BEC商务报告模板

1、例题 1 （文字题）the staff at your company were recently asked what they thought about working conditions. your line manager has asked you to write a report summarizing their opinions and suggesting possible improvements.look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.t

2、hen, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.write 120-140 words.i know your had a meeting with staff recently.canyourwritea report tellingme whatstaffthoughtaboutworkingconditions,whatchangescanbemade,andhowthecompanywill benefit from improving conditions?better productivitymeeting with

3、 employees about working conditionsstaffhadsomegoodthingstosaybuttheyalsomentioned these problems:give an examplethe need for more flexibleworking hoursexplain why neededpoor condition of some office areassay what biggest problem istoo little paid holidaysuggest a solutionsample 1report on: staff op

4、inion about working conditionsthis report aims to summarize the results of the laststaff meeting.findingsfirst, most of the employees are really satisfied with the new smoking policy. but there are also some problems.due to for children hours.the factthat many employees have tocarethey wouldrather p

5、referflexibleworkingfurthermoresomeofficeareasareinapoorcondition,most importantis that afew of them do nothave sunlight at their workplace. there is also a problemwith the payment when goingon holiday,which is tooless for our workers.conclusionin conclusion the opinions about this topic are muchbet

6、ter comparedwith last year, but there is stilla lot todo.recommendation:itissuggestedtocreateabonussystemforincreasing holiday payment and not of least to increase productivity.band 3all the content points are covered and despite a number or language errors, the message is clearly conveyed. the repo

7、rt has been organised into sections, although at times paragraphing is in need of attention.sample 2report on satisfaction-level of staff membersintroductionthis report aims to show weather our staff membersare satisfied with their working conditions or not.findingsthe recent meeting shows clearlyth

8、at our staff isquite satisfied with the working conditions. especially, alot of them have praised ourpension scheme andourchildcare vouchers.nevertheless,somecomplainedaboutunflexibleworking hours, as they have to take care of their childrenat home.apart from this, the poorconditionof some officeare

9、as was mentioned. a lot of them are dissatisfied withthe dirton the floorsand the old-fashionedcomputersystems.finally, i would suggest to increase the number ofdays off,as most members feelquite exhausted after 6months without holiday.conclusionin my opinion,we should tryto improveworkingconditions forthiswilllead to more productivityin theend.band 5all the content points have been addressed and the target reader would be fully informed. the report is effectively organised, making use of headings and dis