2021版高考英语一轮写作高分进阶一取悦阅卷老师的6个高分亮点1.4精准审题谋篇笔下运筹帷幄学案新人教版

1、4. 精准审题谋篇, 笔下运筹帷幄(2018北京高考改编)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华, 你的英国朋友jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣, 计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件, 内容包括:1. 表示欢迎;2. 推荐他上哪所大学;3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。审题立意确定中心体裁建议信时态一般现在时和将来时人称i and you结构三段或四段要点1. 欢迎到中国学习2. 推荐并介绍北京大学3. 上学之前的准备工作结构清晰层次分明巧用功能句如何开头、如何结尾功能句开篇点题1. im so glad that

2、 you will come to study in china. 2. you have asked me for my advice on the recommended school and its my great honor to share my ideas. 功能句希望与祝愿1. i hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 2. these are my suggestions and i hope they could mean something for your study in china. 行云流水斐然成

3、章dear jim, im so glad to hear your future education plan in beijing in your last letter. first i would like to express my warmest welcome to you and i am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in beijing. learning your keen interest in chinese culture, i suggest you

4、 apply for peking university, one of the best universities in china. its chinese literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in chinese profound history and rich culture. as for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like the story of the stone while some online co

5、urses of spoken chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the chinese language environment. i sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in beijing when that day comes. if you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. yours, li hua1世纪金榜导学号校学生会为了帮助

6、大家学好电脑, 特邀广州大学计算机系王平教授在9月15日星期六下午两点来校做讲座, 请根据下面所给的情景说明, 写一份书面的通知, 通知日期是9月11号。1. 事宜:关于计算机的用途以及如何利用internet网络进行学习的讲座;2. 讲座人:广州大学计算机系王平教授;3. 地点:图书馆三楼;4. 参加对象:电脑爱好者;5. 要求:参加者准备一些自己在学习过程中遇到的问题。注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】noticeto help students learn more about computers, we have invited prof

7、essor wang ping from the computer department of guangzhou university to give us a lecture on saturday, the fifteenth of september. professor wang will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the internet. the lecture begins at 2:00pm on the third floor of the library building. any co

8、mputer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. please bring your questions in computer learning, which will be answered by professor wang after the lecture. dont forget to be on time. the students unionsept. 11th2一家英语报社向中学生征文, 主题是“十年后的我”, 请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1. 家庭;2. 工作;3. 业余生活。注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细

9、节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。i often imagine what my life will be like in the future _【参考范文】i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i think my life will be very different in ten years. i will be twenty-eight years old by then. i will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. i will do a good job in whatever i do. in my free time, i will continue to take regular exercise, su