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1、针对相当部分学生有写作困难的情况,我们高三备课组全体老师一致认为书面表达提分的空间极大。根据我们与作文阅卷教师的交谈和研读他们的著作,海南省目前英语作文评分实为宽松。以下是08年一位阅卷教师著作高考英语写作特别指导中的一段:“笔者参加了2008年的高考阅卷,感觉回来后有好多话要对同学们讲。看到一篇篇数量众多才得几分的高考英语作文,本人深感责任重大。其实,在高考作文这一项里,你只要稍做努力就不至于只得几分,而是很容易就可以得个及格分。请看高考英语作文评分第三档之操作细节(11-15) :有三个以上与要点有关的正确句子,可得该档的高分,有两个与要点有关的句子,可得该档的低分。由此可见,你只要稍做有
2、心人,平时扎实地写好基本的英语句子,以不变应万变,以上目标的达成还不是小菜一碟吗?当然,还要提醒同学们的是:你必须多记一些与要点信息有关的单词,这些单词都代表了文中所给出的信息,即使是堆砌在一起,其意思一点不通的句子,也是重要的得分点。当然了,说到这里,好一点的同学所关心的是如何得高分?那么我们就一起来研读高分段的第四档的评分细节:有三个以上与细节有关的句子,而且要有一个以上的复合句,以及相关的信息量,可得18-20分。那么怎样才能得20分以上的英语写作分呢?这是不少基础好的同学常问的一个问题,要回答这个问题,大家首先要知道:行文要流畅-要有一系列的合理的关联词;能使用高级英语表达法-要有相当
3、数量的复合句和非谓语动词句型;在这里,要特别强调是一点还是句子的正确性,因为在高考的评分细则里明确规定:4-6个小错的可以给21-22分,而只有两个错的作文,才可以给23-24分。综上所述:如何写好正确的英语句子是高考英语作文的重中之重!”为了能在尖锋时刻助同学们一臂之力,特别是针对我校学生的实际情况,我们将一些较为实用的作文模板精心修改之后提供给大家参考使用。我们suggest strongly除背诵以下模板外,还应背诵十几篇有代表性的范文。语文作文背范文,肯定会遭否定,但英语作文不同,英语作文实际上比较浅显,要想在作文上多得分,同学们可以去背点带范文性质的东西,这包括两个层面的内容,一是把
4、一些有用的、实用的,经常要用的表达短语、单词、句型摘录下来,进行背诵。二是背一些套话。这份材料主要提供一些实用的套话,大家一定要背烂用熟,特别是在英语考试的头天晚上,再背背。写作必备知识Part 1 人称代词与物主代词Part 2 汉语“的”的翻译技巧Part 3 谓语动词的否定Part 4 非谓语动词的否定Part 5 基本句型(略)Part 6 基本句型扩展技巧Part 7 英语句子间经典过渡词组Part 8 经典作文模板英语段落扩展绝招一、一般来说,段落主要由三部分组成,即主题句、扩展句和结论句。主题句(topic sentence)是表达段落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意,要求全段其他
5、文字都围绕它展开。扩展句主要围绕着主题句进行叙述,说明或论述等。扩展句必须明确、的具体。总结句指用一句话将某一主旨进行归纳总结或概括,有时还起承上启下的作用。它们的关系如图所示:引导句/开篇句: nowadays当今at present, in recent years, as we all know, as is well-known, It is well known that, It is often said that . As the proverb says .主题句 : Some people say, While others hold the view that, 扩展句1
6、to start with , first of all , It is true that . No one can deny that ., The reason why . is that ., There is no doubt that ., such as扩展句2 besides, in addition(加之,除之外), moreover (此外,而且), whats more(更重要的是),whats worse(更糟糕的是),for example, for instance, in fac t, at the same time,扩展句3 what is more, fur
7、thermore, moreover, what is worse, at last结论句: in a word(简言之), in short(总之), to sum up, in conclusion, as far as I am concerned, in my view二、要熟练应用段落扩展中的常用过渡词:高考英语书面表达的评分原则中有五个档次,这五个档次对过渡性词语的使用都有明确的规定。过渡性词语的恰当使用不仅关系到书面表达的质量,而且直接影响着考生书面表达的成绩。常见的有: (1)表并列:also, as well, as well as,not only . but also,
8、both . and, neither . nor(2)表转折对比:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary(相反),(3)表原因:because, because of, since, as, now that, thanks to(多亏), due to(由于)(4)表结果:so, thus, therefore(因此), as a result(结果), so that, so . that, such . that(5)表条件:if, unless, as/ so long as(只要)(6)表时间的过渡词:when, while
9、, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards(事后),recently, since, from then on from now on, in the meantime, then, suddenly, early this morning / year, after a while, in a few days, now, finally, at last, all of a sudden, at present, immediately(7)表顺序: first of all, then, next, after that,
10、finally(8)表举例说:for instance, for example(举一个例子), such as(列举几个例子), To take . for an example (instance).(9)表目的:for this purpose(为此), so that, in order to, so as to强烈推荐1(注:任何一篇作文都可以使用,用多少个要依内容来定)To begin with,_ .In addition(besides) (加之,除之外) ,_ .Whats more(更重要的是), _ . At last_强烈推荐2 on the one hand, on
11、the other hand(适用于两点的情况);for one thing, for another (适用于两点的情况)for one reason, for another reason(适用于两点的情况)最实用的作文模板模板1:对比选择型(1、有一些人认为、2另一些人认为、3我的看法、)段落一: 开篇句: The topic of _(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. Different people have different opinions about it. 段落二:主题句:Some people say _(观点A
12、). 扩展句:1、They hold this opinion because_(支持A的理由一). 2 / 82、In addition, _.(支持A的理由二)3、What is more, _. (支持A的理由三).主题句:While others think that _.(观点B)扩展句:1、on the one hand, _.(理由一) 2、on the other hand, _.(理由二)段落三:个人观点型结尾:主题句:From my point of view (或As far as I am concerned或personally speaking或in my view
13、) , I think _.(我的观点)扩展句:1、The reason is that _. (原因)通用型结尾: 主题句:To sum up(或All in all或In a word或in short), _(概括). 扩展句:1、For one thing, _.(原因一)2、For another, _.(原因二)模板2:说明利弊型 (优点:advantages;缺点: disadvantages; shortcomings)段落一:开篇句:Nowadays The topic of _(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently, 扩
14、展句:1、because it has an important role in our daily life. 段落二:主题句:Its advantages can be seen as follows. 扩展句:1、First _ (优点一). 2、In addition, _(优点二). 主题句:But everything has its advantages as well as disadvantages. 扩展句:1、One of the important disadvantages is that_ (缺点一)扩展句:2、What is more, _ (缺点二) 段落三:个
15、人观点型结尾:主题句:From my point of view (或As far as I am concerned或personally speaking或in my view) , I think _.(我的观点)扩展句:1、The reason is that _. (原因)通用型结尾: 主题句:To sum up(或All in all或In a word或in short), _(概括). 扩展句:1、For one reason, _.(原因一)2、For another reason, _.(原因二)模版3:书信类书信开头常用语(一般首句会给出):开门见山:Imwritingt
16、otell you_. Imwritingtoaskifyoucancomenextweek.表示高兴:I was so glad / pleased / happy to receive your letter.表示感谢:Thank you for your wonderful letter.表示关心:How are you these days?/How are you getting on these days?How are you getting on with your work / studies?信件结尾常用语(一般不给出,要记!):I am looking forward t
17、o hearing from you soon.I am lookingforwardtoyournextvisittoChina.I am lookingforwardtothepleasureofmeetingyou.Please give my regards to your family.Givemybestregards(wishes)toyourmother.Take good care of you and keep in touch.Bestwishes for you!.(1)写一般信Dear _1_首句参考: I was delighted to learn that_2_
18、(很高兴获知。)(一般情况下,高考书信类作文都会提供称谓和首句;正文内容可以参考以上模版)结束语参考:I am looking forward to seeing your reply. Best wishes for you! 结尾 Yours sincerely, 署名(注:名字必须按试卷要求写)(2)写感谢信Dear _1_Thank you veryu much for_2_(具体原因)Without your help_3_(从反面说明)_4_(总结)I appreciate it more than I can say. Bestwishes for you! Your faith
19、fully _5_ (3) 写求职信Dear _1_I have learned recently from the newspaper that some reporters are needed in your company. (2.信息来源)I am very interested in it, so I am writting to apply for the position._3_(具体介绍自己的情况). I will be very appreciative if you can give me an opportunity foe an interview.I look fo
20、rward to your reply. Your faithfully _4_模版4:写通知通知语言特点:1多用将来时态(通知主要表达即将发生的事情)。如:(1)_will be held / given +地点+时间 某活动将于某时某地举行(2)_is going to be held +地点+时间 某活动将于某时某地举行(3)There will be a _ +地点+时间 某活动将于某时某地举行(4)The English evening will begin in the hall on March 6, 2009 (5)The airport will have to be clo
21、se. The flight to Beijing will be delayed for five hours. (6)There will be a lecture on pollution given by Professor Wang from Beijing University.(7)A speech contest will be held at the English Comer this summer vacation. (8) A professor from Beijing University will give us a lecture on pollution. I
22、n the school hall at 8:00 tomorrow morning.2多用祈使句(用与对活动参加者提要求或注意事项)。如:(1) Do be present on time . (2) Please bring along your pens and notebooks.(3) Please sign your name at the Service Desk before 9:00 a.m.(4) Dont miss the chance. Please get there on time.3、多用语态.如:(1)_ be expected to be present on
23、 time(2) All the students are requested to attend the celebration of the Teachers Day to be held in the Grand Hall in the Main Building at 6:30 this evening,(3) _be supposed to be present on time(4) _will be held / given +地点+时间 口头通知Dear friends,May I have your attention,please? I have an announcemen
24、t to make. In order to (为了)_, _(活动名称)is going to be held+地点+时间Those who want to _are supposed to_(结尾句)Everyone is welcome to attend it. Do be present on time .Thats all,Thank you!书面通知: (1)写活动和会议通知NoticeIn order to(活动目的) _, There will be a(an) _(活动名称)to be held in_(+地点+时间). The acivity (meeting) is _
25、(活动或会议的内容)(结尾句)Everyone is demanded to be present on time.(或everyone who is interested in it is welcomed. The school officeNov.9,2009(2)写征稿通知In order to(活动目的) _2_, the magazine has decided _3_(征稿内容)Teachesr and students are welcomed to send in their contributious before_4_(截止日期) The StudentsUnionSep
26、t.8,2008模版5:数字型图表作文概述图表的首句参考:1、Asisshownbythefigure(数字) / percentage(百分比)in the picture,2、We can see from the graph that about 35% of the students believe that . 3、As can be seem in the picture / table,. 如图片/表格所示4、From the table(图表) / figure(数字),we can see clearly that从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到描述数据上升的句型: 1、th
27、ere has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the past five years. 2、_increased(grew、rose)rapidly from 1999 to 2003 3、the number sharply went up to 数字急剧上升至描述数据下降的句型: 1、there has been a great decrease in _ in the past five years. 最近5年来_已经大大下降 2、_began to decrease;或_be gradually fa
28、lling (曲线变化)图表写作套句精选: 1.the table shows the changes in the number offromto 该表格描述了在年之年间数量的变化。 2、the percentage ofis sightly larger/smaller than that of 的比例比的比例略高(低)。 3、decreased year by year whileincreased steadily. 逐年减少,而逐步上升。第一段:说明图表开篇句:Asisshownbythe picture(图片)/ figure(数字)/ percentage(百分比)inthepi
29、cture, _increased (go up / drop(降) / decrease(降) rapidly from_ in_to_in_.扩展句:1、Fromthesharp drop(降) /rise(升) in thechart, itgoes without sayingthat_. 第二段:解释图表变化原因主题句:What is the reason for this? Several factors contribute to it.扩展句:1、First of all , _. (原因1)2、In addition, _.(原因2)3、What is more, _ (原因
30、3)第三段:提出解决办法(或个人看法)结尾句:As far as I am concerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat_.扩展句:1、For one thing, _. 2,、For another, _.模版6:漫画类 先描述图画 再发表自己看法(多做练习,背熟用熟.)漫画类作文常用表达方式有:1). 开头:1、Look at this picture. 2、The picture shows that 3、From this picture, we can see2)衔接句:1. As we all know, 2. As is well-known, 3. It
31、is well known that4. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.第一段: 描写漫画万能首句1:As can be seen, the picture(s) is very vivid and interesting. Let us take a closer look at it. 万能首句2:As can be seen, the picture(s) is very surprising. Let us take a closer look at it.As is described in the pictu
32、re(s), + 描写漫画. we can see clearly that this picture tell us_. 褒义漫画用 / (或we can see clearly that this picture criticize the phenomenon that_ 贬义漫画用.)第二段:说明原因(需说原因时用上,否则不用)There is no doubt that the message conveyed in the picture is meaningful 主题句:Some factors can help to explain the phenomenon. 扩展句:1
33、、First of all, _ 扩展句:2、What is more, _ 段落三: 提出解决办法或个人看法 褒义漫画结尾:主题句:From my point of view (或As far as I am concerned或personally speaking或in my view) , I think _.(我的观点)扩展句:1、The reason is that _. (原因)扩展句:2、Only in this way, I think, will our society be more beautiful.贬义漫画结尾主题句:From my point of view (或
34、As far as I am concerned或personally speaking或in my view) , I think _.(我的观点)Therefore, some measures should be taken to solve the problem.扩展句:1、To begin with, the government should make laws to .扩展句:2、Besides, people should be educated to . 扩展句:3、Only in this way, I think, will our society be more be
35、autiful.模版7 介绍某地:对付此类作文的关键是背熟相关的表达方式:如地理位置、人口、文化、风俗习惯、历史、工农业生产、旅游景点、地方特色等2.考虑可能涉及的词汇。如:country国家, population人口, culture文化, custom风俗, agriculture农业, industry工业, a place of interest名胜, mountain山, pollution污染等。3.熟练运用常见句型。如:1). As we all know/ Its well known to all that.2). It lies in / on / to或It is lo
36、cated in3). It covers square kilometers. 4). It has a history / population of 5). It is famous for 6). China is a large country with a long history and much population.7). Zhengzhou, the capital of Henan Province, lies in the middle of China.8). It has an area of 160,000 square kilometers with a pop
37、ulation of over 90 million.9). It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold.10). The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.模版8地理方位介绍给人指路的表达方式: 主干道main road 信号灯traffic lights 在拐角处 on/ at the corner of 在。旁边next to / beside 在前面in front of 在街对面on the other (opposite) side of
38、 the street顺(沿) 大街walk (go) down the street 在尽头at the end of径直走go straight on 向左拐向turn left into走左边第三个道口take the 3rd turning on the left 通过广场go across the square 通往lead to描写方位的表达方式:1)坐落于lie in/ be located in/ be situated in 2). Our school is located at the foot of a green hill.3). In front of the school is a beautiful garden with a library on its left and a laboratory on its right.4). Behind the garden is the classroo
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