热点01书面表达读后续写(新高考)(解析版)

1、热点01书面表达读后续写【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两局部：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广阔师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型1. 题型介绍选材特点1 所需阅读的短文词数在 350以内；2多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比拟强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；2 内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；3应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4上下文的连贯性。【总分值技巧】1 所续写短文的词数应为

2、150左右词数少于130的，从总分中减去 2分；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面：1. 把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力:2. 语言运用的准确性和丰富性：3. 对语篇结构的把握能力:4. 创造性思维能力。【热点话题】假期生活；生活小故事；哲理故事；寓言故事；学生生活。【限时检测】建议用时：30分钟2021年浙江省高考真题话题：假期里发生的故事难度：建议用时：7分1. It was summer, and my

3、 dad wa nted to treat me to a vacati on like n ever before. He decided to take me on atrip to the Wild West.We took a pla ne to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the lateafter noon. Uncle Paul, my dad s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up

4、 to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spe ntthe night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Veryearly in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfas

5、t. The day starts at dawn on my farm, he said. Afterbreakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chicke ns, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out tograze吃草.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Un cle Paul if I

6、 could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went withme. I was n t going to take a horse ride by myself any way. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on ourhorses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Donlatefor supper, Uncle Paul cried, and keep to thetrack so that

7、you don get lotst! OK! my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were outof sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brow n rocks, the deep gree n pine trees, and the lateafter noon sun mixed to create a magic seen e. It looked like a beautiful wove n 编织的bla nke

8、t spread out upon theground just for us.Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.注意：1 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Sudde nly a little rabbit jumped out i n front of my horse.Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were a

9、nd it was getting dark. 【参考范文】All of aSuddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as Iheld on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted,“ Hold on!began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few

10、 minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and thenstopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when wewere looking for the way to the farm house. After what must h

11、ave been several hours, we suddenly heard the soundof sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer wesaw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!【解析】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的开展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物

12、思想情感的变化等。在此根底上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 这一句是故事开展的转折点，可从 rabbit 出现后带来的反响扩展开， 可以写马的反响， 也可以写人的反响， 但要注意与第二段首句相照应。第二段首句是 We had no idea where we were and it was

13、 getting dark. 这一句照应前文 Uncle Paul 的叮嘱 不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。B山东省 2021 年普通高等学校招生模拟卷 )话题：救治流浪狗的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Though it is one of the faded memories of my life t

14、oday, there are times when I remember his face clearly,especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have bee n a stray 流浪dog, un til he came to me.I was seve n years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a ren ted house. It wasrainin

15、g very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark ni ght. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midni ght I heard some stra ngesounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused withwhat I saw outside.There was a small puppy lyi

16、ng on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet andtrembling. At first it was difficult to see the lite one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize itspresenee.It was trying to get un der the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had man aged toget

17、i n as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went n ear the innocent one and held itin my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with aw

18、oolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleepimmediately.The n ext morning, every one in the family came to know about the unu sual guest “ Shalwe keep him with us?I questio ned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first tally

19、refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them tokeep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with every one and became one of the family members.Para. 1 : One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. Para. 2: Almost a year later, one midni ght we heard Spotty bark ing breathlessly. 【参考范文

20、】Days passed on and one eve ning whe n Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very exhausted. Hecame to my room and sat n ear me. It was the n that I saw his hind leg was injured and was bleedi ng. I called out mymother and she quickly tied a ban dage around his leg and gave him food to eat

21、. I was very upset. But the next day,Spotty was up to his usual pranks though he limped a bit. After this incident my relation with Spotty became moreinten se. I really admired him a lot for his courage.Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. We came out and saw that

22、he wasbarking continuously heading somewhere. After some time Spotty became quiet. I patted him on his back and camein side. The n ext day morning, my heart skipped a beat whe n I did nsee Spotty. I searched for him in each andevery corner but he was no where. And this time he had gone and would n e

23、ver come back. I cried and waited forhim. We waited for one long week. But there were no sig ns of him. The n one day my Dad got tran sferred toMumbai. We shifted back to Mumbai. What would have happe ned to Spotty? Would he have died? These were theonly questi ons in my mind, but they all rema ined

24、 unan swered forever.C2021届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2话题：Abbie和Mel之间发生的关于乐队的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“ What do you think about my audition 试奏yesterday ？ My trill 颤音should have been better， don t youthink ？ Abbie asked Mel a nd closed the lid of her violi n case before school.It s no big deAb

25、bie， Mel said as theywalked out the door.Mel didn t havevtioiriEytabout her littlesister s mood .It turned out to be a busy day.She had a test in scie nce class.She hit two home runs in softball.Afterschool, she and her friends talked about their summer plans.She forgot about the audition results un

26、til Abbie dragged her to the music room .Mel thought she d probably bein the first violi ns.I can t believeMel and Abbie found the list of n ames on the board.Abbie.C on certmaster.Abbie screamedit ! dan Wait to tell Mum and Dad ! Abbie rushed toward home.Mel kept reading.Mel.Secondviolins.What ? Th

27、ere had to be some mistake.She d figure out tomorrow.When Mel got home, Abbie was playing her audition piece thereMusic poured from Abbie s bow like water from ateapot pure and perfect.And the trill sounded like a bird singing.Abbie was good really good but that wasn th epoint. MrBenson must have ma

28、de a mistake Mel thought.The next morning , Mel slipped into the music room. Gathering her courage, Mel said,“ MrBenson, Iwant to talk to you about the orchestra管弦乐队seats. r Yes -you must be proud of your sister, Mr Benson smiled.“ Abbii a rare stude nt.lf she continues topractice hard and grow as a

29、 musician , she could become a professional.Then we ll look back on our little orchestraand think about how lucky we are.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :Mel froze as there was nt any mix-up.Paragraph 2 :After school, Mel found Ab

30、bie on a bench outside, playing the violin .【背诵范文】Mel froze as there wasn t any mix-uShe realized she was the one who d made HenistlOkG.ster hadearned the first chair through efforts and she hadn t even congratulatedMer.walked down the hall. Most days,she spent her time thinking about softball, her

31、classes and her friends. Every day was so full that she didn t alwayspractice her violi n while Abbie played every day. Determ ined to make a cha nge, Mel decided to have a talk withAbbie.After school, Mel found Abbie on a bench outside, playing the violin. Mel made up her mind to apologize toAbbie

32、after a brief inner struggle. She cleared her throat and started, “ I m so proud that you re condertmiaster.sorry I vbeen so mean. I guess I was jealous. Abbie was surprised.yBurt rpopular, Mel. You get bettergrades. You re better at sports.You can do everything. Mel shook her head. make IactBin lik

33、e t you can. “ Youcan if you keep practicing. Abbie smiled and asked if Mel would like to play with her. Mel agreeddelightedly.D2021届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14话题：农民 Rip Van Winkle的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Once upon a time, there was a farmer called Rip Van Winkle. He lived in a village in the

34、mountains with hiswife and two young children, a daughter and a son. Rip was a very happy and kind man and he got on well with allthe children in the village. They loved him because he played games with them and often told them stories while hewas sitti ng outside the“ Ki ng George inn the villageHe

35、 spe nd a lot of time in the inn because he was a very lazy man. In stead of work ing on his farm, he would gofishing or hunting, or sit in the village inn talking to his friends. His family was poor and his wife used to get angrywith him. “ What kind of farmer are you? She would say. “ Why don t yo

36、u get down to some work, you lazAfter arguments with his wife, Rip always went off hunting with his dog, Wolf. One day, after anotherargument, Rip went further tha n usual in the woods and came to a beautiful valley. Sudde nly, he heard a stra ngevoice calling his name. An old man, dressed in old-fa

37、shioned clothes, was trying to carry a barrel 木桶and askedRip to help him. Rip agreed. They took the barrel to a cave, where there were more people, all dressed in the samestra nge clothes. After that, the old man gave Rip a drink from the barrel. Rip immediately fell into a deep sleep.注意：所续写的短文词数应为1

38、50左右；1. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2. 续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1:Para2：When he got to his house, he saw that it was old and aba ndoned.【背诵范文】Compared with paper towels, hand dryers have more adva ntages, which will ben efit school in four ways. First,they are clea n and healthy b

39、ecause bacteria can ch kids. Addtttoiually, it can help school save mon ey. Thirdly,our bathroom can be kept clea n and n eat. Besides, it can dry our hands more effectively if we take Ion ger time.Therefore, school is advisable to fix the equipme nt at on ce.66E2021届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题话题：寓言故事难度：建议用时：7

40、分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer waseating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily here and there. The deerfollowed her fawns 幼鹿in to a cave. The deer was frighte ne

41、d because it was a tiger cave. There were bones ofdead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave whe n she heard a loud roar. She saw the tiger at adista nee coming towards the cave. It was dan ger

42、ous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a pla n. The deerraised her voice and shouted, My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture 捕捉 a tiger for you to eat.You can have a good dinn er.The tiger heard these words and became frighte ned. He thought, Whose is that stra nge voice from the

43、 cave?A dan gerous ani mal is stay ing in side to capture me. I shall run away to escape death. The tiger bega n to run awayfrom there as fast as possible.A jackal 胡狼saw the running tiger. Why are you running in great fear? the jackal asked. The tiger said,My friend, a powerful a nd fierce ani mal i

44、s in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother ispromis ing to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away.The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward懦夫.It said, Don tbe afraid. No animal isfiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.But the tiger said, I do not want to take a cha nee.