北京高考英语作文备考资料终极版本

1、高考作文备考最终资料终极版本1图画式作文图画式英语作文的写作步骤 审文字要求审内容审文体审时态审人称审字数要求等 审图肯定要留意认真观看每幅图画所描画的情形看懂图画内容懂得画面意思 列出要点和细节列要点一般组图的英语作文一幅图要有1 个要点历年高考图画式作文大都具备 4 个以上的要点列细节有的图可以粗描有的图需要细写一般一幅图可以有一个细节也可以有多个细节 列过渡词使图与图之间内容过渡自然脉络清楚层次分明 扩点成句组句成文依据以上所列要点和细节扩点成句扩句时考生要留意图画所给的时间背景正确使用人称时态和语态然后组句成文组句成文时考生要留意适当地使用一些过渡词使意思连贯行文流畅 结尾在文章结尾时

2、适时适当地使用一些表示情感因素的句式如活动后的感想书信结尾的客套话等等可使文章结尾很出色显得自然得体 审文字要求1 文体2 审人称3 审时态4 审文字 审图审要点细节见下文外语下载中心 httpcom校内生活话题开学典礼感谢师恩竞选班长老师摔跤人际关系等校外活动话题理想者服务助人为乐类登山远足旅行生存体验类植树类参观记录展现类3提纲要点式或提纲表格式作文1 提纲要点式作文特点把材料分割成信息块列成独立的文字信息此类试题中有较多的文字说明实际上规定了考生表述的思路对考生的写作范畴作了较为明确的限定试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避由于这类试题包括较多的文字说明简单使作文变成了翻译因而应敏捷运用英语学

3、问采纳不同的表达方式将试题要求的要点完整地表述出来力求精确简洁礼貌规范姓名李华性 别 男年龄 16年级高一爱好摄影写作户外运动其他活泼开朗精力充足曾获北京市摄影竞赛青少年组二等奖应聘目的参与社会实践活动丰富业余生活dearharryimwritingtoapplyforthephotographerforoursteps iamlookingforward tohearingfromyouyourssincerelyli huaimlihuaaboyofsixteenpresentlyinmyfirstyear ofhighschoolimoutgoingandenergeticim inte

4、rested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life last year iwonthe second prizeinyouth group at beijingphotography competition besides im good at writing whichmightbehelpfulfortheworktakingpartinall kindsofoutdooractivitiesis alsooneofmyhobbiesiwouldliketoworkfor

5、ourstepssinceitwouldbeagreat opportunity forme to join insocial activities andenrichmylife同学作文 15分 im writingto applyforthe photographerforour stepsmy name is li hua a 16-year-old boywho studyin senior one since my enthusiasm is totally lit up byyour advertisements andwhat im good at meetyour requir

6、ementsidliketointroducemyselfim keen on photography and my eyes are sharp enough to catchevery little beauty in life writing is also my hobby and outdoor activities appeal to me so much for it allows meto get some fresh air and strengthen my body as you can infer from above im a boy who is always ac

7、tiveoutgoing andenergetic it mustbe mentionedthat i oncewon a second prize in the photographing competitionheld in beijing among teenagers i have longed for anactivity that enables me to take part in social practice andenrich my after-class life as i have passion and confidence to the fantastic job

8、i eagerly hope that i have thechancetomakeit第一篇作文主要考查考生依据写作任务的要求进行英语书面表达的才能1 依据不同文体使用恰当的语言形式完成书面交际任务2运用恰当的句式词汇和语法表达描述表达观点和态度3做到文章扣题内容充实结构完整规律性强语义连贯评分原就1对内容要点的要求要严格2对细节的要求可以宽泛3语言质量是打算档次的依据之一先依据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次然后以该档次的要求来衡量确定或调整档次最终给分应考虑内容要点细节支撑语言质量词汇和句式的多样性及语言的精确性规律合理上下文的连贯内容全面四个要点都有正确表述并且有必要的过渡语言和适当

9、的细节支撑语言流畅定为其次档15-17分依据语言质量打算是否升档或降档请参考 possibleversion外语下载中心 httpcom漏写一个要点定为第四档6-11 分依据语言质量打算是否加1 分或降档漏写两个要点定为第五档 1-5分漏写一个细节降一档时态人称的使用得当与否视为判定语言质量高低的依据规律不通相应降一档开放作文12007-20xx年北京高考皆为看图写一篇谈论文从近年高考英语书面表达命题趋势来看新课标地区书面表达有从掌握性向开放性过过渡的趋势山东湖南等地的书面表达趋向于半开放北京上海等始终有开放作文2 自由发挥和相像的空间大对考生的语言才能提出了更高的要求1 立意提出论点thev

10、ivid pictureistryingto conveytous a messagethat what the picture attempts to tell us isthat2 描图aswecanseefromthepicturefrom thepicturewecanseethat一个什么样的事物在以一种什么样的状态做什么样的事情while另一个什么样的事物在以一种什么样的状态做什么样的事情造成了什么样的结果描图篇幅一般不超过13第三人称一般现在时现在进行时描图时不加入个人观点描图时做到内容充实详细形象生动有的放矢中心突出3 带 图 议 论asindicatedinthepictur

11、eifthemaniswillingto lookforotherpossibilities hecanfind abetterand more rewardingway toachievehisgoalallhe has todo istoturn around cross the bridge and walk to thetree frommy point ofview this picture reflects aphenomenon in our life that parents often offer their children外语下载中心 httpcomtoo much pr

12、otection which does harm to their growth just like themother cactus in the picture although it triesitsbesttocareforitsbaby themother cactusfailstorealizethat sunshine is exactly what the little cactus needsand is a vital factor to its growth the shade it offers in fact is what prevents the baby cac

13、tus from growinghealthily4 谈论from my pointof viewthis picture reflects a phenomenon in our life that parents often offer their children toomuchprotectionwhich does harm totheir growthjustlikethemother cactus in the picture although it tries itsbest to care for its baby the mother cactus fails to rea

14、lize that sunshine is exactly what the little cactus needs andisavitalfactortoitsgrowththeshadeitoffersinfactiswhatpreventsthebabycactusfromgrowinghealthilyit is the same in our life chances are that parents tend to serve as a protective umbrella which helps the childrendefend any harmfulfactorsjust

15、likedifficultiesinlifewith parents solving every problem for us we in turnlackthe abilitytofacea difficultsituationbravelyletalone find a way out on our own this lack of abilityundoubtedly prevents us from forming an independent personality and surely affects our growth whats worsewhen we came torea

16、lizethefactitisoftentoolateand parentscan do nothing to help us just as the pictureshows5 升华inconclusionparentsshouldntprovidetoomuchprotectionto theirchildren or they will end up wearing aworriedlookseeingtheirbadlygrow childrenjustlikethemother cactussosometimesparentsshouldlearntoletgoandgivethes

17、mall cactusachancetotrulyfacethesun工具方法挑选类意志品质类克服困难类目标类团队合作共享类创新类人生态度类仿照类外语下载中心 httpcom其次篇作文评分标准describethepicture-描述图片三分之一篇幅explainhowyou understandit-对于图片的懂得和自己的观点三分之二篇幅语言与交际语言是否精确交际是否得体1 句式的多样性定语从句非谓语强调倒装句以及高级词汇的使用自然流畅2 不只看单句要看前后句的连贯性和规律3 得体 前后语言风格词汇层次同学的表达语境在英语口语课上的发言开 放 作 文 评 分 细 就 逻 辑 不 合 理 定

18、为 第 三 档4-8分 根 据 语 言 质 量打算档内高中低分段只有描图最高得5分 3分文语言错误较多严峻影响了对写作内容的懂得仅写了少量的相关信息 2 分文仅个别句子可读有少量的相关信息1 分文仅写了一两个相关单词立意折射出什么生活现象给人以什么启示在符合普遍价值观的前提下没有不行接受的立意只有不合理的规律20xx年北京高考英语例文2021 北京开放作文2021 北京开放作文22001122北北京京开开放放作作文文1313得分分得分分1133得得分分分分asisvividlyshowninthepicturethemanissparingnoeffortstoreachforthefrui

19、tswithalongnetneglectingabridgenearby hardashestryingallhiseffort seems invainaccordingtomyunderstandingwhatthepictureintendstomirrortousisthesigni ficanceoffindingthebestpossiblemethodwhatgettingthefruitsistothemanisexactlywhata chievinggoalsistousratherthanjuststeppingforwardwithoutconsiderationit

20、sacquiringacle arunderstandingofthepresentsituationfirstthatistopontheagendaonlyifallthewaysleadingtoourdes tinationareclearlyrealizedcanwefurtherchoosethebestoneandreachforourdreamwithleastmeaningle sseffortwheneverfacedwithadilemmablindlyfightingwillnodoubtleadtoawasteofenergyandwisd om whilechoos

21、ingthebestmethodbeforeactingcanensureabetterresultthereisnodenyingthattryinghardalsoworkshoweverwhynottakeaturnandfollo waeasierwaytoavoidunnecessarypainsthereforealwaysthinktwiceandchoosethebestmethodbeforesetoutforabrightfuture2021 北京情形作文2021 北京情形作文22001122北北京京情情形景作作文文得分 17 分得分 17 分得得分分 1177 分分las

22、tfridayanaccidenthadhappenedsuddenlyinourclasswhilewewerehavingane nglishclassattentivelyourteachermissedastepandfelltothegroundoneofmy classmatesshoutedwatch thestepbutitstoolatewithoutanydelayourmonitorandtwootherstudentscarriedh ertotheschoolclinictoourgreatrelieftheproblemwasntserioussincewewere

23、alllovedourteacher allofmyclassmateswenttoseeourteacherafterclasswithsomebeautifulflowerswechattedhappily andweallhopedthatourteacherwillsoonbeallrightafterafewweeksinthehospitalourteacherfin allycamebackonawheelchairweclappedourhandsandgaveherawarmwelcomeseeingtheteacher weallhadascienceofhappiness

24、whataunitedclassweare1919得分分得分分1199得得分分分分webelieveinthephilosophythatofferingothershelpmakesourselveshappyonedaywhenourmathteacherwasgivingalessonshesuddenlylostherbalanceandw ithherhighheelsbrokenbytheedgeshefelldownandhurtherlegseveryonewasastonishe datthattimehoweverwequicklycalmedourselvesdownan

25、dswiftlycarriedhertothecliniconthew ayweaskedanxiouslywhetherithurtalotandtoldhernottomovehavingbeendiagnosedasseverebonehurtshehadtostayinhospitalforweeksinordertoceaseherfeelingoflonelinessweplannedavis ittoherseveraldayslatertherewe sentherflowerswishedheraquickrecoverysomeheldherhandsand deliver

26、edourcareforherwhileotherspromisedtostudyhardwechattedhappilyandisawhertearsofsa tisfactionandpleasure外语下载中心 httpcomyesterdaywasthebigdayourteacherreturnedhome fromthehospitalseeinghersmilingfaceweclappedourhandstogiveherawarmwelcomeshethough sittinginawheelchairsharedherpleasantsmilelike anangleasi

27、fshewasexpressingherthanksagainisawtearsshinninginhereyes-theywerethesymbolsofhappinessratherthanfriendlinessthiswasjustasimplethinginourschoollifebutsthmeaningfulourteachersneve rfailtoofferustheirmeticulouscaresowhentheyneedhelpitsourdutyaswellashonortolen dahelpinghandinthisway wecancreateaharmon

28、ioust-srelationship20xx年各区一二模范文集合20xx年海淀一模范文lastfridaymyclasstookpartinameaningful andchallengingcourseoutwardboundearlyinthe morning we got toan outward bound centreon our school bus upon arrival we weredivided into several groups and our coach introduced the course to us shortly afterwards we got

29、involved invarious activities one of them was jumping across a broken bridge i was afraid at first but with theencouragement of the coach i finally made it what impressed me most was climbing over a wall to escapewehelped one anotherand allofus managedtosurvivebeforewe left the centre we had a photo

30、 taken torecord the unforgettable experience which gave us a good chance to build up courage and improve our sense ofteamwork精品范文i always believe that it is through an outside activities rather than text books that we get a bettercomprehensionaboutsomethinginsidesuchasfriendshipcourageandcooper atio

31、nlast friday we were organized to take part in an outward bound with great enthusiasm we arrived at theoutward bound institution early in the morning by schoolbusthe instructor divided us into groups and gave ussomeinstructionsso thatwe couldexperiencea more excitingday no sooner had we stepped into

32、 the gate didwe starttotryforthe firstprogram inwhich everyone was requested to jump through a break in the high placewith the help of the instructor each of us did well even a classmate who was afraid of high places created amiracleforhimselfhaving experiencedthethrillingactivityitwas the escaping

33、wall activity that taught mehow great power the cooperation had it could be impossible for oneof us to get over the wall but with theeffortsfrom everyonehard as itmight we eventuallygotthroughthe huge obstacle when finishing all theactivitiesitwas alreadyeveningin frontofthe gate we sat together wit

34、h awards for courage and cooperation inourhandsandthenwetookthemeaningful sceneintoaphotothatwouldbetreasured byallofusforeverthereisan sayingthatdividedthereislittlewe can do united there is little we cannot do the experienceof the outward bound gives us an explanation that cannot be better for the

35、se words needless to say thememorableactivitywill flashinourmindsforthefriendshipcourageandcooperationit contains海淀一模开放作文范文inthepictureaman onaboatissearchingforsome fishwitha telescopehoweverhis efforts donot payoff forthenetisstillemptyamusinglyaschooloffishisswimmingjust nearbybuthecompletelyigno

36、res themwhat the picture conveys is that we should never aim too high neglecting the readily attainable goal if theman stoppedfocusing onthe distant waters andlooked around the fish nearthe boatwould bean easyharvest forhim in our dailylifewe oftenmakethe samemistakewetend to believe that the higher

37、 our goal is the biggersuccess we willachievewithoutrealizingthesimpletruththatsome preciouschances aroundus might slip awayactuallyourworkwill bemorefruitful ifwe aremorepractical 136词in the picture a man on a boat is searching for some fish with a telescope however his efforts do not pay外语下载中心 htt

38、pcomoffforthe netisstillempty amusingly a schoolof fishisswimming just nearby but he completely ignoresthemwhat the picture conveys is that we should never aim too high neglecting the readily attainable goal if theman stoppedfocusing onthe distant waters andlooked around the fish nearthe boatwould b

39、ean easyharvest forhim this is not uncommon in our daily life when we aim to build one ridiculously large project we completenothingwhenweaimforasmallgoalwecompleteitletsbemorepractical118词西城一模情形作文for twoyearsmyfamily hasbeensupportingxiaomingaboyfromapoorfamilylast weekend my father and i went to v

40、isit him again early in the morning we set off and soon we were on acountry road i paid little attention to the scenery on the way for my mind was already there with xiao mingafter a two-hour drive we arrived at xiao mings homeat that moment xiao ming was working in the gardenwhile his grandfather w

41、as sitting in the sun we were excited to see each other immediately they invited us torestintheirhouse once insidewe gave him somebooks and a schoolbag grateful and moved xiao mingshowed us his excellent school work which impressed us greatly we talked so happily that we didnt realize itwas time to

42、leave xiao ming and his grandfather saw us off at the village entrance and we waved goodbye tothem promising tocome backagainireallyfeelhappyaboutwhatwedidthat daybyhelpingothersweourselvesactuallygain alot邹津波14分fortwoyearsmyfamilyhasbeensupportingxiaoming aboyfromapoorfamilylast week my father and

43、i paid a visit to xiao ming in order to know more about him and his daily lifeafter atwo-hour drive along the mountain roads we finally arrived at xiao mings house which is located in a poorvillage onpullingup ourcarwe caught sight of xiao ming instantly howeverhe was busy planting vegetablesand did

44、ntnoticeus untilhisgrandmothersittingbesidenotifiedhim of our arrival we greeted each other andthen followed him into the house where he lived although it was asimple place i could tell from his tidy deskandallhiscertificatesonthewall thatxiaomingmustbeahardworkingstudentaswellasafilial grandsonknow

45、ing that he was under financial burden and might not be able to afford much we gave him a new schoolbagand some books he saidhis gratitude towards us was beyond words and showed us an exam paper which hegot full mark on and told us he wouldnt let us down seeing the determination in his eyes i was de

46、eply touchedby hispositiveattitudeaftera pleasantconversationitwas time for us to leave xiao ming and his grandmotherwaved goodbye to us and invited us to visit them again in the future i knew i would because i wanted to learnmorefromhim hedoesnthavealotofmoneybutheis richatheart开放作文in the picture w

47、e can see two turnips one with small leaves and the other with large ones naturally we mayexpecttheturnipwithlargerleavestohaveabiggerroot howeveraccording to the picture the bigger the leavesabovethegroundarethesmallertherootundergroundisquite ironicisntiti think the picture reveals this truth we s

48、hould never judge things simply by their physical appearance as amatter offactin ourdaily life thereexist manysmall turnips with big leavesafter a pleasant conversation itwas time forus toleave xiao mingand hisgrandmother waved goodbye to us and invited us to visit them againin the future i knew i w

49、ould because i wanted to learn more from him he doesnt have a lot of money but he isrichatheartin the picture we can see two turnips one with small leaves and the other with large ones naturally we mayexpecttheturnipwithlargerleavestohaveabiggerroot howeveraccording to the picture the bigger the lea

50、vesabove the ground are the smallertherootunderground isquiteironic isnt iti think the picture revealsthis truth we should never judge things simply by their physical appearanceas a matter of fact in our daily life外语下载中心 httpcomthereexistmany smallturnipswithbigleavesfor example a present wrappedin

51、a delicate box turns out to beofpoor qualityora girlwitha beautifulfaceactsrudelyinpublic places therefore lets learn not to be misledby largeleavesrememberitisrootssomethinginsidebut notleaves outside appearance that reallymatters邹 津 波12分inthepicturewecanseetwoturnipstheoneontheleft hassmall leavesbut alarge rootwhile theotheronehas bigleaveswitha smallerrootaswe cantsee throughthe ground wetendto judge fromthe leavesbeyond the earth and think the turnip on the right is more fruitful however we all know it is the root of a turnipthatmattersth