《写作对策教学》ppt课件

1、第一章 写作对策：1.内容能否紧扣主题，涵盖要点2.作文构造层次能否明晰3.言语表达能否流畅，无艰苦语病，有无逻辑错误4.能否能恰当的运用过渡性的词语5.作文字数能否到达要求6.卷面能否整洁，书写能否美丽第二章 高分作文捷径 第一节 黄金模板的学习 模板作文可分为三个阶段。 第一阶段：了解 第二阶段：模拟 第三阶段：活用二.高分作文秘诀 作文要想拿高分，就必需有“闪光点，也就是文章最出彩的地方。那么“闪光点终究究竟包括拿些方面呢？第一，构造 明晰的构造是最大的“闪光点。第二，词和词组 对于一样的意思，我们掌握的词或词组越多越好，这样可以根据不同的情况灵敏运用。比如某人某人持怎样样的观念，不仅可

2、以用think,还可以用hold,argue,maintain,take it for granted等词表达。论证观念不要只用first，second和third.假设是两点，可以用on the one hand,on the other hand或for one thing,for another.假设是三点，可以运用的词非常多，如to begin with,moreover,whats the most important或in the first place,in the second place,last but not least第三，句型 我们应对英语中的句子有正确的认识，防止出

3、现破句、断句、连写句等明显错误；加大并列句和复合句的比例，应为延续运用多个断句的效果非常不好。第四，例子 举例最常见的句型构造是takefor example或lets takeas an example第五，谚语与名言 用谚语时常用的句型是as the famous saying goes第六，修辞 这里所指的仅是一些修辞手法，如比喻、拟人和排比等。第七，插入语 插入语看似用不经意的手段，却能直接显出作者的功底，所以为阅卷教师所青睐。如however,in my mind,有时非限制性定语从句可以作为插入语第八，标点符号 标点符号是协助文字正确记录言语的一套符号，是书面言语不可短少的组成部分

4、。三、写作常用关键词文章不只是提供信息、陈说观念，而且还要感染他人，那么如此短的文章中一定要多处运用极强语气的词，以引起阅卷教师的留意。现举例如下：1.Most和more than most可用在描画词前面加强语气，表示“非常，比very的语气要强的多2.Undoubtedly，unquestionably，undeniably和Beyond doubt，out of question这一组词和词组语气非常斩钉截铁，非常果断。3.To some extend、generally和on the whole这一类调理观念的词使得文章在说理中显得客观、适度，防止过于偏激四、写作常用关键句型好句为他的

5、作文锦上添花1.由while引导的状语从句2.Those who句型3.倒装句4.条件状语从句5.强调句6.反问句7.结果状语从句8.退让状语从句9.notuntil10.包含never的否认句11.平行构造高分作文黄金模版批驳类模版1.批驳做法 Today more and more people.they argue this practice has several advantages.first，.second，.for example，.分两点举例阐明某些人的做法、想法。 I am afraid Icannot agree with their opinion.to begin w

6、ith,although you may feel，it doesnt mean.in the second place,.Finally,as to,.我的不同观念和第三理由；第一句批驳 From the above analysis，we may arrive at the conclusion that is not wise choice.下结论下结论My view on putting work My view on putting work until the last minuteuntil the last minute1.1.如今有些人主张将其任务留到最后来做如今有些人主张将

7、其任务留到最后来做2.2.我不赞同他们的观念，理由是我不赞同他们的观念，理由是 Today more and more people put their work until the last minute.they argue this practice has several advantages .First,the impending dealing gives them a last-minute drive，which can help them finish the job quickly.Second,if they have a lot of time to finish t

8、he job，they cannot concentrate on they project quickly because they are not pressed by me .For example，some children have some homework for his winter vacation，but they always do it in the last week. I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion .To begin with ，although you may feel anxious to finis

9、h the work when the deadline is drowning near，it does not mean you can finish your job with high quality。In the second place ，a wise man will not always leave his task until the last minute . If a person wants to be highly efficient，he should learn to divide his tasks into several small parts ，and s

10、et deadlines for each of them. Finally，as to the children finishing assignments ，I believe that they cannot enjoy themselves with their assignments unfinished. From the above analysis ，we may arrive at the conclusion that putting work until the last minute is not a wise choice.批驳类模板 批驳观念 Recently it

11、 seems that . Many people，especially the parents，think it will certainly do good to their children because . Moreover, . 某种做法与支持这种做法的观念。 After careful consideration ,I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, .on the other hand , . 从两方面进展批驳；第一句批驳。 We can see clearly that alth

12、oughmay bring favorable results，there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before . 下结论。My view on teenagers studying abroad1.如今有很多青少年出国留学2.有些人以为这种做法是有益的3.我以为这种做法是不对的 Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad

13、，there are more and more teenagers who study in high school or even elementary schools .Many people ，especially the parents，think it will certainly do good to their children because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance.moreover ，the quality of overseas education is o

14、ften higher ，thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future。 After careful consideration ，I have to say the above view is more than biased . On the other hand , early independent life is not necessarily good ，if the child cannot receive p

15、roper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand , the educational quality is also a question too many foreign universities aim at earning money . When the children come back ， who can guarantee that they adapt to the fierce competition here？ We can see clearly that a

16、lthough teenagers studying abroad may bring favorable results，there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before going abroad .批驳类模板混合类：观念批驳+方法 Nawdays there is a commonly held belief that .actually,it is not the real case . 第一句提出观念；第二句立

17、刻批驳。 On the one hand , .on the other hand , . Most important of all , . 从三方面来阐明。 We need to carry out several measures to promote .First , we should . Second ，we should . 提出两个方面的方法。Blood donationBlood donation1.1.有人以为献血有害安康有人以为献血有害安康2.2.实践情况并非如此实践情况并非如此3.3.应采取措施促进献血应采取措施促进献血 Nawdays there is a commo

18、nly held belief that donating blood will do harm to a persons health . Actually,it is not the real case . On the one hand , the small amount of blood donated in a short time. on the other hand , with the development of medical science ，it is much safer and more convenient now for people to donate bl

19、ood . Most important of all ,donating blood can help save the lives of dying patients ， which is significant to the hole society. 熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟！ We need to carry out several measures We need to carry out several measures to promote blood donation .First , we to promote blood donation .First , we s

20、hould impart medical knowledge to common should impart medical knowledge to common citizens citizens ，convincing them that blood convincing them that blood donation is not dangerous at all . Second donation is not dangerous at all . Second ，we should help people realize that helping we should help p

21、eople realize that helping others is equal to helping ourselves others is equal to helping ourselves ，not not only because it is a virtue to be ready to only because it is a virtue to be ready to help others ,but also because one day we help others ,but also because one day we will be those in need

22、of help .will be those in need of help .批驳类模板复合批驳It become a common tendency these days for people to many people are opposed to this practice because they think . They also argue that . 第一句阐明某些人的做法；第二句写有些人的反对；第三句补充阐明。In my mind , however , I cannot agree with these people on this occasion , . At th

23、e same time , . In addition , . 第一句说我不赞同这些人的看法；分三点阐明。In conclusion , . 下结论。My view on bank loan My view on bank loan 1.1.如今许多人向银行贷款如今许多人向银行贷款2.2.有些人反对这种做法有些人反对这种做法3.3.我不赞同这些人的反对意见我不赞同这些人的反对意见 It becomes a common tendency these days for people to ask for bank loans to buy a house or a private car. Ma

24、ny people are opposed to this practise because they think bank loan is equal to debt ,and they will always feel burden on their back in the coming years . They also argue that they will not buy anything before they are capable of paying it in case. In my mind , however, I cannot agree with these people on this occasion .It takes many years for common citizens to earn enough money to buy a house or a car, and a