8AUnit1taskPPT教学课件

1、A true friend is always there for you.A person who will help,with all your problems.The one whom you can trust,With all your secrets.And the one who will cheer you upwhen you are lonely.That is a friend.I want to meet.I do not know,if hes a boy or a girl.but I always believe that I will find my one

2、true friend.第1页/共15页2021-10-21Teenagers magazine is inviting teenagers to write about their best friends for the writing competition.第2页/共15页2021-10-21Who is Daniels best friend?When did Daniel first meet her? What does she look like? What would she like to be when she grows up? Whats she like? Kate

3、 five years agobe a teacher friendly, helpful, patient tall and slim Kate is Daniels best friend. (Para. 1)Kates looks. (Para. 2)Kates personality. (Para. 3)Kates future plans (Para. 4)Introduction Main bodyConclusionStructure of the article第3页/共15页2021-10-21What would you like to write about your f

4、riend?Future plans_Looks_Personality _. MyfriendHobbies_Other information第4页/共15页2021-10-21Kate is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.Paragraph 1Which sentence can we use?第5页/共15页2021-10-21Kate is tall and slim. She has long hair. She has a round face and a small no

5、se. I like her bright smiling eyes. They make her look really pretty and kind.Paragraph 2Details help the reader “see” the person.What does she look like?Which sentence tells the main idea?Find the details (细节) about her looks.第6页/共15页Kate is a friendly girl. She always has a smile on her face and l

6、ooks happy. She likes to help people. She helps me with my homework and she is very patient. When I feel bored or unhappy, I often go to her. She will talk to me and tell me interesting things.Paragraph 3What is she like?friendlypatient.helpShe always has a smileon her face and looks happy.She helps

7、 me with my homeworkunhappy, I often go to her. She will talk to me and tell me interesting things.When I feel bored ora topic sentence details+(help the reader understand her personality) Which sentence tells the main idea?Find the details (细节) about her personality.第7页/共15页2021-10-21Sometimes he t

8、ells funny jokes and makes me laugh.I often tell her about my school, my friends and my family. When something worries me, I can always go to her. She is willing to share things with people and ready to help people in need any time.generoushumoroustrueMatch the personality with the supporting detail

9、s.sweetShe smiles often and never says a bad word about anyone.第8页/共15页2021-10-21Kate wants to work with children. She would like to be a teacher when she grows up. I think she will make an excellent teacher.Paragraph 4Which sentence can we use?第9页/共15页2021-10-21第10页/共15页A good article consists of:

10、Item DetailsContent(内容)All points are included in your writing.Structure(结构) Introduction, Main body, ConclusionLanguage Use(语言)1.Linking words are used to develop your thoughts.2.Some impressive words and sentences are used.Mechanical skills(基础技能) 1.No spelling, punctuation(标点符号) mistakes are made.2.No tense mistakes are made.第11页/共15页批改标识： 好词好句 （画波浪线） 结构混乱 WS (Wrong Structure) 拼写错误 S (Spelling mistakes) 用词不当 W (Word) 时态错误 T (Tense) 中式英语 CH (Chinglish) 书写潦草 PW (Poor Writing)第12页/共15页2021-10-21(1) Revise your writing.(1) Revise your