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1、TOEFl Independent WritingStructureSteps I. brainstorming II. beginning III. body paragraphs IV. conclusionI. Brainstorming 2013.1.12：Do you agree or disagree the following statement: An effective leader should try to make others feel that they are part of the decision making process. “hers法” Health,

2、 happiness Environment, employment, efficiency Responsibilities, rights Socialization, skillLeaders: 1 less burden 2. leaders will make less big mistakes 3. more ideas to choose. 4. popularity increasesWorkers: happier, Promotion, Work harder More responsibility , communication find their potential.

3、 Team: enhance the team spirit and cohesionII. beginning 1. come straight to the point 2. background + stance 3. Stance + brief introduction of your supporting points 4. ask a question and answer it by yourself. 5. quotation + stance1. come straight to the point Outstanding leaders ought to engage t

4、heir subordinates in the process of decision making to achieve success.2. background + stance The competition of modern society is becoming increasingly intense. The essence of the competition is the confrontation of people, especially the leaders. However, a leader cant make a group successful with

5、out obtaining helps from others.3. Stance + brief introduction of your supporting points Good leaders should definitely get their subordinates involved in the course of making decisions. Only in this way can they enhance the team spirit, and benefit both the leaders and employees.4. ask a question a

6、nd answer it by yourself What is the most important quality should a good leader possesses? I believe open-mindedness outweighs industry, knowledge, sense of responsibility, etc., and it is the crucial element that leads a group to success.5. quotation + stance Peter FDrucker, farther of modern mana

7、gement, once said “An effective manager is good at employing others merits”. In order to accomplish this, leaders should absorb ideas from their subordinates.III. body paragraphs topic sentence general statement example or argumentation closing sentenceexamples 1. true people, true events 2. your ow

8、n experiences 3. assumptionIV. Conclusion 1. induction 2. advising 3. warning 4. concession1. induction In conclusion, leaders , employees and the whole team will benefit if leaders let others join in the process of decision making. Leaders who can do so will definitely lead their groups from succes

9、s to success.2. advising For the above-mentioned reasons, I suggest that every leader should employ the democratic way when making decisions and bring benefits to the whole team.3. warning I firmly believe leaders should engage their subordinates in the process of decision-making. Otherwise, they mi

10、ght become dictators and lead their groups to failure or even disaster.4. concession I agree that making decisions by one person is time-saving and can avoid possible arguments. However, listening to others in the process of determining something is a more proper way for the above-mentioned reasons.Disagree subordinates: 1. cant offe