初中英语作文指导

1、中学英语作文指导第一讲：句子的写作2. 案例分析例题： 你班进行了一次综合实践活动；通过活动，同学们收成很大，特别是李华同学进步最快；请你依据例题： 下面六幅图描述了十月九日星期三早晨你所经受的一件事；请依据这些图画，用英语写一篇日记；留意：1. 日记须包括全部图画的2. 词数： 100 左右；. 句子的写作1. 写作指导 - 五种基本句型（1）主语 +谓语my father smokes a lot.some are dancing, some are singing. （ 2）主语+连系动词 +表语she is an english teacher.the one in red shirt

2、 is my uncle.（3）主语 +谓语 +宾语he likes learning chinese.we all donated our pocket money.（4）主语 +谓语 +间接宾语 +直接宾语mr. wang teaches us english. i lent her my book.【留意】 并不是全部得动词都能用于此句型；除以上两词外， 能用于此句型的动词主要有两大类 : 1bring, give, sell, show, take, tell, throw, write等； 2 buy, find, get, leave, make, save, choose 等；-

3、 1 -（5）主语 +谓语 +宾语 +宾补i often ask him to help me with my homework. we chose him our monitor.练习题（一） 、请将以下词连成句子；1). walk, supper, shall, we, have, after, a . considered, friend, best.2). i,him,my,3). has, homework, he, not, done, his.4). to, work, finish, we, difficult, the, it, found.练习题（二） 、分析句子并改错；1

4、). there was no people to take care of the children.改： 2). there are a desk and two chairs in the room.改： 3). mr. wang went to bed until 12 last night.改： 4). when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.改： 5). when i get to the station the train leave.改： 6). could you tell me where shall we

5、 meet tomorrow.改： 7). watch tv too much is bad for our eyes.改： 8). though we were very tired, but we felt very happy.改： 2. 满分作文用美丽的语言描写你的学校；要求：请你用英语写一篇短文，词数80 左右；短文要求达意、正确、连贯；my schoolat the foot of the mountain there is a river. by the river there is a small school.the school has no tallbuilding.it

6、has onlyfourold houses. thoughold, itisfunnyand interesting.before the houses there is a wooden yard. students can play freely there after classes. behind thehouses there is a nut garden. when autumn comes, the nuts are in harvest. they are delicious. on the top of a house there stands a big iron bo

7、wl. do you know what it is. it is used to receive tv programs. wth its help students can know the world far away. it s amazing, isn t it.this is my school. please come and see it.3. 必备（背）词句；要求仿例仿照造句；be crazy about 发狂的喜爱 ,例句： i am really crazy about michael jacksons rock nroll.造句 give sb. a hand/give

8、 a hand to sb.帮忙某人翻译：向危难之人伸出救济之手；the 比较级 , the比较级 ,越, 越,翻译：你越努力，你进步越大；make full use of ,（充分）利用 ,翻译：我们应当充分利用水；there s no point in doing sth.做某事无意义、没必要翻译：等待毫无意义；would rather do sth. than do sth.宁愿（可）做 ,不愿做 ,翻译：我宁愿在家看电视也不愿去看电影； .- 2 -4. 实战演练：佳句仿写a) to tell you the truth, all of us were born in the year

9、 of goat.实话告知你吧，我们都是羊年诞生的；实话告知你吧，她是我们班学习最好的； .b) helen is the most beautiful girl that i have ever seen.海伦是我见过最漂亮的女孩；张老师是我遇到的最慈爱的老师； .c) reading is good for our mind.读书对我们的心智有益；做早操对我们有好处； .d) nothing is difficult to do as long as you want to have a try.只要肯尝试，任何事情都不难！只要你需要我，我就情愿伸出救济之手； .其次讲：句子的写作-简洁句

10、和复合句1. 写作指导 - 出色的简洁句2. （ 1）连词词组、 介词短语和动词固定搭配的使用：此部分keep promisein favor of as well asneithernortake time1) i she is a teacher.我和她都不是老师；2) fei junlong yang liwei are the national heroes.费俊龙和杨利伟一样也成为了人民英雄；3) she tried to explain body language.她试着通过肢体语言来说明；4) i .m his opinion.我同意他的观点；5) english studyin

11、g .学英语很花费时间；6) i must my .我得遵守诺言 / 我不能食言；. 满分作文快餐在中国很流行，但快餐对人体却没什么好处；请依据下面中文提示，以“fastfood” 为题，写一篇80 词左右得英语短文；提示：（ 1）快餐特别流行，特别是儿童很喜爱；（2）快餐受欢迎的缘由：便利convenient 、省时；既可在快餐店吃可以带家吃；（3）从养分角度讲快餐食品不利于健康；（4）建议：如时间来不及可吃快餐，但儿童应尽量少吃；要求：句子通顺，语言表达正确，可适当增加细节使内容连贯；fast food fast food is becoming more and more popular

12、 in china, especially among children. there are several reasons for the fast food. first, it is very convenient and save time. second, you can- 3 -either eat it in the restaurant or take it home. third, the service is quite good.however, eating fast food too much will do harm to our health. i think

13、fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry. it.s good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible. 必备（背）词句a) bothand和都例句： both you and i are good students.你和我都是好同学；b) eitheror 不 是 就是/或例句： . 你可以在早晨或在临睡前记单词；c) notuntil直 到 才例句： . 直到中午我们才赶到目的地（destination ）；（尝试用倒

14、装句表达）d) make progress 取得进步例句： we are eager to make progress.我们很期望取得进步；e) not onlybut also不但 而且例句： . 我不但喜爱音乐，而且仍喜爱体育；尝试用倒装句表达f) tooto太 以至于不例句： i was too excited to go to sleep.我太兴奋了以至于无法入睡；依据以下8thfinethere was a special football game today.it attracted many people. the game was between the aged team

15、and the teenagers team. the oldest player was 91 years old while the youngest was only 9. the game started at 8:30 in the morning. the aged team won the first half. the score was 3 to 2. but in the second half, they felt a bit tired. the teens were still fully of energy.the audience cheered for both

16、 teams. in the end, the teenagers team won, and the score was5 to 4. how wonderful the game was. 必备（背）词句a) as soon as一 就例句： . 一看到见她我就知道出事了/有事不对了；b) as + adj. + as possible / as manymuch+ 可数 不行数 名词 +as possible 尽可能.的 例句： .他尽可能多的问了许多问题；c) be famous for以 而闻名、闻名例句： . 我们学校以篮球著称；d) had better not do sth.最

17、好（不）做例句： . 你最好不要吃太多快餐；e) it takes sb. some time to do sth.某人做某事花了多长时间；例句： . 我花了 2 个月完成了这项调查；f) it s time for sth. / it s time for sb. to do sth.是做的时间了、该做.了 例句： it.s time for school.该上学了；- 4 - .我们该休息休息了；g) prefer to do sth.宁可、更情愿做/ prefer doing to sth.更喜爱做不喜爱做例句： i prefer to listen to some in my spar

18、e time.闲暇时间，我更情愿听听音乐； .比起游泳，我更喜爱钓鱼；h) used to do sth. 过去曾经、常做（现在不做了）例句： .以前他每天上课都迟到；-开头、主体和结尾练习一：依据背景提示编写出文章的开头；为了爱护环境，节省能源，中国政府出台了一条禁令：从2021 年 6 月 1 日起，禁止超市和商店使用超薄塑料袋；如客户有需要，需付费；请针对此禁令发表你的看法；提示词汇： ban禁令 ， stopfrom doing sth. provide, free 免费 , protect, cause.你的开头： 练习二：为以上文章编写一个的合理的结尾你的结尾： .满 分 作 文

19、after three years of staying together, you will say goodbye to your teachers soon. you must have much to say to your teachers.we want to know:r most.要求： 1 词数： 60-802. 不要显现真实的人名和校名敬重的老师，我想对你说：dear mrs. guo,i want to say ,thank you . most at the moment when i have to say goodbye to you.i really apprec

20、iate what you have done for me. i used to be too shy to speak english in front of the class. you found my problem and helped me out. i can still remember your smile on the day when i won the first prize in the english speech contest. it was you who gave me the confidence. i havea dream of going to t

21、he beijing university in the future. though it.s hard for me, i .m sure your love will encourage me to achieve.yours,tom. 必备（背）词句a) try one s best to do sth. 努力做某事例句： . 老师期望我们竭尽全力取得尽可能大的进步；b) notuntil直到为止例句： . 过去，直到10： 30 我才能去睡觉，现在我9： 30 就可以睡觉；c) in order to do sth.为了例句： . 她努力学习为了能考取北京高校；d) practice

22、 doing sth.练习做某事例句： . 你最好多练习些听力；e) get ready for sth.做预备例句： . 我在预备明天的考试；f) all kinds of各种各 样的例句： .- 5 -他喜爱各种各样的水果；g) sothat如此 以至于例句： . 瑞安市如此的可怕以至于他的书本掉到了地上；h) share sth. with sb. 与某人一起共享例句： .我很愿意与她共用一本字典；-书信、电子邮件i. 书信1. 写作指导英文书信一般由以下五部分组成：（1） 信头：即写信人的地址和写信的日期、要写在信纸的右上角；（2） 称呼：指对收信人的称呼，写在左上角，顶格写；称呼后面

23、的标点一般用逗号“，”；（3） 正文 : 信件的主体部分；写在称呼的下一行，一般由左边第三或第五个字母处开头写起；（4） 终止语 : 指正文下面的结尾客套语；位置应低于正文一、二行；一般从信纸的中间稍右写起，第一个字母大写，末尾用逗号；常用的终止语有yours sincerely, yours, sincerely yours, yours truly 等；（5） 署名 : 写在终止语的下面；练习题：圣诞节快到了，你收到了一封来自圣诞老人的信；依据来信1 学习英语的基本方法（listen car efully; speak much; read widely; learnby heart; p

24、ractise writin）；g;2 你的体会和其他建议；dear xiao ming,- 6 -i .m very glad to receive your letter. in your letter you asked me about how to learn english. now i .ll tell you something about it.i think you must listen carefully and be active in class. speak as much as possible. don.t be afraidof making mistake

25、s. you .d better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. you should practise writingoften. of course there are many other ways. you can also see english movies, learn to sing englishsongs or make pen-friendswithforeigners.they are all veryhelpful. nothing is difficult if you put your he

26、art into it. i.m sure you.ll learn english well.yours, xiao hua3. 必备（背）词句(1) it s very gladhappy to很高 兴例句： 特别兴奋收到你的来信；(2) everything goes well/everything is all right诸事顺当、诸事安好例句： 期望你那里一切都很顺当；(3) tell sb. about sth.告知某人某事例句： 信里面你问我在中国学习一事，现在我来告知你有关情形；(4) i m afraid恐 怕例句： 我唯恐得停笔了；(5) i m so sorryhappy

27、 to hear that得知 . （听到 .消息），我很伤心 兴奋 ；例句： 得知你英语考试不及格，我很伤心；(6) i m writing to此信 是为了例句： 写此信是为了感谢你对我英语学习方面的帮忙；(7) send best regards to sb. 代我问候某人例句： 请代我问候你的父母；(8) i m looking forward to sth.期盼某事例句： 2. 满分作文依据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合规律、不少于60 词的回信； 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友david的 e-mail ，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文；他想明白如何学好中文； 请你用英文

28、给他回复一封，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮忙他学好中文的愿望；（信的开头和结尾已给出，其自述不计入所完成的短文内；）提示词语：chinese, be, useful,many foreigners,learn,now, difficult,differentfrom,itis important, listen, talk, read, writedear david, i .m glad you .ll come to beijing to learn chinese. chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are l

29、earning it now. it .s difficult for you because it.s quite different from english. you have to remember as many chinese words as possible. it .s also important to do some reading and writing. you can watch tv and listen to the radio to practice your listening. do your best to talkwith people in chin

30、ese. you can learn chinese not only from books but also from people around you. if you have any questions, please ask me. i .m sure you.ll learn chinese well.hope to see you soon in beijingyours, wang ming3. 必备（背）词句- 7 -(1) receive收到例句： 你的电子邮件我已收到；(2) give advice提建议例句： 请就如何养成良好习惯给我提些建议；(3) thank sb.

31、 for sth.感谢某人做了某事例句： 特别感谢您帮我解决了这个问题；(4) invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事例句： 我写这封信是想邀请你参与我的生日聚会；(5) keepstay in touch保持联络第六讲应用文的写作-发言稿、通知. 发言稿1.写作指导(1) 称呼；顶格书写；常用的称呼有dear mr./mrs./miss. gentlemen,(2) 正文(3) 终止语1. 满分作文de, ar sir/madam,ladiesand假设你将代表你校2021 届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿内2. 发言稿必需包括全部要点，不要逐词

32、翻译，可适当发挥；3. 不得使用注视人名、校名等相关信息；good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates,it is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2021.it has been threes years for us to study in this beautiful school. our teachers always try to make their less

33、ons lively and interesting. we have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers. efforts, our parents. supports and our classmates. help. at this moment, i would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.i wish our school more beautiful and all of us

34、 a wonderful future.goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends. thank you for listening.3. 必备（背）词句第一 总而言之 简洁地说 只要 女士们，先生们 请留意 . 通知1. 满分作文天津市 2006 中考请你以学校同学会主席的身份，写一份有关即将在本校举办2006 年英语夏令营的书面通知，内容- 8 -2意思连贯、语言通顺、防止逐条翻译；3开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数；参考词汇：做演讲make a speech give a lecture 辩 论 have

35、 a debate dear students,the english summer camp willbe held in the school hallfrom july29 to august1. many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in.during the camp, you can give a lecture and have a debate. beside, the students who do well inenglish study will talk about their experienc

36、e. there is also an english party between teachers and students. in the end, you.ll have a chance to visit the city of tianjin.everyone is welcome to take an active part in it. don .t forget to tell us what you think of thecamp in your diary. students. union june 6, 2006 2满分作文每个人都有自己喜爱的老师和同学，你们班将以 .

37、my favorite teacher/ classmate. 为题， 举办英语主题班会，请你写一篇英语班会的发言稿；留意：1. 从所给的两个题目中任选一个；2. 短文必需包括题目要求要点，使用表格中的词语，适当发挥；3. 词数：不少于60；my favorite teachermy favorite classmate(a) my favorite teachermiss li is my favorite teacher. she is neither tall nor short. she is not only patient but also helpful. do you know

38、 why i love her so much.i love herbecause she loves teaching and treats us as her friends. andher class is so livelyand interesting that we can enjoy ourselves in her class. although she is busy, she always finds time talking with us. we are proud of being her student.(b) my favorite classmatei have

39、 a good classmate called sally. she is good looking and short. she is a hardworking girl. sheis never late for school. in class she always listens carefully. she is active in class and does her homework carefully after class.she is good at english. so she spends a lot of time helping me withm y engl

40、ish. she is very friendly to others. whenever you are in trouble, she always helps you. so everyone in our classlikes her.(1) she has a good sense of humor.- 9 -(2) she cares about all our classmates.(3) he likes laughing at others.(4) my mother is a kind and gentle woman.诞生年龄：十五岁的男孩 十一岁的女孩 在, 几岁时 诞

41、生于 , 在某人五十多岁时 (1) 我诞生在冬天，生日是十一月十一日；(2) 我奶奶 70 多岁了，一头灰白的头发；叙事2满分作文依据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合规律、不少于60 词的短文；所给英文提示词语供选用；请不要写出你的校名和姓名；汶川地震（ wenchuan earthquake）发生后， 9 岁同学林浩（ linhao）救了两名同学，然后 步行 7 个小时到达安全地点；请 你 就 林 浩 同 学 的 事 迹 ， 以 “learn fromthehero”为 题 ， 给 你 校 英 语 专 刊 投 稿 ；learn from the herolin hao is a s

42、tudent. he is only nine years old. after wenchuan earthquake happened, he saved two of his classmates. then he walked for seven hours to safety.i was deeply moved by his story. i think he is a brave boy. he did his best when he faced great danger. i should learn from him. i will think of others firs

43、t and help then as much as possible. i will never give up when i face any difficulties.3.必备（背）词句去野餐 聚会 去野营 骑马 漫步 动身 去钓鱼 放风筝 购物 看病 帮 助 某 人 做 , 很 明 显 thanksto luckily as a result because /because of at last/in the end 第八讲：说明文. 满分作文it is clear that, 依据以下有关alan brown个人情形的介绍， 以 alan brown为题，写一篇介绍他的短文；要求：

44、（ 1）运用第三人称；（2）所给信息必需全部使用；（3）语句通顺连贯；（4）可以适当扩展；（5）不少于- 10 -alan brown alan brown is a 16-year-old boy. he is an australian high school student. he lives at 69 park road,sydney. art and music are his favorite subjects.he loves studying and sports. he usually goes swimming three or four times every week

45、. and he often walks after supper every day. cool water and clean air always makes him happy. australian students are differentfrom our chinese students. on saturdays, he usually has parties with his friends and they always enjoy themselves. on sunday, he usually stays at home and watches tv.例句： .第一

46、，请仔细阅读指令；2. secondly / then / next其次、然后、之后例句： secondly, he looked down on other people. ；3. in the end / finally / eventually / at last最终、最终、最终例句： . 他们最终让步了；4. last but not least最终但并非最不重要的例句： last but not least, we must thank our host for his hospitality.在的北部例句： . 北京位于中国的北部；有 .例句： . 教室前有块大黑板；be loca

47、ted /be situated in/on/at a place位于例句： . 广东位于中国南部；the city is located on the eastern coast of the united states. .2. 事物说明什么东西长,宽例句： . 这座桥 20 米长， 10 米宽；由做成例句： . 这是由金属和塑料制成的；3. 表述方式、方法的说明文y to do sth. 做很简洁例句： ：- 11 -first, next, then, finally假如你按以下步骤做橙汁，那会很简洁：第一，接下来，然后，最终；做的方法不止一个例句： ：.使我们保持健康有许多方法；：每

48、天（周、月）多少次例句： . 每天服药三次；4. 事理说明在方面起着重要的作用例句： . 学校在社会中起着重要的作用；理由是例句： . 理由是它能帮我们学习更多学问；第九讲：谈论文练习题：以 “play 玩 ”为主题，依据不同的要求完成任务：要求 1：仔细考虑考虑， 写出两种人们对“play ”的 不同看法， 并各给出一个支持论据；opinion 1: .supporting point: opinion 2:. supporting point: 要求 2：对于 “play 玩 ”，你同意以上哪种看法？为什么？请给出2 个理由；youropinion: .supporting points:

49、 . 满分作文你从报上得知为了防止非典病毒传播，有些省市实行措施，对随地吐痰的人处以重罚；请你就此事用英文给某报纸的编辑写一封信，简要谈谈你的看法；信的开头及结尾署名已给出，不要再另行署名；词数为50 60 （不包括已给出的部分）；信的内容要点如下：1. 随地吐痰的危害性（如传播疾病，有害健康，污染环境等）；2. 你对转变随地吐痰这一陋俗的建议（如加强训练，处以罚款等）；3. 你对改善环境的期望（如期望人人都关怀爱惜环境，使城市更加漂亮等）；提示词语： spread v. & n.传播， do harm to/ be harmful to educate v. 训练， prot

50、ect the environment爱护环境dear editor ，对有害，i am a middle school student. i .ve just read some articles on spitting problem in newspapers. they say that in order to prevent the spread ofsarsvirus （防治非典病毒的传播）some local governments have made a decision ： if someone spits in a public place，he or she will b

51、e fined heavily（从重罚款） . i quite agree with this decision.yours sincerely ， wang nan- 12 -dear editor ，i am a middle school student. i .ve just read some articles on spitting problem in newspapers. they say that in order to prevent the spread of sarsvirus（防治非典病毒的传播）some local governments have made a

52、decision ： if someone spits in a public place，he or she will be fined heavily（从重罚款） . i quite agree with this decision.it .s a bad habit to spit on the ground. it carries and spreads diseases，pollutes our environment and does harm to our health. it is very important to protect the environment. we sh

53、ould educate the public to change their bad habits and punish those who spit in public places. if all the people careabout （ take care of / protect） the environment ， our city will become more beautiful.yours sincerely ， wang nan1. because / because of 由于、由于例句： she is absent because of illness. ；2. the reason is that理由 /原 因是、由于例句： . 缘由是他已经养成了一个摸索的好习惯；3. so that 以致、以便例句： during the earthquake their house fell with a crash, .地震时，他们的房子哗啦一声倒塌了，所以他们必需要找一个新的