like to travel whenever they get the chance.42) It seemed to me that the only thing that mattered was to get her husband back to her.43) But it is only because it is my work to do s

42、o.44) It is an encouraging sign that peoples purchasing power(购买力)is on the rise.45) It is common knowledge that chalk absorbs moisture (湿气) from the air.46) It might be a way to avoid the indignity of having to ask for money all the time.47) It used to be a popular belief the we could foretell a pe

43、rsons future on the basis of the date and time of his birth.48) It pays in the long run (从长远的角度看) to introduce new technique.49) It is time for out symbols of technology to change to catch up with the quickening changes in technology itself.50) It has been only twenty-five years since television cam

44、e to one of peoples pastimes.51) It may well come as a surprise to learn that not only psychologists but other behavioral scientists have come to accept the positive contribution of work to the individuals happiness and sense of personal achievement.动名词或分词结构1) Improving your study habits will improv

45、e your grades.2) Teaching gives me pace, and variety, and challenge, and the opportunity to keep on learning.3) Being very short of money and wanting to do something useful, I applied.4) Having little in common is a frequent cause of divorce.5) Owing sets of books is useless unless you read them.6)

46、Drinking, eating, and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young persons health.7) The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience.递进式结构1) Fresh vegetables are nutritious(有营养的); furthermore, they re cheaper than frozen ones.2) We will not only bring jo

47、y into other peoples lives, but also added happiness into our own.3) But teaching offers something beside money and power; it offers love. Not only the love of learning and go books and ideas, but also the love that a teacher feels for his students.4) Not only should you limber up (做准备活动) before exe

48、rcising, but you must also be sure to cool down afterwards.5) They do not seem to like one anther very much. Neither are they too keen on conventional people (正统的人)主语从句结构1) What makes it rather disturbing (令人烦恼) was the arbitrary circumstances both of my arrest and my subsequent fate in court.2) But

49、 what was most shocking at the time was the thins my release from the charge so clearly depended on .3) What I remember then is not her failure, but her courage, the courage to go ahead.过渡句1) This is not necessarily the case, however.2) We want to keep up with the times.3) Good intentions alone are

50、not enough.4) It was indeed the case.5) But modern research has found that this is not so.6) But it is now thought that this in not so.7) What does this mean as far as our flying saucer program is concerned?8) As for as I am concerned, some days are lucky while others seem marked by bad fortune.9) A

51、nd that last ounce is what really counts.10) What is the point of being rich? (富有的意义何在呢?)11) What other power matters? 其他的权力有什么重要的(要紧的)呢?12) Yet there are advantages to underground life.表示重要性或必要性1) Its important to set aside time for relaxation, hobbies , and entertainment as well.2) Improved consum

52、er confidence is extremely important to an economic recovery.3) What is important in both stories is that honesty was seen as an important part of the American character.4) The ability to observe keenly and in detail is necessary for anyone who wishes to become a scientist.5) To find a solution to a

53、 conflict, it is often necessary to make some kind of compromise (妥协)6) A harmonious atmosphere is essential(necessary / critical / indispensable) to successful reform.7) It is essential that the increase in production should be geared to (适应) the increase in public demand.8) The essential point is

54、that military sanctions (军事制裁) cannot be counted on (指望) to produce a sure result.9) The emphasis of the report is on how technology affects human life rather than business.10) We should make a careful study of the problem and try to find out a solution to it.表目的1) The purpose of a test is to show w

55、hat you have leaned about a subject.2) Believe it or not, her only purpose in saying all that is to help you help yourself3) The purpose of the campaign was to catch “ringers”students who take tests for other students.4) The intent is not to catch everyone but rather to catch enough to spread the wo

56、rd.5) Competitive sports are recommended to young adults to prepare them for the competitive world of college and business.6) The ultimate object of scientific inquiry is to discover the laws of nature.11) We note with satisfaction that all these activities have helped to promote mutual understandin

57、g and friendship between our two countries.12) The damage done to manmade structures and to human beings by weather would be gone.13) The population is leveling off (处于平衡状态) in the area as a result of family planning.14) For large numbers of people, the absence of work is harmful to their health.表对比

58、和比较1) Of all American cities, San Francisco is considered by many to be by far the most beautiful.2) Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment.3) We are much less conscious of the extent to which work provides the more crucial(关键)psychological well-being that can make the difference between a ful