高考短文改错公开课（课堂PPT）

1、.1Dear Tom, How are you? I miss you. Id like to introduce the layout of my school to you. Entering the campus, and you will step on the main path led through the whole campus. On the left of the crossroads is located the modern laboratory building while our splendid teaching building is in the right

2、 where we have fascinating lessons every day. At the end of the main path, the library on the left greets to you and the gym is on the opposite side. Happily, we did sports after class in the football field which is between the library and the lab building; the basketball court faces the football fi

3、eld across the main path. I love my school with students working hard to realize their dreams and teachers train us like our parents. Provided you can visit my school some day, I will show you around it. I am looking forward to hear from you. Best wishes. How to complete Proof-readingHow to complete

4、 Proof-reading 如何做改错题？如何做改错题？.3Find the wrong words and correct them.Be responsible with sb/sthBe in businessHave sth on commonMake a great progressThe accident was happenedShare sth for sbA pair of shoeA lot of equipments General speakingAs soon as possiblyforoninwithShoesequipmentGenerallypossible

5、Play a game高考英语全国卷短文改错新题型高考英语全国卷短文改错新题型 假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有共有10处处语言错误，语言错误，每句中最多有两处每句中最多有两处。错。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加增加：在：在缺词缺词处加一个漏词符号处加一个漏词符号（），），并并在此符号下面写出该加的词。在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除删除：把：把多多余的余的词词用斜线用斜线（）划掉。划掉。 修改修改：在：在错错的的词词下划

6、一横线下划一横线（） ，并在该，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许只允许修改修改10处处，多者（从第，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。处起）不计分。 Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）（圣女果）in our back garden, since then-for all these year-we had been all

7、owing tomatoes to self seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never h

8、ad any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! Whats the main trouble with Whats the main trouble with us?us?1. 对错误类型不熟悉，看不出句子有错，越对错误类型不熟悉，看不出句子有错，越 读越觉得对读越觉得对;2. 看出句子出错的地方看出句子出错的地方, 但由于词汇记忆基但由于词汇记忆基 础不扎实无法改正础不扎实无法改正;3. 知道改正句子错误的地方知道改正句子错误的地方, 但无视题目要但无视题目要 求

9、而是按照自己的习惯随意使用更正符号，求而是按照自己的习惯随意使用更正符号， 以及将更正后的单词写在规定处之外的地以及将更正后的单词写在规定处之外的地 方方。 How to correct?How to correct?.8动词形，名词数动词形，名词数,还要注意形和副还要注意形和副;非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别,代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟; A Limerick A Limerick 打油诗打油诗介词冠词常常考，介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析句子成分多分析；逻辑连词需关注逻辑连词需关注；一、动词形一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的主要包括两类错误：动词的时态时态

10、和和语态语态错误，以及错误，以及主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误。的错误。2010全国卷全国卷One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. 2011全国卷全国卷 but the only clothes I had was those I had on. 2012全国卷全国卷 but when things go wrong, I got angry. came werewent或在或在go前添加前添加did2012全国卷全国卷 When I tear apart my fi

11、fth birthday toy train, myfather said2013全国卷全国卷 I was only four when she passes away. 2013全国卷全国卷 Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles.2014全国卷全国卷 For all these years, we had been allowing tomatoesto self seed torepasseddrunkhave二、名词数二、名词数 主要指主要指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式、还包括、还包括所有格所有格、

12、可可数名词和不可数名词数名词和不可数名词的混淆等的混淆等的用法错误。的用法错误。2010he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. 2011It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. 2012I destroyed each of my toy.2013(I)He was tall, with broad shoulder.2014Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes toballslug

13、gage 不可数名词不可数名词toysshouldersyears2010 全国卷：全国卷：My friend Nick told me a story aboutwhich was interested. 2013全国卷全国卷I remember my grandfather very much. 注意注意形容词和副词形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。三、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副interestingwell2007浙江卷浙江卷I got to the finishing line first.

14、 I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 学生常见错误：学生常见错误：We should work hardly to achieve our goals.hardproud四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有_、_、 _和和_错误。错误。2010 全国卷：全国卷：On the box was a card say: “25 cents each” .2011全国卷全国卷1. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a tick

15、et to Hangzhou. 2012全国卷全国卷Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner现在分词现在分词 过去分词过去分词动名词动名词不定式不定式sayingbuyingHaving.142013全国卷全国卷She used to holding me on her knees.It is one of the funniest things finding on the Internet so far this year.学生版学生版:The big fire burned hund

16、reds of houses, made hundreds of families homeless.Li Meng came see me every day. I always make the teacher to explain my questions for more than once. tofoundholdmaking 人称代词，及其主格和宾格，物主代词的使用人称代词，及其主格和宾格，物主代词的使用2. 反身代词反身代词oneself 的使用的使用3.不定代词的使用不定代词的使用4. 关系代词，连接代词关系代词，连接代词5. Both,all,either,neither,n

17、one的使用的使用.6. Whose 和和whos， its和和 its的区别的区别五五、 代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟2010 全国卷全国卷I My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US One day . the old man living next door come by to help Without a moments delay, my neighbor pricked up the boxhis.162011 全国卷全国卷IWhen I finally arrived at my frien

18、d he .2012 全国卷全国卷II was happy when the toys worked, but whenthings went wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening 2014 全国卷全国卷IThe fruits are small in size butthere are so much that we often share them with our neigh

19、bors. manythemmywhatfriends2007陕西：陕西：Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!myself学生版：学生版：We must try ours best to overcome all difficulties to solve this particular problems.our.18 catch a sight of as the whole lose my heart 表灰心表灰心 late on in hurry by the price of 10 in Sunday aftern

20、oon in this weekend express us It is so a beautiful place! such many people My car needs wash. 主要考查固定短语、习惯搭配、习惯用法，主要考查固定短语、习惯搭配、习惯用法，其错误表现形式主要有三种：其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和惯用多词、少词和惯用法或搭配错误。法或搭配错误。aonourselvesso六、介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住六、介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住alateratsuchwashing2012 全国卷全国卷IThis made for the grow in the po

21、rcelain industry. 2013 全国卷全国卷he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play. 2. Having tea in the afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. 七、句子成分多分析七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细

22、致的分选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。析，才能找出用词不当的错误。growthwhenwhich.202014 全国卷全国卷I1. The fruits are small in size but juicy and taste. 2. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost. tastywonderful八、逻辑错误须关注八、逻辑错误须关注1. 句子的上、下文不一致，句子的上、下文不一致，张冠李戴张冠李戴，甚至相矛盾；，甚至相矛盾；2. 连词连词but， and， or和和so的用法错误属于逻辑性

23、错误；的用法错误属于逻辑性错误；3. 过渡词的误用；过渡词的误用；2010 全国卷全国卷I25 cents each pieceNick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. 2011 全国卷全国卷I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor .downand.222013 全国卷全国卷However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 2014 全国卷全国卷Although we allow

24、tomatoes to.but.ever改为改为 yet 或删或删 but其他常见错误：其他常见错误：I opened the wallet, tying to find out whose it was. Therefore, I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.However.23动词形，名词数动词形，名词数,还要注意形和副还要注意形和副;非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别,代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟; A Limerick A Limerick 打油诗打油诗介词冠词常常考，介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析句子成分多分析；逻辑连词需

25、关注逻辑连词需关注；.243 steps forproof-reading3 steps forproof-reading解题三步骤解题三步骤Go through the whole passage to get a general idea . (浏览全文，掌握大意）浏览全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）（分句阅读，逐行找错）3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct

26、the difficult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）（检查核对，攻克难点）.25四不改四不改: : 标点符号不改。标点符号不改。 大小写不改。大小写不改。 词序错误不改。词序错误不改。 在纲外生词不改。在纲外生词不改。 文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。 亲，请注意规范答题！亲，请注意规范答题！ When I was in high school , most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bic

27、ycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.实战演练实战演练.27 When I was in high school , most of my friend