2022版高考英语一轮复习写作层级训练层级4第1讲书信写作课件外研版

1、写作层级训练层级四审题谋篇学会运用各种文体审题谋篇是写好文章的关键。审题要做到“三定一列”，即：定体裁、定时态、定人称和列要点。谋篇布局的好坏一般有三个标准，即思想内容、层次安排和文字运用。一般认为：好的思想内容是指令人感到真实可信、生动有趣、有深度的内容；好的层次安排指的是写作内容统一，组织合乎逻辑，语意前后连贯，句与句相互衔接；好的文字运用则指所用语言正确、文字优美。谋篇布局一般有以下几个步骤：1动笔之前，用较短的时间确定主题，理清思路，梳理要点。2筛选段落可能用到的重要素材，区分主次，详略得当。3合理安排文章的结构。一篇文章通常可分为三部分，即开头、正文和结尾。文章的开头和结尾都可以不同

2、程度地表述主题，即称之为主题的文体表达，也是获得高分的重要保障。因此，写好文章的开头和结尾非常重要，也是谋篇布局应重点关注的。 4正文是文章的核心段落，在写作时应遵循一定的顺序进行表达，才能让读者快速领会文章的表达内容，而不应是几个要点的简单堆砌。合理地组织段落会使文章大放异彩。第一讲书信写作1普通书信/电子邮件题型特点英文e-mail和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同，其开头和结尾常常都会给出，正文可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。篇章结构(2020天津高考书面表达)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给chris回一封

3、电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。经典考题注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremonydear chris，im so glad to hear from you. _ _yours，li jin【审题谋篇】(1)体裁：书信体邮件；(2)时态：一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时；(3)人称：第一人称；(4)要点：成人礼活动内容；对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。参考

4、范文dear chris，i am so glad to hear from you. the coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on june 8th this month. during the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. after that, we all watched the vid

5、eo of alumnus fighting against the epidemic. through the activity, what i felt is that i am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. when faced with the difficulties and failures, i must overcome them. in the future, i will be a good doctor to heal the wounded an

6、d rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work. best wishes!yours，li jin1开头部分常用语(1) i am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. 我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。(2)im very glad/pleased to tell you that 我很高兴告诉你(3) how are you getting along with ?你近来进展怎样？万能句型2话题引入常用语(1)im very glad to tell y

7、ou something about 我很高兴告诉你一些关于的事情。(2)as far as i know/am concerned/can see 据我所知3结尾部分常用语(1)please write to me soon and tell me about your 请尽快写信给我，告诉我关于你的(2)im looking forward to your reply. 我盼望着你的回复。(3)if so，please e-mail me in response 如果这样，请给我回复邮件(2019全国卷)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括

8、：1比赛信息；2赛前准备；3表达期待。即时训练注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文dear chris, im li hua, the captain of our school volleyball team. i am writing to inform you that our team is going to play in the national league. every participating team is great and ready for the game. it can be predicted that this is a clo

9、se match. our team is now busy preparing for the game, from living to daily training. we are confident that we can win this competition. but we sincerely hope you will give us your guidance and encouragement. im sure that you will certainly wish us to win. thank you for your expectation and i am loo

10、king forward to hearing from you. yours sincerely, li hua 2邀请信邀请信是人们日常生活、社会活动和外事活动中常用的应用文体，它分为正式和非正式两种。正式邀请信的格式(包括信头、信内地址、客套语等)要齐全，正文内容应用书面语。非正式邀请信通常只有日期，没有信内地址，语句也很随意，多为口头表达。篇章结构(2020全国卷书面表达)假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教miss evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1剧情简介；2指导内容；3商定时间地点。经典考题注意：1词数100左右；2结束语已为你写好。_ you

11、rs truly，li hua审题谋篇(1)体裁：应用文；(2)时态：一般现在时为主；(3)人称：第一、二人称；(4)要点：剧情简介；指导内容；商定时间地点。参考范文dear miss evans，i am writing to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted from the textbook. wed like to adapt the classic novel the steamboat for a short english play. the play is set on a big storm after midnight.

12、 a steamboat is going to sink and a scared boy is saved on the raft. however, the adaption is quite a challenge. having written the english script, we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. so would you please spare some time to review the draft script? if it is convenient, may i visit

13、you at your office next tuesday to give you more details?look forward to your early reply. yours truly，li hua1开头部分常用语(1)i am writing to invite you to /im writing to tell you that there will be a 我写信邀请你/我写信告诉你有一个(2)i think it would be a great idea if you could participate in 我想你要是能来参加那就太好了。万能句型(3)i w

14、onder if you can come 我想知道你是否能来(4) how would you like to join us in ?你认为加入我们的怎么样？2表达活动内容常用语here are some details about this activity. /the following are some details about this activity. /some details about this activity are as follows. 本次活动的一些细节内容如下。3结尾部分常用语(1)we would be looking forward to your co

15、ming with great pleasure. 我们会高兴地盼望着你的到来。(2)if you are interested in it, please let me know and ill send you more information. 如果你感兴趣，请告诉我，我给你发送更多的信息。(3) my phone number is /looking forward to 我的电话是/盼望(4)i would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon. 我想在那里见到你，请尽快告诉我你的决定。(20

16、19全国卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友allen参加，内容包括：1时间；2活动安排；3欢迎他表演节目。即时训练注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考范文dear allen，im li hua, your chinese friend. im glad to tell you that a chinese classical music concert will be held in the music hall of our school on november 8th. according to the concert poster

17、，many music masterpieces will be played by a famous band. knowing that you are fond of classical music，id like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance. im sure it is a good chance to perform your favorite music. if it is convenient for you, ill meet you at the entrance of t

18、he music hall at 7 00 that evening. looking forward to your reply. yours，li hua3申请信题型特点申请信是一种应用文，申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等，所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。篇章结构(2018浙江高考书面表达)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘。内容包括：1口语能力；2相关经验；3应聘目的。经典考题注意：1

19、词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇(1)体裁：申请信；(2)时态：一般现在时；(3)人称：第一人称；(4)要点：我口语能力好；我曾接待过外宾，有相关经验；我想通过为外宾服务，提高自己的口语水平，同时为促进中外文化交流做贡献。secondly, i helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year. this experience is sure to enable me to do better this year. i also want to improve my spoken engli

20、sh and help them have a better understanding of chinese culture. i would be grateful if you could give me the chance. yours，li hua1开头部分常用语(1)im writing to apply for the position of 我写信申请的职位。(2)i learned from sb. /the newspaper that your company wanted to hire 我从某人/报纸上得知你们公司想雇用(3)i am interested in a

21、nd wish to enter this significant program. 我对感兴趣，希望加入这个重要项目中。万能句型2表达个人优点常用语(1) i won the first prize in competition. 我获得了比赛的一等奖。(2) as an outgoing i get along well with my classmates. 作为一名外向的我和同学们相处得很好。(3)for one thing，i can help for another thing，i can improve my english, make more friends, and enr

22、ich my school life. 一方面，我能帮助另一方面，我能提高我的英语水平。结交更多的朋友，丰富我的学校生活。3结尾部分常用语(1)if you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at 如果你们认为我适合这份工作，请致电(2)i will be grateful/id appreciate it if you could 如果你能我将感激不尽。(3) thank you for considering my application, and i am looking forward to meeting you.

23、 谢谢你考虑我的申请，期待与你见面。(2019全国卷)假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1写信目的；2个人优势；3能做的事情。即时训练注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头与结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear sir/madam，_yours，li huai am good at english and familiar with chinese paintings. i would like to volunteer to help visitors，introduce chinese painti

24、ngs，spread chinese culture，and strengthen world cultural exchanges. my aim is to let china go to the world and let the world understand china. i would appreciate it if you could agree to my request. yours，li hua4道歉信题型特点道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并在发觉的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。篇章结构(全国卷改编)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友bob约好一

25、起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1表示歉意：2说明原因；3另约时间。经典考题注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇(1)体裁：道歉信；(2)时态：一般现在时为主；(3)人称：第一人称为主；(4)要点：对不能去书店表示歉意；有一个重要会议要参加；另约时间：周六上午8 30学校大门口。shall we go on saturday morning? we can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. if its convenient for you, l

26、ets meet at 8 30 outside the school gate. if not, let me know what time suits you best. i should be available any time after school next week. yours，li hua1开头部分常用语(1) i am writing this letter to apologize to you for 我写这封信是因向你道歉。(2)i would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able

27、to/my failing 因为没能我向你表达最真诚的歉意/悔意。万能句型(3) i must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you. 为此事可能给你带来的任何不便，我深表歉意。(4)i am very sorry for my not being able to due to the fact that 我非常抱歉不能因为这个事实(5)i regret to inform you that i can not/am unable to 我遗憾地告知你我不能2结尾部分常用语(1)with apologies once ag

28、ain. /with many apologies. 再次表示抱歉。/十分抱歉。(2) please accept my sincere apology for once more. 请再次为接受我真诚的道歉。(3) i sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies. 我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。假设你是李华，你从朋友mike处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在，请用英文给他写封道歉信，请求原谅。注意：1词数100左右；2开头与结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。即时训练dear mike，_yours，li huahowever, i

29、 promise that ill tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. please forgive me again and accept my sincere apology. best wishes!yours，li hua5建议信题型特点建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构。信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。篇章结构(北京高考

30、改编)你的英国朋友jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信。内容包括：1你建议的线路；2你的理由；3你的祝愿。经典考题注意：1词数100左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。审题谋篇(1)体裁：建议信；(2)时态：一般现在时；(3)人称：第一、二人称；(4)要点：建议；理由；祝愿。参考范文dear jim，im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to china. of the two trips to the yangtze river

31、 and mount tai, both are highly recommended. personally, i prefer the tour along the yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of chinese civilization. you can learn a lot about the history of china and chinese people. moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-kn

32、own sightseeing spots. thats why i think the trip along the yangtze will be a better choice. hope youll have a good time in china. yours，li hua1开头部分常用语(1) you have asked for my advice about and i will try to make some useful suggestions here. 关于你向我征求意见，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。万能句型(2) im sorry to know that y

33、ou are having trouble with/in doing at the moment. 得知此刻你遇到麻烦我深感遗憾。(3)im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how 非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何你向我征求意见。2表达建议常用语(1) here are some tips/advice/suggestions. 这里有一些建议。(2)you may/might as well do 你不妨做(3)i would like to suggest that 我想建议3结尾部分常用语(1) i

34、 believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。(2)i hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见对你来说有用/有帮助。(3) in my opinion/personally/as far as im concerned, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友jack因爸

35、爸过度饮酒而感到非常苦恼，就此请你用英语给他写一封信。主要内容包括：1表示安慰；2给出建议；3寄予希望。即时训练注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear jack，im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking. _ _best wishes! im looking forward to your reply. yours，li hua参考范文dear jack，im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drin

36、king. i can understand how you feel. as his son, its normal for you to give him your concern. however, you shouldnt become upset about it. certainly, you should try your best in your spare time to help him get rid of drinking little by little. meanwhile, you can ask some doctors and experts for more

37、 professional help. making some rules for him to follow is another way you can try. we know quitting drinking is very difficult, so you should give him time and care. i wish your father could give up drinking with your help and become healthier and happier. best wishes! im looking forward to your re

38、ply. yours，li hua 6感谢信题型特点感谢信是对收信人表示感谢的一种信件。感谢信在日常生活中的使用非常频繁，在收到别人的邀请时、受到别人的表扬时、得到别人的帮助时，通常都应该表示感谢。篇章结构(2020杭州模拟)假定你是李华。最近，你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间，你和房东mr. wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲给mr. wilson发一封电子邮件。内容包括：1表示感谢；2回顾他对你的照顾和帮助；3邀请他来中国游览。经典考题注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇(1)体裁：感谢信；(2)时态：一般过去时为主；(3)人称：第一

39、人称为主；(4)要点：表示感谢；回顾他对你的照顾和帮助；再次表示感谢，邀请到中国来。参考范文dear mr. wilson，how is everything going? im writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness. how i miss the days we spent together! thanks to your help, i got used to the lifestyle there soon. i still miss the delicious meals you prepare

40、d for me. besides, i really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me. by practising speaking with you every day, i gradually improve my spoken english. i hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future. it would be a great honor for me to invite you to com

41、e to china so that you can experience chinese culture. best wishes!yours，li hua1开头部分常用语(1) i am writing to express my thanks for 我写这封信是为了表达我对的谢意。(2) i would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for 在信中我要为向你表达我诚挚的谢意。(3)on behalf of my whole family，i would like to extend my sincere

42、 gratitude for 我谨代表我全家对表示真诚的感激。万能句型2结尾部分常用语(1)nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories；we will remember them forever. 没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。(2)again，i would like to express my warm thanks to you! /thanks again for your kind help. 我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。(3)i appreciate it more than

43、 i can say. /i can never thank you enough. 感激之情，无以言表。(2019浙江写作第一节)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1表示感谢；2回顾alex对你的帮助；3临别祝愿。即时训练注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文dear alex，im sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and im writing this email to express my grat

44、itude for your help. first of all, thank you for helping me learn english. without your help，i would not have made so great progress in english-learning. besides，what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture. i wish you all the best in the futur

45、e and have a good journey. yours，li hua7求助信题型特点写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助，因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意。当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。篇章结构(2020丽水模拟)假定你是高中生李华，你们学校要在三月十日举办英语配音比赛(dubbing contest)，你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友peter写封邮件，请他推荐。经典考题要求：1主题是关于友谊；2时间限定在4到5分钟；3每个节目最多6个角色。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇 (1)体裁：求助信；(2

46、)时态：一般现在时为主；(3)人称：第一人称为主；(4)要点：问候对方并交代写信的目的求助；说明自己遇到的具体困难想参加配音比赛，但是不知道选择哪部电影合适，所以求推荐；表示感谢和期盼之情。参考范文dear peter，how is everything going? i am writing to you, hoping to seek for help. our school will hold an english dubbing contest on march 10th. i am eager to have a try. however, i dont know which film is suitable. as a movie fan，would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations? according to the req