推荐商务英语函电教程Unit4发出要求与拒绝邀请

1、1unit fouroffers and counter-offersoffers and counter-offers2learning objectiveslearning objectivesto understand conditions than an offer and counter-offer shall possess.to understand conditions of acceptanceto learn usual steps for making an offer and a counter-offer31. offers an offer is a reply m

2、ade by a seller to the enquiry by a buyer. it has also been the practice that a seller voluntarily makes an offer to his regular customers or new customers who may have interests in his products without waiting for an enquiry. in practical international business, there are two kinds of offers: firm

3、offer non-firm offer4 a firm offer is a proposal for concluding a contract on the terms and conditions stated. firm offers are made when a seller promises to sell goods at a stated price and within a stated period of time. usually it is made by a seller upon receipt of an enquiry from a buyer. when

4、a buyer initiates an offer to a seller, it is called a bid. an offer creates a power of acceptance permitting the offeree by accepting the offer, to transform the offerors promise into a contractual obligation. thus, once it has been accepted it cannot be withdrawn. 5 a firm offer will include the f

5、ollowing: a firm offer will include the following: an expression of thanks for the enquiry, if any; name of commodities, quality, quantity, and specifications; details of prices, terms of payment, commissions, or discounts, if any; packing and date of delivery; the validity of the offer; an expressi

6、on of hope that the offer will be accepted. (optional) 62.counter-offers2.counter-offerswhen an offeree does not agree to the terms and conditions of the offer completely and he wants to amend the offer, a counter offer can be made.a counter offer is virtually a partial rejection of the original off

7、er and also a counter proposal initiated by the offeree.the offeree may show disagreement to the price, or packing, shipment and state his own terms instead.such alterations, no matter how slightly they may appear to be, signify that business has to be negotiated on a renewed basis.7the original off

8、erer or the seller now becomes the offeree and he has the full right of acceptance or refusal. in the latter case, he may make another counter offer of his own.this process can go on for many a round till business is finalized or called off.when an offeree rejects an offer, he should write to thank

9、the offerer and explain the reason for the rejection. not to do so would show a lack of courtesy.8guidelines for writingguidelines for writing1. a letter of offer or quotation a letter of offer or quotation is usually composed of the following three parts: (1). an expression of thanks for the enquir

10、y, if any; (2). details of the goods, prices, discounts or commissions, terms of payment, the time of delivery, the time period in which the offer is valid; (3). an expression of the offer will be accepted.92. a letter of counter-offer a letter of counter-offer is to be written, which should include

11、: 1. an expression of thanks for the offer; 2. reason for inability to accept the offer; 3. a counter-offer（your own idea including terms and conditions acceptable, etc.）; 4. a wish of the counter-offer will be accepted (urging the reader to accept early); 5. a wish of other business opportunities i

12、n future if necessary.103. a letter of re-counter offer a letter of re-counter offer, which should cover the following particulars: 1. an expression of thanks for a counter offer; 2. stating what shall be amended; 3. a wish of a favorable reply.11specimen letter-1 (an offer based on enquiry) shenzhe

13、n new century trading co., ltdrm 818, 3 building ease, seg science & technology park huajiang north road, shenzhen, china 518028 e-mail:h tel: 86-755-30113998 september 30, 2007the nile tradeing co., ltd161 pyramid streetalexandria.egyptdear sirs,replying to your enquiry of may 13 for a supply o

14、f our crockery, we are pleased to quote as follows:teacups 56 per hundredtea plates 40 per hundredteapot, 1-litre 3 each12these prices include packing and delivery, but crates are charged for, with an allowance for their return in good condition.we can deliver from stock and will allow you a discoun

15、t of 5%, but only on terms ordered in quantities of 500 or more. in addition, there would be a cash discount of 2% on total cost if payment were made within two months from date of invoice.we hope you will find these terms satisfactory and look forward to the pleasure of your order. yours faithfully

16、, yao da-ming 13specimen letter-2（non-firm offer）green plants co., ltd.rm. 2808 kai tak comm. centre, 317 des voeux road, central hong kong tel: 00852-63108921 e-mail: august2008foods industrial company875-9865 shireroadlondon, ukdear sirs,in reply to your letter of may 5, we have pleasure in offeri

17、ng, subject to our final confirmation. our main products are as follows:14commodity: green beans guangdong origin, 2007 crop quantity: 300 metric tonsprice: usd930 per metric ton cif londonpacking: in ordinary second-hand gunny bagsshipment: in august, 2008payment: by irrevocable l/c, payable by dra

18、ft at sight.we hope this offer will be of interest to you, and look forward to hearing from you soon. yours faithfully, rob kennedy15specimen letter-3 (a firm offer for plush bear) march 5, 2008dear mrs. celia clemens,re: plush bear item no. 1003pwe thank you for your email of march4, 2008, enquirin

19、g for the captioned goods.as requested, we offer firm, subject to your reply reaching here by march18, as follows:plush bear item no. 1003p as per sample, each in a plastic bag and then in a box, 30 boxes to a carton with white and brown equally assorted.16unit price: usd10.59 per dozen, cif singapo

20、repayment: by irrevocable letter of creditquantity: minimum order 500 dozen, maximum present capacity 1,000 dozen a month. delivery: within 30days after receipt of the relative l/c.we hope the above will be acceptable to you and await your early order.yours faithfully,paul zhou 17specimen letter-4 (

21、a counter-offer for plush bear)8 march 2008dear mr. zhou,re: plush bear item no. 1003pweve received your e-mail offer of 5th march for plush bear item no. 1003p with thanks.all the terms contained in the offer are acceptable except the price. while appreciating the quality of your commodity, we find

22、 your price on the high side. now in europe, many suppliers, mainly from asia, have come into the market with a much lower price than yours. the chief sellers, worrying about their 18market share, are again lowering their prices. such being the case, to accept your quotation would mean little profit

23、 to us.however, we would like to place a trial order with you if you could make a 8% reduction in your price. should this transaction prove to be successful, wed certainly place more substantial orders on a regular basis.we hope you will reconsider this matter and send us a new offer. yours sincerel

24、y, mrs. celia clemens 19specimen letter-5 (exporters reply to a counter-offer)march 13, 2008dear mrs. celia clemens，re: plush bear item no. 1003pthank you for your fax of march 13. we are indeed sorry that you found our price too high.actually the prices we quoted you are narrowly calculated and are

25、 very realistic. as i am sure you know, we operate in a highly competitive market in which we have been forced to cut our prices to the minimum. if it were not for the regular orders we received from a number of our customers, we could20not have quoted such low prices. we believe a fair comparison o

26、f quality between our products and those from other sources will convince you of the reasonableness of our quotation.however, in view of our future cooperation, we would exceptionally give you a 3% quantity discount if you order exceeds 8,000 dozen.we hope you will accept our proposal and look forwa

27、rd to your trial order.yours sincerely, paul zhou 21specimen letter-6 （a firm offer for velvet）july 30, 2007dear sirs,re: velvetwe are very pleased to receive your enquiry of july 28 and confirm our fax of this morning, as follows:“fifty-five pounds per thirty-six yard piece f.o.b liverpool subject

28、to your replying here within one week”. we must stress that this offer is firm for one weekonly because of the heavy demand for the limited supply of velvet in stock.22the material is of the finest quality and we can assure you that so far as quality goes you havenothing at all to fear from the simi

29、lar materials of other manufacturers either in this country or abroad. we feel sure you will realize that our quoted price is very reasonable, but we are anxious to do what we can to help you to establish your new business and are prepared to allow you a discount of 1%.if you decide to take advantag

30、e of our offer, kindly confirm your acceptance. yours faithfully, tony liu 23specimen letter-7 （a counter-offer for velvet）august 10, 2007dear sirs,re: velvetwe have received your offer dated july 30 for the captioned goods.though we appreciate the quality, the offers we have received from other suppliers are much lower than yours.we like the quality of your goods and also the way in which you have handled our enquiry and would 24welcome the opportunity to do business with you. may we suggest that you could perhaps make a 5% allowance on your quoted price that would help to introduc